Entei [Singles] (QC 2/2) (GP 2/2)

[cannibal]

will do this
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Usage Tips [Choice Band set]
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Sacred Fire is the move you will be using the most, as it is Entei's main STAB and can spread burns. Many strong physical attackers like Kangaskhan can OHKO Entei but do not want to switch into Sacred Fire for fear of a burn. Be wary of Flash Fire users and Pokemon that resist Sacred Fire. Pokemon that can use these resistances to their advantage and set up on Entei, such as Dragon Dance Mega Charizard X, are particularly dangerous. Entei is effective at crippling the opponent's team early with burns and damage. It is generally best to bring in Entei after a Pokemon has been KOed or into a resisted attack once the Pokemon that can threaten it are gone. It is usually not the best lead due to poor matchups against many common leads, like Garchomp. Garchomp often carries Lum Berry, neutering Entei's Sacred Fire even further.

Just wanted to make sure the bolded sentences sound okay, as I think I was in the process of editing those sentences when you posted the second GP check. Two sentences starting with "it is" is perhaps a bit repetitive here. Other than that, I think that keeping it as two separate sentences (as it was originally before editing) more accurately portrays that they are two separate ideas that are not necessarily inclusive (as Haund suggested earlier).

Other than that, I've implemented those changes. :)

 

[Lemonade]

ah ye if you intended the two statements to be separate, go with something like

It is generally best to bring in Entei in (original reads as "...best to bring in Entei into a resisted attack" vs "...best to bring Entei into a resisted attack") after a Pokemon has been KOed or into a resisted attack [once the Pokemon that can threaten it are gone] (potentially remove this portion because CB Sacred Fire is probably pretty strong and nothing appreciates a burn). It is usually not the best lead due to Leading with Entei is not a good idea because it has poor matchups against many common leads, like Garchomp.

 

[cannibal]

ah ye if you intended the two statements to be separate, go with something like

It is generally best to bring in Entei in (original reads as "...best to bring in Entei into a resisted attack" vs "...best to bring Entei into a resisted attack") after a Pokemon has been KOed or into a resisted attack [once the Pokemon that can threaten it are gone] (potentially remove this portion because CB Sacred Fire is probably pretty strong and nothing appreciates a burn). It is usually not the best lead due to Leading with Entei is not a good idea because it has poor matchups against many common leads, like Garchomp.

Done. Yeah, that's much better and I should have just come up with similar wording myself after realizing my wording was redundant. xD

Once again, thanks or the quick response. :)

 

[apricity]

Is 'iron head is a mostly filler' an accepted use of the word filler?