First competitive Pokemon Showdown team.

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Hi! I'm sorta new to competitive team building and I spent about an hour making this team. Anyways, I was hoping for some suggestions on how to improve it...

Entei @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 128 Def / 128 SDef / 2 Atk / 252 HP
Adamant Nature
- Sacred Fire
- ExtremeSpeed
- Substitute
- Solar Beam

Heracross @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Swarm
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk
Adamant Nature
- Night Slash
- Earthquake
- Megahorn
- Close Combat

Cresselia (F) @ Light Clay
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 182 Def / 222 SDef / 100 HP / 4 Spd
Bold Nature
- Light Screen
- Reflect
- Moonlight
- Sunny Day

Manectric-Mega @ Manectite
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 SAtk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Modest Nature
- Volt Switch
- Thunderbolt
- Flamethrower
- Hidden Power [Ice]

Milotic @ Wide Lens
Ability: Cute Charm
EVs: 8 Spd / 252 SDef / 250 HP
Bold Nature
- Hydro Pump
- Blizzard
- Dragon Tail
- Recover

Aggron @ Assault Vest
Ability: Rock Head
EVs: 252 SDef / 252 Def / 4 Atk
Adamant Nature
IVs: NaN Spd
- Heavy Slam
- Head Smash
- Dragon Tail
- Power-Up Punch

Glad you could help!
 
Hey bud, try to put a 3-line description on each of your pokemans because we have to understand your pokemon's roles before we can rate. ;)
 
Hey bud, and welcome to Smogon.

Unfortunately, I'm going to have to lock this thread for now, as you are currently breaking a few rules so to speak. The main one is the lack of descriptions; having descriptions is vital, as it will give raters a clear understanding of the role that the selected Pokemon is meant to serve for your team. You should be having 3 or more lines of descriptions of each Pokemon selected, which should include details regarding why you chose that Pokemon and what it's meant to do for the team (also, describing about why you chose the moves and EV spreads of each Pokemon is important as well). In addition, adding pictures for each Pokemon could perhaps help your thread become more visually appealing, making raters more likely to look at your team and give advice.

Please refer to this guideline for more information on how to get your thread properly structured. Once you're done, PM me your updated changes and I'll happily unlock this thread for you.

Additionally, if you're new to competitive battling, you might be interested in checking out this thread for tutoring.
 
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