Dragon Dancing... Electivire?
An Offensive OU team, by MistaBurp
---------- Introduction ----------
To start of with... Hi Smogon! It's been a wile since I've posted my last team, and I was kinda getting tired of it anyway, so I've desited to build myself a brand new team. Lately, I'm beginning to get verry interested at more offensively orientated teams, as for me, I normally play Balanced, because it's the only decent way I can build a team. But if you never try something else you'll never know.
Stall was something I just don't wanna try, it takes the fun out of the game. My boxes are full with Balanced teams, but for me they just can't be balanced enough. I always think, what if... So playing Offensive would just keep me from doing that. Basicly because I wanna take control of the game.
---------- About this team ----------
I've just been testing it on Shoddy (I really hate Shoddy though, I always play bad on Shoddy), and I was like, I'm gonna play until I lose. And I got to play seven games, and that was kinda rewarding. And basicly, if I kept my attention I would have been able to win that seventh battle.
I think the team is kinda ok, but because it's the first time I go offense all the way, rates, hints, tips, fixes,... are always welcome, in general about building offensive teams, but also in detail about the sets...
---------- The team ----------
Adamant Metagross @ Lum Berry
252 HP / 236 Atk / 8 Def / 12 Spe
- Stealth Rock
- Explosion
- Bullet Punch
- Meteor Mash
Why Metagross?
This was the last Pokémon I picked for this team. Metagross lead is just awesome. It has the power and the typing to use in late game, and it is one of the better leads in my oppinion. Basicly this thing lures for two kind of attacks. Fire and Ground, and that is just what I wanted. If I smell Fire I go to Heatran, if I smell Ground I go to Gengar.
Some explenation work about this set:
I've changed the EV's from this set. 12 Speed in stead of 8 to outspeed all opposong Metagross Leads. I had to choose something to pick of those 4 EV's, and Defense seemed rather useless... I've picked Meteor Mash over Explosion, because I feel like that gives me better chances against most common leads. I've also tried Explosion, but as I've never got to use that move, it seems rather useless to keep that.
Synergy:
Fire: Heatran, Gyarados
Ground: Gengar, Shaymin, Gyarados
Metagross against the most common leads:
Meteor Mash should take this Pixie to BP knock-out range, has the choice between Taunting me, setting up SR or don't take me out with a FB.
I will always set-up my Rocks first. Then it's basicly a Switch to Gengar, who is immune to both Explosion and Earthquake.
First turn always alows me to set up my rocks. The second turn I'll switch to Shaymin, allowing me to OHKO this thing unless he switches out, or just Exploding in his face.
Again, SR on the first turn. If I get tricked a Scarf, that's ok, otherwise, this thing has nothing to hurt me.
Two Bullet Punches should do it. If I don't get Taunted the first turn I just might set up my Rocks on the second turn.
I don't fear the Fire-type move, so I'll go for Stealth Rock on the first turn (second if he goes for Fake Out), then I'll get to switch to Gyarados and maybe set-up early on.
With the Lum Berry, this thing fears me more than I fear him. Set up the Rocks and kill this thing off.
Kinda strange match up. SR on the first turn, and then, if he also used SR, I'll switch into Heatran to take the Fire Blast.
Tyranitar is the best match up I can have. Always SR up, and most of the time a KO or switch advantage.
Pretty bad match up. Best thing I can do is Explode, or go into Gengar.
Modest Gengar @ Choice Scarf
4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power: Ice
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast
Why Gengar?
This thing is basicly here to take care of DDers. Awesome Revenge killer. And to be honest, he's just one of my favorite Pokémon ever.
Some explenation work about this set:
Well, as I've used the Standard Gengar alot, and as I have faced alot of Gengars, this set is unexpected. Dragon Dancers will fear this thing and will be caught by surprise. I feel like this Pokémon doesn't really add something to my team, but nor does he really need to be replaced.
Synergy:
Dark: Heatran
Ghost: Heatran
Psychic: Metagross, Heatran
Timid Heatran @ Leftovers
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Fire Blast
- Earth Power
- Subsitute
- Toxic
Why Heatran:
Heatran can be saw as the glue for this team. Scouts out for Bulky waters to threaten Gyarados, will always be switched out upon, so gets up a free subsitute, that might be usefull to Toxic Vaporeon and Suicune switch in, and opens the gate for Gyarados (luring for a Ground or Fighting attack).
Some explenation work about this set:
This is just the best Heatran set there is. As I don't mind the opponent switching out (always allows me to get up a sub), because a switch out is basicly what I want to happen.
Synergy:
Fighting: Gengar, Gyarados
Ground: Gengar, Shaymin, Gyarados
Modest Shaymin @ Choice Specs
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Seed Flare
- Hidden Power: Fire
- Earth Power
- Rest
Why Shaymin (and not Celebi)?
Well, why the hell isn't this thing OU? I was a little sceptic about this one, but goddamnit, this thing is so powerfull and usefull to this team. Basicly, I didn't wanna get Pursuited to death, and I wanted to kill Bulky Waters, without showing I have Electivire in my team. Seed Flare is just pure epicness, as it does even great amount of damage (about 30% I think) to Scizor. Also, Shaymin is just a verry nice status adsorber, something I really like (cuz Burn can really hurt Electivire and Gyarados).
Some explenation work about this set:
The Specs really makes this thing a mean (lol) killing machine. Seed Flare is really epic, as it does so much damage combined with great accuracy and no stat lowering changes to Celebi! HP: Fire is for opposing Grass types, and mainly Scizor. Earth Power just improves coverage. And Rest + Natural Cure is awesone
Synergy:
Bug: Gengar, Heatran, Gyarados
Fire: Heatran, Gyarados
Ice: Metagross, Heatran
Jolly Gyarados @ Leftovers
252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Ice Fang
- Waterfall
Why Gyarados?
Well, when building this team, I was thinking about the almost forgotten Electivire. Who is easy to set up, by luring for an Electric Attack, and who is better at luring for that, then Gyarados? Well yea, no one. Basicly, this wil happen: I get to send in Gyarados verry early in the game and scout of his counter (bulky waters and electrics), and if he has neither of them, I can sweep with Gyarados, if he has bulky waters Shaymin takes care of that, and if he has Electrics, Electivire will happily switch in. The second scenario contains some more scouting (most of the time this depends on the opponents lead), eliminating threats by using the rest of my team, and then sweep with Gyarados or Electivire (if he still has an Electric left).
Some explenation work about this set:
Switches in on something that is doomed to switch out facing Gyarados, and then DD's and looks what needs to be done (switching to Electivire or Shaymin, or sweep of its own). The Jolly nature I use to outspeed Max Speed Jolteon without a Scarf. I picked Stone Edge over Ice Fang, because Heatran and Shaymin, and even Electivire have Ice Attacks.
Synergy:
Electric: Shaymin, Electivire
Rock: Metagross
Mild Electivire @ Expert Belt
36 Atk / 252 SpA / 220 Spe
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power: Ice
- Cross Chop
- Flamethrower
Why Electivire:
Well, he is to underestimated. Acceptable Speed combined with Good Attack, and an ability that increases his Speed if executed correctly. Most of the time, my opponent doesn't even get to see him, because the rest of the team does his job fairly well. But when he is played correctly, you'll fear him!
Some explenation work about this set:
Well, to start of with, Expert Belt extends my possible sweep, and this moveset can deal Super Effective Damage to most of the Pokémon in the overused tier (underused probably as well). The EV's and Nature speak for themself. The same with the moveset.
Synergy:
Ground: Gengar, Shaymin, Gyarados
---------- Afterword ----------
I feel like this team really has potential, but I do wanna mention certain things.
Ground weakness:
You will most likely have noticed I have 3 ground weak Pokémon. I'm aware of that as well, but I think Gyarados and Gengar, and even Shaymin provide well enough coverage.
Certain Pokémon weakness:
The odds are there that my team has a weakness to a certain Pokémon, for example SD Luke (although I don't think thats true, it's just an example). Please note that I wanna be in control of the game, and I wanna be my oponent one step ahead. But then again, you may surely suggest an alternative that will undo this weakness.
Metagross vs. Heatran lead:
I was really doubting between a Metagross and a Heatran lead. But I think Metagross is beter.
Questions from me:
How would you descibe this team: Offensive, Bulky Offensive, All Out Offensive (, Stall, Defensive,...)?
Comment, Fix, Rate, Steal,...
An Offensive OU team, by MistaBurp
---------- Introduction ----------
To start of with... Hi Smogon! It's been a wile since I've posted my last team, and I was kinda getting tired of it anyway, so I've desited to build myself a brand new team. Lately, I'm beginning to get verry interested at more offensively orientated teams, as for me, I normally play Balanced, because it's the only decent way I can build a team. But if you never try something else you'll never know.
Stall was something I just don't wanna try, it takes the fun out of the game. My boxes are full with Balanced teams, but for me they just can't be balanced enough. I always think, what if... So playing Offensive would just keep me from doing that. Basicly because I wanna take control of the game.
---------- About this team ----------
I've just been testing it on Shoddy (I really hate Shoddy though, I always play bad on Shoddy), and I was like, I'm gonna play until I lose. And I got to play seven games, and that was kinda rewarding. And basicly, if I kept my attention I would have been able to win that seventh battle.
I think the team is kinda ok, but because it's the first time I go offense all the way, rates, hints, tips, fixes,... are always welcome, in general about building offensive teams, but also in detail about the sets...
---------- The team ----------

Adamant Metagross @ Lum Berry
252 HP / 236 Atk / 8 Def / 12 Spe
- Stealth Rock
- Explosion
- Bullet Punch
- Meteor Mash
Why Metagross?
This was the last Pokémon I picked for this team. Metagross lead is just awesome. It has the power and the typing to use in late game, and it is one of the better leads in my oppinion. Basicly this thing lures for two kind of attacks. Fire and Ground, and that is just what I wanted. If I smell Fire I go to Heatran, if I smell Ground I go to Gengar.
Some explenation work about this set:
I've changed the EV's from this set. 12 Speed in stead of 8 to outspeed all opposong Metagross Leads. I had to choose something to pick of those 4 EV's, and Defense seemed rather useless... I've picked Meteor Mash over Explosion, because I feel like that gives me better chances against most common leads. I've also tried Explosion, but as I've never got to use that move, it seems rather useless to keep that.
Synergy:
Fire: Heatran, Gyarados
Ground: Gengar, Shaymin, Gyarados
Metagross against the most common leads:











Modest Gengar @ Choice Scarf
4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power: Ice
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast
Why Gengar?
This thing is basicly here to take care of DDers. Awesome Revenge killer. And to be honest, he's just one of my favorite Pokémon ever.
Some explenation work about this set:
Well, as I've used the Standard Gengar alot, and as I have faced alot of Gengars, this set is unexpected. Dragon Dancers will fear this thing and will be caught by surprise. I feel like this Pokémon doesn't really add something to my team, but nor does he really need to be replaced.
Synergy:
Dark: Heatran
Ghost: Heatran
Psychic: Metagross, Heatran

Timid Heatran @ Leftovers
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Fire Blast
- Earth Power
- Subsitute
- Toxic
Why Heatran:
Heatran can be saw as the glue for this team. Scouts out for Bulky waters to threaten Gyarados, will always be switched out upon, so gets up a free subsitute, that might be usefull to Toxic Vaporeon and Suicune switch in, and opens the gate for Gyarados (luring for a Ground or Fighting attack).
Some explenation work about this set:
This is just the best Heatran set there is. As I don't mind the opponent switching out (always allows me to get up a sub), because a switch out is basicly what I want to happen.
Synergy:
Fighting: Gengar, Gyarados
Ground: Gengar, Shaymin, Gyarados

Modest Shaymin @ Choice Specs
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
- Seed Flare
- Hidden Power: Fire
- Earth Power
- Rest
Why Shaymin (and not Celebi)?
Well, why the hell isn't this thing OU? I was a little sceptic about this one, but goddamnit, this thing is so powerfull and usefull to this team. Basicly, I didn't wanna get Pursuited to death, and I wanted to kill Bulky Waters, without showing I have Electivire in my team. Seed Flare is just pure epicness, as it does even great amount of damage (about 30% I think) to Scizor. Also, Shaymin is just a verry nice status adsorber, something I really like (cuz Burn can really hurt Electivire and Gyarados).
Some explenation work about this set:
The Specs really makes this thing a mean (lol) killing machine. Seed Flare is really epic, as it does so much damage combined with great accuracy and no stat lowering changes to Celebi! HP: Fire is for opposing Grass types, and mainly Scizor. Earth Power just improves coverage. And Rest + Natural Cure is awesone
Synergy:
Bug: Gengar, Heatran, Gyarados
Fire: Heatran, Gyarados
Ice: Metagross, Heatran

Jolly Gyarados @ Leftovers
252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Ice Fang
- Waterfall
Why Gyarados?
Well, when building this team, I was thinking about the almost forgotten Electivire. Who is easy to set up, by luring for an Electric Attack, and who is better at luring for that, then Gyarados? Well yea, no one. Basicly, this wil happen: I get to send in Gyarados verry early in the game and scout of his counter (bulky waters and electrics), and if he has neither of them, I can sweep with Gyarados, if he has bulky waters Shaymin takes care of that, and if he has Electrics, Electivire will happily switch in. The second scenario contains some more scouting (most of the time this depends on the opponents lead), eliminating threats by using the rest of my team, and then sweep with Gyarados or Electivire (if he still has an Electric left).
Some explenation work about this set:
Switches in on something that is doomed to switch out facing Gyarados, and then DD's and looks what needs to be done (switching to Electivire or Shaymin, or sweep of its own). The Jolly nature I use to outspeed Max Speed Jolteon without a Scarf. I picked Stone Edge over Ice Fang, because Heatran and Shaymin, and even Electivire have Ice Attacks.
Synergy:
Electric: Shaymin, Electivire
Rock: Metagross

Mild Electivire @ Expert Belt
36 Atk / 252 SpA / 220 Spe
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power: Ice
- Cross Chop
- Flamethrower
Why Electivire:
Well, he is to underestimated. Acceptable Speed combined with Good Attack, and an ability that increases his Speed if executed correctly. Most of the time, my opponent doesn't even get to see him, because the rest of the team does his job fairly well. But when he is played correctly, you'll fear him!
Some explenation work about this set:
Well, to start of with, Expert Belt extends my possible sweep, and this moveset can deal Super Effective Damage to most of the Pokémon in the overused tier (underused probably as well). The EV's and Nature speak for themself. The same with the moveset.
Synergy:
Ground: Gengar, Shaymin, Gyarados
---------- Afterword ----------
I feel like this team really has potential, but I do wanna mention certain things.
Ground weakness:
You will most likely have noticed I have 3 ground weak Pokémon. I'm aware of that as well, but I think Gyarados and Gengar, and even Shaymin provide well enough coverage.
Certain Pokémon weakness:
The odds are there that my team has a weakness to a certain Pokémon, for example SD Luke (although I don't think thats true, it's just an example). Please note that I wanna be in control of the game, and I wanna be my oponent one step ahead. But then again, you may surely suggest an alternative that will undo this weakness.
Metagross vs. Heatran lead:
I was really doubting between a Metagross and a Heatran lead. But I think Metagross is beter.
Questions from me:
How would you descibe this team: Offensive, Bulky Offensive, All Out Offensive (, Stall, Defensive,...)?
Comment, Fix, Rate, Steal,...