Well, if you actually change the EVs on the Swords Dance set like we told you to a while back, someone can upload it.
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Feraligatr (Update)
- Thread starter Rolf
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uploaded.
rephrased a few things but they were pretty straightforward.
there were quite a few "huh really" moments as well, mostly involving your choice of examples. aside from outdated or incorrect examples, there is a bit of repetition / low variety. perhaps those were left over from the past analysis but in the future being a little more picky with what you use may be a good idea.
also... missing changes is not good - opening a separate window for changes while scrolling down the thread in the first can be a way to solve this.
finally for future reference you are supposed to include a link to the analysis page at the top of your post.
that said... good job; it reads easily and there is not too little nor too much information.
rephrased a few things but they were pretty straightforward.
there were quite a few "huh really" moments as well, mostly involving your choice of examples. aside from outdated or incorrect examples, there is a bit of repetition / low variety. perhaps those were left over from the past analysis but in the future being a little more picky with what you use may be a good idea.
also... missing changes is not good - opening a separate window for changes while scrolling down the thread in the first can be a way to solve this.
finally for future reference you are supposed to include a link to the analysis page at the top of your post.
that said... good job; it reads easily and there is not too little nor too much information.