Copyediting Gay Pex (Defensive Toxapex) [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

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[SET]
name: The Pex
move 1: Toxic
move 2: Recover
move 3: Haze
move 4: Toxic Spikes / Infestation
item: Heavy-Duty Boots / Leftovers
tera type: Steel / Grass
ability: Regenerator
nature: Calm / Bold
evs: 248 HP / 8 Def / 252 SpD
248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

Toxapex is a resilient defensive Pokemon that makes good use of its typing, great mixed bulk, and ability Regenerator to check and spread Toxic throughout the game against a plethora of offensive threats, including Iron Valiant, Zamazenta, and Enamorus. Toxapex leverages its bulk and Regenerator to be a great Haze user, able to shut down all manner of setup sweepers like Weavile, Iron Valiant, and Darkrai—in conjunction with Recover, Haze makes it much easier for Toxapex to Toxic stall opponents. Haze also lets Toxapex shut down sweepers immune to Toxic like Iron Moth, Curse Garganacl, Calm Mind Clefable, and Nasty Plot Gholdengo, making it easier for teammates like Blissey and Gliscor to answer them. For its last move, Toxapex can utilize Toxic Spikes to make use of its many entry opportunities, greatly punishing teams lacking a grounded Poison-type. Alternatively, Infestation lets Toxapex trap and wear down passive walls like Dondozo and chip Toxic-immune foes like Iron Crown, Tinkaton, Gholdengo, and Kingambit—additionally popping the latter three's Air Balloon. Another option is Baneful Bunker, which lets Toxapex safely scout opponents, absorb Future Sight along with Tera Steel, and punish U-Turn from the likes of Cinderace, Dragapult, and Ogerpon-W with a debilitating poison. Heavy-Duty Boots gives Toxapex more reliability as a pivot on teams using little or no hazard removal, while Leftovers is an alternative item choice on teams with multiple hazard removers like Weezing-G, Corviknight, or Talonflame, granting greater longevity and making Toxapex a more an even more effective pivot. Full investment in Special Defense lets Toxapex serve as a mixed scout, with better matchups into Iron Valiant, Enamorus, Kyurem, and Darkrai. Alternatively, full physical Defense investment gives greater consistency against threats like Great Tusk and Ogerpon-W, ensuring it survives the former's Headlong Rush and giving maximum odds to survive the latter's +2 Power Whip and respond with a crippling Toxic. Tera Steel is a great defensive type that lets Toxapex effectively absorb Future Sight from Slowking-G and Iron Crown and become a much stronger check to Raging Bolt, Kyurem, and Hatterene. Alternatively, Tera Grass improves Toxapex's matchup against Ogerpon-W while also granting a resistance to Ground to better check Great Tusk and Landorus-T and a resistance to Electric to sponge Volt Switches from Raging Bolt and Iron Crown.

Toxapex is a fantastic asset to stall teams as a Toxic-spreading Regenerator pivot and a scout against unpredictable threats like Iron Valiant, Dragapult, and Kyurem. Dondozo and Blissey are two great partners who appreciate Toxapex's ability to scout Kyurem, thanks to its ability to survive every attack other than Choice Specs Tera Ice Freeze Dry. Once scouted, Dondozo answers most variations of Dragon Dance Kyurem, while Blissey answers Choice Specs and Boots Attacker Kyurem. The two also appreciate Toxapex answering Utility Dragapult, which otherwise gets free entry on both. Furthermore, Blissey appreciates Toxapex scouting potential Trick users like Gholdengo and Darkrai, ensuring it can consistently answer them without being crippled by Trick. Toxapex answers mixed wallbreakers like Iron Valiant and Keldeo and relieves Blissey of pressure from Primarina and Walking Wake’s pivoting moves, while Blissey walls special attackers that threaten Toxapex like Raging Bolt and Iron Moth. Clodsire is another special wall that appreciates Toxapex absorbing potential Tricks from Gholdengo so it can be a consistent check. Toxapex's opportunities to badly poison difficult physical sweepers like Dragon Dance Kyurem and Dragonite makes it much easier for Dondozo to answer them over the course of a game, with Dondozo checking Kingambit in return. Specially Defensive Gliscor is another wonderful teammate that answers wallbreakers like Raging Bolt and Iron Moth and Ground-types like Landorus-T and Ting-Lu that threaten Toxapex and sets entry hazards to keep up pressure against Ogerpon-W. Gliscor is also useful for absorbing Knock Off from Pokemon like Tinkaton and Clefable, ensuring that Toxapex can retain its Heavy-Duty Boots and maximize its pivoting capabilities. In return, Toxapex answers threats to Gliscor like Primarina and Weavile, negating their setup attempts with Haze. Corviknight is another ally that provides hazard removal and which absorbs Knock Off from Pokemon like Weavile and Great Tusk while also being a great check to opposing Gliscor. Toxapex appreciates the presence of Weezing-G thanks to its ability to punish opposing Gliscor and Clefable, which would otherwise wall Toxapex. Its ability to consistently remove entry hazards in the face of Gholdengo increases Toxapex's longevity should it lose its Heavy-Duty Boots and frees it to run Leftovers to grant further longevity. In return, Toxapex helps spread Toxic to more quickly wear down entry hazard setters like Great Tusk and Landorus-T and special wallbreakers that threaten Weezing-G like Primarina and Kyurem. Between Weezing-G's Will-O-Wisp and Toxapex's Haze and Regenerator, the two work well together to hold off the otherwise threatening Curse Garganacl. Similarly, Weezing-G's ability to burn Ogerpon-W makes Toxapex a much more reliable check to it, while Toxapex's ability to badly poison Ogerpon-W leaves it more quickly worn down by Weezing-G.

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QC 1/2
after implemented, ty vm!

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[SET]
name: The Pex
move 1: Toxic
move 2: Recover
move 3: Haze
move 4: Toxic Spikes / Infestation
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
tera type: Steel / Grass
ability: Regenerator
nature: Calm / Bold
evs: 248 HP / 8 Def / 252 SpD
248 HP/ 252 Def / 8 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

Toxapex is a resilient defensive Pokemon that makes good use of its typing, great mixed bulk, and ability Regenerator to check and spread Toxic throughout the game against a plethora of offensive threats, including Ogerpon-W, Iron Valiant, and Zamazenta. Recover gives Toxapex greater longevity, especially if it loses its Heavy-Duty Boots. Toxapex leverages its bulk and Regenerator to be a great Haze user, able to shut down all manner of setup sweepers like Dragonite, Weavile, Iron Valiant, and Darkrai—in conjunction with Recover, Haze makes it much easier for Toxapex to Toxic stall opponents. Haze also lets Toxapex shut down sweepers immune to Toxic like Curse Garganacl, Calm Mind Clefable, and Nasty Plot Gholdengo. (A trickier mention is preventing Iron Moth from boosting up too much, as it might overwhelm Blissey if it does, but up to you if you want to or can include it) For its last move, Toxapex can utilize Toxic Spikes to make use of its many entry opportunities, greatly punishing teams lacking a grounded Poison-type. Alternatively, Infestation lets Toxapex trap and wear down passive walls like Alomomola, (Maybe switch this for Dondozo? Mola can Flip Turn out and Dondozo is arguably a more important mu it handles) chip Toxic-immune foes like Iron Crown, Gholdengo, and Kingambit—additionally popping the latter two's Air Balloon—and makes Toxapex less helpless against Taunt Ogerpon-W. Full investment in Special Defense lets Toxapex serve as a mixed scout, with solid matchups into Iron Valiant, Enamorus, Kyurem, and Darkrai. Alternatively, full physical Defense investment ensures greater consistency against threats like Ogerpon-W and Great Tusk, ensuring it can survive the former's +2 Power Whip and latter's Headlong Rush and cripple them with Toxic. Tera Steel is a great defensive type that lets Toxapex effectively absorb Future Sight from Slowking-G and become a much stronger check to Raging Bolt, Kyurem, and Hatterene. Alternatively, Tera Grass makes Toxapex a rock-solid check to Ogerpon-W while also granting a resistance to Ground to better check Great Tusk and Landorus-T and a resistance to Electric to sponge Volt Switches from Raging Bolt and Iron Crown. A Baneful Bunker mention would be nice, lets you deal with FSight better after Tera, scouts attacks, further chips with poison, and punishes contact.

Toxapex is a fantastic asset to stall teams as a Toxic-spreading Regenerator pivot, a highly splashable Ogerpon-W check, and a scout against unpredictable threats like Iron Valiant, Dragapult, and Kyurem. Dondozo and Blissey are two great partners who appreciate Toxapex's ability to scout Kyurem, thanks to its ability to survive every attack other than Choice Specs Tera Ice Freeze Dry. Once scouted, Dondozo answers Dragon Dance Kyurem, while Blissey answers Choice Specs and Boots Attacker Kyurem. The two also appreciate Toxapex answering Utility Dragapult, which otherwise gets free entry on both. Furthermore, Blissey appreciates Toxapex scouting potential Trick users like Gholdengo and Darkrai. Toxapex answers mixed wallbreakers like Iron Valiant and Keldeo and relieves Blissey of pressure from Primarina and Walking Wake’s pivoting moves, while Blissey stonewalls special attackers that threaten Toxapex like Raging Bolt and Iron Moth. Likewise, Toxapex's opportunities to badly poison physical sweepers like Bulk Up Great Tusk (I would change this for something that Dondozo has a harder time dealing with like Dragon Dance Kyurem, but up to you) and Dragonite makes it much easier for Dondozo to answer them over the course of a game, with Dondozo checking Kingambit in return. Gliscor is another wonderful teammate that answers Pokemon like Iron Moth, Raging Bolt, and Pecharunt that threaten Toxapex and sets entry hazards to keep up pressure against Ogerpon-W. In return, Toxapex answers threats to Gliscor like Primarina, Ogerpon-W, and Weavile, negating their setup attempts with Haze. Toxapex appreciates the presence of Weezing-G thanks to its ability to punish opposing Gliscor and Clefable, which would otherwise wall Toxapex. Together, the two can strongly pressure Ogerpon-W and Garganacl. In return, Toxapex helps spread Toxic to more quickly wear down entry hazard setters like Great Tusk and Landorus-T and special wallbreakers that threaten Weezing-G like Primarina and Kyurem. (I feel its important to highlight a partner that can take on Ground-type attacks. If you want to do that in the Gliscor, or even the Dondozo section that would be great)

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QC 2/2 after implemented! This is my first feedback, let me know if you have any questions!

[SET]
name: The Pex
move 1: Toxic
move 2: Recover
move 3: Haze
move 4: Toxic Spikes / Infestation
item: Heavy-Duty Boots / Leftovers
tera type: Steel / Grass
ability: Regenerator
nature: Calm / Bold
evs: 248 HP / 8 Def / 252 SpD
248 HP/ 252 Def / 8 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

Toxapex is a resilient defensive Pokemon that makes good use of its typing, great mixed bulk, and ability Regenerator to check and spread Toxic throughout the game against a plethora of offensive threats, including Ogerpon-W (Between Taunt, Knock Off, and +2 252+ Atk Wellspring Mask Ogerpon-Wellspring Power Whip vs. 248 HP / 252+ Def Toxapex: 261-307 (86.1 - 101.3%) -- 12.5% chance to OHKO, Toxapex isn't a particularly reliable Ogerpon-W answer, I would mention another Pokemon), Iron Valiant, and Zamazenta. Recover gives Toxapex greater longevity, especially if it loses its Heavy-Duty Boots. (Recover does not need explaining on a defensive pokemon) Toxapex leverages its bulk and Regenerator to be a great Haze user, able to shut down all manner of setup sweepers like Dragonite (Earthquake is a very common move on Dragonite, Toxapex is not a reliable answer), Weavile, Iron Valiant, and Darkrai—in conjunction with Recover, Haze makes it much easier for Toxapex to Toxic stall opponents. Haze also lets Toxapex shut down sweepers immune to Toxic like Iron Moth, Curse Garganacl, Calm Mind Clefable, and Nasty Plot Gholdengo. Could emphasize that Haze shuts them down in conjunction with Toxapex's teammates, rather than strictly helping Toxapex win the 1v1. For its last move, Toxapex can utilize Toxic Spikes to make use of its many entry opportunities, greatly punishing teams lacking a grounded Poison-type. Alternatively, Infestation lets Toxapex trap and wear down passive walls like Dondozo, chip Toxic-immune foes like Iron Crown, Gholdengo, and Kingambit—additionally popping the latter two's Air Balloon—and makes Toxapex less helpless against Taunt Ogerpon-W (This is barely technically true, I would mention another Pokemon such as Tinkaton). Another option is Baneful Bunker, which lets Toxapex safely scout opponents, absorb Future Sight along with Tera Steel, and punish U-Turns from the likes of Cinderace, Dragapult, and Ogerpon-W with a debilitating poison. Full investment in Special Defense lets Toxapex serve as a mixed scout, with solid matchups into Iron Valiant, Enamorus, Kyurem, and Darkrai. Alternatively, full physical Defense investment gives greater consistency against threats like Ogerpon-W and Great Tusk, ensuring it can survive the former's +2 Power Whip (This is not true per earlier comment, remove it or reword it to be less definitive) and latter's Headlong Rush and cripple them with Toxic. Tera Steel is a great defensive type that lets Toxapex effectively absorb Future Sight from Slowking-G and Iron Crown and become a much stronger check to Raging Bolt, Kyurem, and Hatterene. Alternatively, Tera Grass makes Toxapex a rock-solid check to Ogerpon-W (This is too strong, perhaps reword to "improving the matchup" or something similar) while also granting a resistance to Ground to better check Great Tusk and Landorus-T and a resistance to Electric to sponge Volt Switches from Raging Bolt and Iron Crown. Mention Leftovers as an option on double removal stall teams, Heavy-Duty Boots should be used on no or low removal stalls.

Toxapex is a fantastic asset to stall teams as a Toxic-spreading Regenerator pivot, a highly splashable Ogerpon-W check (Toxapex isn't a great check to Ogerpon-W, I would only emphasize the other pokemon), and a scout against unpredictable threats like Iron Valiant, Dragapult, and Kyurem. Dondozo and Blissey are two great partners who appreciate Toxapex's ability to scout Kyurem, thanks to its ability to survive every attack other than Choice Specs Tera Ice Freeze Dry. Once scouted, Dondozo answers most Dragon Dance Kyurem, while Blissey answers Choice Specs and Boots Attacker Kyurem. The two also appreciate Toxapex answering Utility Dragapult, which otherwise gets free entry on both. Furthermore, Blissey appreciates Toxapex scouting potential Trick users like Gholdengo and Darkrai. Toxapex answers mixed wallbreakers like Iron Valiant and Keldeo and relieves Blissey of pressure from Primarina and Walking Wake’s pivoting moves, while Blissey stonewalls special attackers that threaten Toxapex like Raging Bolt and Iron Moth. Likewise, Toxapex's opportunities to badly poison difficult physical sweepers like Dragon Dance Kyurem and Dragonite makes it much easier for Dondozo to answer them over the course of a game, with Dondozo checking Kingambit in return. Gliscor is another wonderful teammate that answers wallbreakers like Iron Moth and Raging Bolt (Usually stall runs physically defensive Gliscor, which does not really check these) and Ground-types like Landorus-T and Iron Treads (Iron Treads commonly runs Ice Spinner, Gliscor is not a good answer) that threaten Toxapex and sets entry hazards to keep up pressure against Ogerpon-W. Can mention how Gliscor can absorb Knock Off which Toxapex greatly appreciates, could mention Clefable and Corviknight as teammates for this as well. In return, Toxapex answers threats to Gliscor like Primarina, Ogerpon-W, and Weavile, negating their setup attempts with Haze. Toxapex appreciates the presence of Weezing-G thanks to its ability to punish opposing Gliscor and Clefable, which would otherwise wall Toxapex. Weezing-G also lets Toxapex run Leftovers, which greatly helps it check several threats, and also makes Toxapex care less about Knock Off. Together, the two can strongly pressure Ogerpon-W and Garganacl. (Expand a bit on how these two pressure Ogerpon-W and Garganacl) In return, Toxapex helps spread Toxic to more quickly wear down entry hazard setters like Great Tusk and Landorus-T and special wallbreakers that threaten Weezing-G like Primarina and Kyurem. Could add a pokemon that is a more sturdy or long-term Gholdengo answer as a good teammate, as mentioned earlier Toxapex doesn't necessarily 1v1 Gholdengo well.
 
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