First Team RTM

[Rk00]

Well I don’t like weather teams a lot, so I decided to start with a “normal”

At first sigh

Azelf
@focus sash
evs: 252 spe, 252 Atk 4 hp
hability: levitate
nat:jolly
moveset:
stealth rock
fire blast
taunt
U-turn

I choose it because it great speed, this my leader in 4° generation, but i change explosion to u-turn because it have lost some power, the principal function is to set up stealth rocks

ferrothorn
@leftovers
evs:252 HP / 48 Def / 208 SpDef
hability: iron barbs
nat: sassy
moveset:
protect
toxic
leech seed
gyro ball/spikes

my principal tank, it put entry hards


salamance
@life orb
evs:252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
hability: intimidadte
nat:naive
moveset:
draco meteor
drangon dance
outrage
fire blast

the common mixed sweeper, it can take almost everything

scrafty:
@leftovers
evs:252 HP / 8 Atk / 248 SpD
hability: shed skin
nat: careful
moveset:
dragon tail
rest
drain punch
bulk up

another tank, with 2 or 3 bulk up make him a great tank, dragon tail helps me to debilitate de opposite team if I had set spikes


scizor
@choice band
evs:248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 Spe
hability: tecnichan
nat: admant
moveset:
bullet punch
superpower
pursuit
u-turn

I have to be careful with fire and electric atacks

gliscor
@toxic orb
evs: 252 HP / 88 Def / 168 Spe
hability: poison heal
nat:Impish
moveset:
ice fang
eartquake
swords dance
protect


I can boost a little an start sweeping for a moment, take off dragons and ground types

 

[PungentFruit]

Ok here's a rate

Azelf - First off, I think you should give Azelf a Timid nature especially since that lowers Attack and not special attack. I see that you want a Jolly and 252 Atk EVs for the boosted power of U-Turn but that move is really only used for prediction, not damage so give yourself 252 SAtk. Also make your Azel Definitely replace Fire Blast with Flamethrower for the accuracy if you choose to keep this set. Everything else looks nice.

Ferrothorn - You Ferrothorn's EVs look good but I really don't like Toxic on him. Yes it is a good stall move, but something like Spikes would be better especially since Toxic does not have the most accuracy. Leave Protect on Ferrothorn even though you were trying to Toxic stall, it is a still a good move.

Salamence - I like your Salamence's moveset but the EVs good use a slight improvement. You have 252 Atk but with only one attacking move and Dragon Dance which does not make sense to. Give your mence at 252 SAtk or at least even out the EVs a little to give yourself more of an edge with Special Attack.

Scrafty - Looks good to me and nice use of Shed Skin. I would recommend using something other than Dragon Tail because that has a very low priority and really not the best accuracy. I would recommend replacing it with either Ice Punch, with the increase of Dragons and Flying types in Gen 5, or a STAB Crunch that will deal a lot of damage to enemy Jellicents, etc.

Scizor - Looks good.

Gliscor - Also looks good!


Remember these are just opinions to help your team better and do not necessarily have to be used.

 

[DaRkRaii]

I guess alot of newer players havent seen other peoples RMTs. Your thread will be indefinetely locked unless you expand widely on your descriptions, one sentence will not cut it. You must add alot of more detailed information. If youve seen RMTs that have a bit of information, mods have come on to the thread and locked it or threatened to lock it because elaboration was not included in the descriptions. If you would like to know what a proper RMT looks like, go search around on other threads and you will see some people include how the team started, weather changes were made over time and very detailed descriptions. Please do not heed these words they will help you.

 

[St Anger]

3 things
-I'd say is consider EQ over Dragon Dance on Mence. Much better on a mix Set. I know you're prob aiming for the speed boost, but with only 1 physical attack, DD is pretty useless. Plus, 2 other of your guys have set up.
- I'd really recommend more special attacks. Azelf has only 1 and mence does decent with his, but still...
- 2 of your guys are x4 weak to fire and you really don't have many good resistances to it

I'd really recommend a bulky water, like Starmie or Vaporeon. Both are bulky, give resistance to fire and provide another special attacker.

 

[Rk00]

I guess alot of newer players havent seen other peoples RMTs. Your thread will be indefinetely locked unless you expand widely on your descriptions, one sentence will not cut it. You must add alot of more detailed information. If youve seen RMTs that have a bit of information, mods have come on to the thread and locked it or threatened to lock it because elaboration was not included in the descriptions. If you would like to know what a proper RMT looks like, go search around on other threads and you will see some people include how the team started, weather changes were made over time and very detailed descriptions. Please do not heed these words they will help you.

well I am a totally noob, I dont know how to explain very well the description of the pokemon, I will search, and edit this threat


thank for the recommendations

 

[Bone Dragon]

I think that something like a Hasty nature on Azelf would be better, that way neither its attack nor special attack gets lowered :) I too do not like toxic on Ferrothorn, I think it should have something like Leech Seed/Protect/Spikes/Power Whip or Gyro Ball (make sure you have a speed-lowering nature and a 0 speed IV). On Scrafty, I think you should replace Dragon Tail with Crunch, just for better coverage. On Scizor, why do you need to be afraid of electric attacks?

I think you should add more details to the description of why you chose each poke. Also, maybe you could add pictures of each poke, just to make it more awesthetically pleasing. Also, if you can remember, maybe add a section of the team building process to show more insight.