First Hyper offensive team

[CatchEmAllAnt]

I PUNCH HOLES (Terrakion) @ Choice Band
Trait: Justified
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Close Combat
- Stone Edge
- X-Scissor
- Sacred Sword

This is probably the biggest threat on my team. It hits everything that does'nt resist it hard. But its also pretty frail.

HitMeBitch! (Deoxys-Defense) @ Rocky Helmet
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Spikes
- Taunt
- Magic Coat

This is my suicide lead. It is made for one purpose and thats to get up as many hazards as it can before it dies.

Blue Dragoon (Salamence) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Moxie
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SAtk / 252 Spd
Naughty Nature
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Dragon Claw
- Fire Blast

Salamence is my revenge killer/late game sweeper. It hits hard and hits fast. But can get annoyingly locked into Outrade.

Wall (Heatran) @ Life Orb
Trait: Flash Fire
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 25 Spd / 25 SAtk / 4 SDef
Modest Nature
- Fire Blast
- Earth Power
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Will-O-Wisp

Heatran is my Sp.Attacking offensive threat. It has good coverage and cand can last a while.

Halloween (Gengar) (F) @ Life Orb
Trait: Levitate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Substitute
- Pain Split
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast

Gengar is to try and shut down rapid spinners,but it is also a very prominent threat. It can be a pain to kill because of the PainSub set.

Mike Tyson (Scizor) (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Bullet Punch
- Swords Dance
- Superpower
- Bug Bite

This is my set-up sweeper. Bullet punch and bug bite hit everything well and with swords dance can OHKO.

Well, this is my first offensive OU team. Any feedback is appreciated, Thanks.

 

[Jirachee]

Hi

Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it. The standard description length required is three to four lines, if you need more insight look on the detail part, check out the RMT Archive.

You need to improve your descriptions. Around three lines should be enough. PM me your updated descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.