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Flutter Mane @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 108 HP / 140 Def / 124 SpA / 4 SpD / 132 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Protect
- Icy Wind
- Taunt / Dazzling Gleam
- Moonblast

Flutter Mane blasts through Regulation F, pressuring the Urshifu formes and Raging Bolt with its powerful Tera Fairy Moonblast. Flutter Mane provides amazing value to its team with Icy Wind, which helps partners like Urshifu-S and Chi-Yu outspeed and KO threats like Chien-Pao and the Ogerpon formes. Taunt disrupts Trick Room teams and Amoonguss, while Dazzling Gleam gives it a powerful spread option. The given EVs let it survive an Icicle Crash from Jolly Chien-Pao, threaten OHKOs against most Raging Bolts with Tera Fairy Moonblast boosted by Chi-Yu's Beads of Ruin, and outspeed Roaring Moon and OHKO it with a Moonblast. Flutter Mane struggles against bulky physical attackers, like Ogerpon-H and Assault Vest Rillaboom, which are both able to easily tank a Moonblast and OHKO Flutter Mane in return. Partners like Chi-Yu's and Tornadus's Fire- and Flying-type STAB attacks deal with Ogerpon-H and Rillaboom. Incineroar can easily switch in on attacks that threaten Flutter Mane, and its Intimidate helps Flutter Mane survive physical attacks such as Rillaboom's Wood Hammer. Ogerpon-H is able to redirect threatening attacks and pressure physical attackers like Urshifu-R and Rillaboom with its Grass- and Fire-type STAB moves.

Characters (Without spaces): 1046
 
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Hi good work, I would like to recheck this before approving though since there are a lot of edits to be made.

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Flutter Mane @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 108 HP / 140 Def / 124 SpA / 4 SpD / 132 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Protect
- Icy Wind
- Taunt / Dazzling Gleam
- Moonblast

Flutter Mane excels in Regulation F, blasting through meta staples like Urshifu-R, and Raging Bolt with its powerful Fairy-Type STAB attacks. Spotlights usually need a tagline as the first sentence to draw the reader in so you should reword the first part of this sentence to something like "Flutter Mane blasts through the metagame in Regulation F..." On top of its power, Flutter Mane provides amazing value to its team with Icy Wind, which is crucial to help partners like Urshifu-S and Chi-Yu outspeed and KO strong mega threats like Mention an example or two, while simultaneously slowing down disrupting Don't want to give the impression that Taunt reduces opposing speed Trick Room teams and Amoonguss with Taunt. Since Taunt is slashed with Dazzling Gleam you need to mention when you would use either or on this set. You also haven't mentioned Moonblast but you could probably add it in the first sentence The given EVs allow it to survive an Icicle Crash from Jolly Chien-Pao, while being able to threaten OHKOs against most Raging Bolt with Tera Fairy Moonblast boosted by Chi-Yu's Beads of Ruin. The 132 EVs in Speed allow it to narrowly outspeed max Speed Roaring Moon and OHKO it with a Moonblast. Because of its very poor Defense, You can remove this to save character count Flutter Mane struggles against most physical attackers, especially Ogerpon-H and Assault Vest Rillaboom, who are both able to easily tank a Moonblast and OHKO Flutter Mane in return. Partners like Chi-Yu and Tornadus, who can more easily stop these threats, are amazing to pair with Flutter Mane. Mention how they deal with Ogerpon-H and Rillaboom Partners like Incineroar can easily switch in on most attacks that threaten Flutter Mane, Mentioning that Intimidate reduces the physical damage Flutter Mane takes is a good add here and Ogerpon-H is able to redirect these attacks while also threatening many physical attackers that can check Flutter Mane. Again mention briefly how Ogerpon-H threatens the physical attackers

Characters (Without spaces): 1039
 
Flutter Mane @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 108 HP / 140 Def / 124 SpA / 4 SpD / 132 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Protect
- Icy Wind
- Taunt / Dazzling Gleam
- Moonblast

Flutter Mane blasts through the metagame in Regulation F, blasting through meta staples like the Urshifu formes and Raging Bolt with its powerful Tera Fairy Moonblast. Flutter Mane provides amazing value to its team with Icy Wind, which is crucial to help partners like Urshifu-S and Chi-Yu outspeed and KO threats like Chien-Pao and the Ogerpon formes, while simultaneously disrupting Trick Room teams and Amoonguss with Taunt. Alternatively, Dazzling Gleam gives it a powerful spread option to sweep teams. The given EVs allow it to survive an Icicle Crash from Jolly Chien-Pao, while being able to threaten OHKOs against most Raging Bolt with Tera Fairy Moonblast boosted by Chi-Yu's Beads of Ruin. The 132 EVs in Speed allow it to outspeed Roaring Moon and OHKO it with a Moonblast. Flutter Mane struggles against most physical attackers, especially Ogerpon-H and Assault Vest Rillaboom, who are both able to easily tank a Moonblast and OHKO Flutter Mane in return. Partners like Chi-Yu and Tornadus are amazing to pair with Flutter Mane, as their Fire- and Flying-Type STABs allow them to deal with Ogerpon-H and Rillaboom. Incineroar can easily switch in on most attacks that threaten Flutter Mane, and its Intimidate helps Flutter Mane survive physical attacks such as Rillaboom's Wood Hammer. Ogerpon-H is able to redirect threatening attacks and pressure physical attackers like Urshifu-R and Rillaboom with its Grass- and Fire-Type STABs.

Characters (Without spaces): 1219

RauSakura implemented, would def like to thin it down, if you see anything extra I would be happy to remove it
 
Looks good, your character count is fine (as long as it remains below ~1050 after these edits) so I've only made a few condensing suggestions and there's only one sentence I would like you to fix/rewrite. You may send to GP after implementing this! 1/1

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Flutter Mane @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 108 HP / 140 Def / 124 SpA / 4 SpD / 132 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Protect
- Icy Wind
- Taunt / Dazzling Gleam
- Moonblast

Flutter Mane blasts through the metagame in Regulation F, blasting through meta staples like threatening Or you can use "pressuring" or another word with a similar meaning the Urshifu formes and Raging Bolt with its powerful Tera Fairy Moonblast. Flutter Mane provides amazing value to its team with Icy Wind, which is crucial to help partners like Urshifu-S Just checking that you mean single strike here because it is true however rapid strike is way more commonly used and Chi-Yu outspeed and KO threats like Chien-Pao and the Ogerpon formes, while simultaneously disrupting Trick Room teams and Amoonguss with Taunt. The way this sentence is structured makes it feel like Icy Wind and Taunt are slashed rather than Taunt and Dazzling Gleam, try to make the Taunt part flow better into the Dazzling Gleam sentence and I suggest ending the sentence for Icy Wind after "the Ogerpon formes" Alternatively, Dazzling Gleam gives it a powerful spread option to sweep teams. The given EVs allow it to survive an Icicle Crash from Jolly Chien-Pao, while being able to threaten OHKOs against most Raging Bolt with Tera Fairy Moonblast boosted by Chi-Yu's Beads of Ruin. The 132 EVs in Speed allow it to outspeed Roaring Moon and OHKO it with a Moonblast. Flutter Mane struggles against most bulky physical attackers, especially like Ogerpon-H and Assault Vest Rillaboom, who are both able to easily tank a Moonblast and OHKO Flutter Mane in return. Partners like Chi-Yu and Tornadus are amazing to pair with Flutter Mane, as their Fire- and Flying-Type STABs allow them to STAB attacks deal with Ogerpon-H and Rillaboom. Incineroar can easily switch in on most attacks that threaten Flutter Mane, and its Intimidate helps Flutter Mane survive physical attacks such as Rillaboom's Wood Hammer. Ogerpon-H is able to redirect threatening attacks and pressure physical attackers like Urshifu-R and Rillaboom with its Grass- and Fire-Type STABs.

Characters (Without spaces): 1039
 
Flutter Mane @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 108 HP / 140 Def / 124 SpA / 4 SpD / 132 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Protect
- Icy Wind
- Taunt / Dazzling Gleam
- Moonblast

Flutter Mane blasts through the metagame in Regulation F, pressuring the Urshifu formes and Raging Bolt with its powerful Tera Fairy Moonblast. Flutter Mane provides amazing value to its team with Icy Wind, which is crucial to help partners like Urshifu-S and Chi-Yu outspeed and KO threats like Chien-Pao and the Ogerpon formes. Taunt disrupts Trick Room teams and Amoonguss, while Dazzling Gleam gives it a powerful spread option to sweep teams. The given EVs allow it to survive an Icicle Crash from Jolly Chien-Pao, while being able to threaten OHKOs against most Raging Bolt with Tera Fairy Moonblast boosted by Chi-Yu's Beads of Ruin. The 132 EVs in Speed allow it to outspeed Roaring Moon and OHKO it with a Moonblast. Flutter Mane struggles against bulky physical attackers, like Ogerpon-H and Assault Vest Rillaboom, who are both able to easily tank a Moonblast and OHKO Flutter Mane in return. Partners like Chi-Yu and Tornadus are amazing to pair with Flutter Mane, as their Fire- and Flying-Type STAB attacks deal with Ogerpon-H and Rillaboom. Incineroar can easily switch in on attacks that threaten Flutter Mane, and its Intimidate helps Flutter Mane survive physical attacks such as Rillaboom's Wood Hammer. Ogerpon-H is able to redirect threatening attacks and pressure physical attackers like Urshifu-R and Rillaboom with its Grass- and Fire-Type STABs.

Characters (Without spaces): 1153

Implemented! GP Team hi, would like to thin this down a little more if you have any suggestions
 
Edited this with a mind to cut a lot of the characters down.
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1/1 GP Team done
Flutter Mane @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 108 HP / 140 Def / 124 SpA / 4 SpD / 132 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Protect
- Icy Wind
- Taunt / Dazzling Gleam
- Moonblast

Flutter Mane blasts through the metagame in Regulation F, pressuring the Urshifu formes and Raging Bolt with its powerful Tera Fairy Moonblast. Flutter Mane provides amazing value to its team with Icy Wind, which is crucial to help helps partners like Urshifu-S and Chi-Yu outspeed and KO threats like Chien-Pao and the Ogerpon formes. Taunt disrupts Trick Room teams and Amoonguss, while Dazzling Gleam gives it a powerful spread option to sweep teams. The given EVs allow let it to survive an Icicle Crash from Jolly Chien-Pao, while being able to threaten OHKOs against most Raging Bolt Bolts with Tera Fairy Moonblast boosted by Chi-Yu's Beads of Ruin (RP) The 132 EVs in Speed allow it to , (AC) andoutspeed Roaring Moon and OHKO it with a Moonblast. Flutter Mane struggles against bulky physical attackers, like Ogerpon-H and Assault Vest Rillaboom, who which are both able to easily tank a Moonblast and OHKO Flutter Mane in return. Partners like Chi-Yu Chi-Yu's and Tornadus are amazing to pair with Flutter Mane, as their Tornadus's Fire- and Flying-type STAB attacks deal with Ogerpon-H and Rillaboom. Incineroar can easily switch in on attacks that threaten Flutter Mane, and its Intimidate helps Flutter Mane survive physical attacks such as Rillaboom's Wood Hammer. Ogerpon-H is able to redirect threatening attacks and pressure physical attackers like Urshifu-R and Rillaboom with its Grass- and Fire-type STABs STAB moves.
 
Flutter Mane @ Booster Energy
Ability: Protosynthesis
Level: 50
Tera Type: Fairy
EVs: 108 HP / 140 Def / 124 SpA / 4 SpD / 132 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Protect
- Icy Wind
- Taunt / Dazzling Gleam
- Moonblast

Flutter Mane blasts through Regulation F, pressuring the Urshifu formes and Raging Bolt with its powerful Tera Fairy Moonblast. Flutter Mane provides amazing value to its team with Icy Wind, which helps partners like Urshifu-S and Chi-Yu outspeed and KO threats like Chien-Pao and the Ogerpon formes. Taunt disrupts Trick Room teams and Amoonguss, while Dazzling Gleam gives it a powerful spread option. The given EVs let it survive an Icicle Crash from Jolly Chien-Pao, threaten OHKOs against most Raging Bolts with Tera Fairy Moonblast boosted by Chi-Yu's Beads of Ruin, and outspeed Roaring Moon and OHKO it with a Moonblast. Flutter Mane struggles against bulky physical attackers, like Ogerpon-H and Assault Vest Rillaboom, which are both able to easily tank a Moonblast and OHKO Flutter Mane in return. Partners like Chi-Yu's and Tornadus's Fire- and Flying-type STAB attacks deal with Ogerpon-H and Rillaboom. Incineroar can easily switch in on attacks that threaten Flutter Mane, and its Intimidate helps Flutter Mane survive physical attacks such as Rillaboom's Wood Hammer. Ogerpon-H is able to redirect threatening attacks and pressure physical attackers like Urshifu-R and Rillaboom with its Grass- and Fire-type STAB moves.
Implemented and done!
 
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