Quality Control holy ghost (mega sableye) (QC 1/2)

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Defensive (Sableye) @ Sablenite
Ability: Prankster
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD
Impish / Relaxed Nature
- Knock Off
- Will-O-Wisp
- Protect
- Recover

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Mega Sableye's access to Magic Bounce, allowing it to bounce hazards from Pokemon like Landorus-T, Ferrothorn, and Toxapex, as well as decent utility moves and servicable bulk, allows it to have a irreplicable role on stall teams. It's typing also allows it to block Rapid Spin attenpts from Great Tusk and Terapagos, as well as check Mega Medicham, one of the most dangerous Pokemon for stall teams to face. Knock Off can remove Heavy-Duty Boots from Pokemon like Moltres, Zapdos, and Terapagos, allowing them to get worn down by hazards over the course of a long game. Will-O-Wisp greatly reduces the damage output of Pokemon like Great Tusk, Ogerpon-W, and Garchomp, allowing for Mega Sableye to safely stay in on them long-term. Protect allows Sableye to mega evolve safely, scout moves from common Choice item users such as Kartana, Iron Valiant, and Hisuian Samurott, and gradually accrue chip damage from Will-o-Wisp, as well as Toxic from Mega Sableye's teammates. 248 EV’s in HP guarantees Mega Sableye takes the least amount of damage from Stealth Rock, just in case the opponent finds a way to set them up.

Mega Sableye is always constrained to stall teams, which appreciates it reflecting hazards for it’s team. Mega Sableye also functions as a check to common Fighting types like Mega Medicham, Great Tusk, and Zamazenta, threatening the with Wil-O-Wisp. This is appreciated by Pokemon like Chansey, Blissey, and Clodsire, which can now switch into special attackers that Mega Sableye can’t handle, like Raging Bolt, Zapdos, and Mega Charizard Y. Clodsire in particular, as well as Toxapex, can help with Fairy-types that Mega Sableye would have to run from, like Iron Valiant and Mega Diancie. Although Mega Sableye is really good at reflecting hazards, it can’t nessesarily remove hazards once they go up. Additionally, hazard setters like the aforementioned Mega Diancie, Tinkaton, and Hisuian Samurott can bypass this by either going through Magic Bounce or just threatening out Mega Sableye, causing some unwanted mind games. As such, Pokemon that can deal with these Pokemon are amazing partners, like Clodsire, Dondozo, and Corviknight respectively, are amazing partners. Corviknight in particular can run Defog to remove these hazards if Mega Sableye is put in a position where it can’t block them.

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[SET]
Defensive (Sableye) @ Sablenite
Ability: Prankster
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD
Impish / Relaxed Nature
- Knock Off
- Will-o-Wisp
- Protect
- Recover

[SET COMMENTS]

Mega Sableye's access to Magic Bounce, allowing it to bounce hazards from Pokemon like Landorus-T, Ferrothorn, and Toxapex, as well as decent utility moves and servicable bulk, allows it to have a irreplicapble ik its gp but it annoyed me lel role on stall teams. It's typing also allows it to block Rapid Spin attenpts from Great Tusk and Terapagos, as well as check Mega Medicham, one of the most dangerous Pokemon for stall teams to face. Knock Off can remove Heavy-Duty Boots from Pokemon like Moltres, Zapdos, and Terapagos, allowing them to get worn down by hazards over the course of a long game. Will-o capitalise -Wisp greatly reduces the damage output of Pokemon like Great Tusk, Iron Treads surely there are better examples than this, maybe like wetpon?, and Garchomp, allowing for Mega Sableye to safely stay in on them long-term. Protect allows Sableye to mega evolve safely, scout moves from common Choice item users such as Kartana, Iron Valiant, and Hisuian Samurott, and gradually accrue chip damage from Will-o-Wisp, as well as Toxic from Mega Sableye's teammates. 248 EV’s in HP guarantees Mega Sableye takes the least amount of damage from Stealth Rock, just in case the opponent finds a way to set them up.

Mega Sableye is always constrained to stall teams, which appreciates it reflecting hazards and checking threats like Great Tusk and Mega Medicham. This is appreciated by Pokemon like Chansey, Blissey, and Clodsire, which can now switch into special attackers that Mega Sableye can’t handle, like Raging Bolt, Zapdos, and Mega Charizard Y. Clodsire in particular, as well as Toxapex, can help with Fairy-types that Mega Sableye would have to run from, like Iron Valiant, Tapu Koko pex doesnt rly wanna come in on this, and Mega Diancie. Although Mega Sableye is really good at reflecting hazards, it can’t nessesarily remove hazards once they go up. Additionally, hazard setters like the aforementioned Mega Diancie, Tinkaton, and Hisuian Samurott can bypass this by either going through Magic Bounce or just threatening out Mega Sableye, causing some unwanted mind games. As such, Pokemon that can deal with these Pokemon are amazing partners, like Dondozo, Clodsire, and Corviknight, are amazing partners. i would prob make it more explicit which one beats which, caus dozo doesnt rly beat dia and stuff Corviknight in particular can run Defog to remove these hazards if Mega Sableye is put in a position where it can’t block them.

I would mention somewhere what msab switches in on, you very briefly mentioned mmedi tusk in first sentence, but I would do a sentence abt it being a fight immune against like zama mmedi tusk etc and how that helps like chansey and blissey

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add remove comment sorry for yapsesh but i think a just a little more elaboration is probably warranted. would like to take another look at this before stamping but feel free to reach out if im being obtuse
[SET]
Defensive (Sableye) @ Sablenite
Ability: Prankster
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Def / 8 SpD
Impish / Relaxed Nature
- Knock Off
- Will-O-Wisp
- Protect
- Recover

[SET COMMENTS]

Mega Sableye's access to Magic Bounce, allowing it to bounce hazards from Pokemon like Landorus-T, Ferrothorn, and Toxapex I understand why you said pex but in practice idt u ever ever ever want to bring sableye in on pex since scald burns are so disastrous. I think a better example would maybe be something like tusk, as well as decent utility moves and servicable bulk, allows it to have a irreplicable role on stall teams. Its typing also allows it to block Rapid Spin attempts from Great Tusk and Terapagos, as well as check Mega Medicham, one of the most dangerous Pokemon for stall teams to face. Knock Off can remove Heavy-Duty Boots from Pokemon like Moltres, Zapdos, and Terapagos, allowing them to get worn down by hazards over the course of a long game. Will-O-Wisp greatly reduces the damage output of Pokemon like Great Tusk, Ogerpon-W, and Garchomp, allowing for Mega Sableye to safely stay in on them long-term. I think you could elaborate on how important knock and wisp damage are for stall especally vs fat shit like toxapex and glowking. i think a sentence or 2 just saying like "being able to actually do more than 30% to a regenerator guy is actually really important for stall to not get dismantled by glowking future sight stuff" Protect allows Sableye to mega evolve safely, scout moves from common Choice item users such as Kartana, Iron Valiant, kart is uubl now and choice ival isnt the most common thing ever (but you can keep that tbh) i would instead maybe say like rbolt or scarf dengo especially to deny trick attempts from the latter and Hisuian Samurott, and gradually accrue chip damage from Will-o-Wisp, as well as Toxic from Mega Sableye's teammates. 248 EV’s in HP guarantees Mega Sableye takes the least amount of damage from Stealth Rock, just in case the opponent finds a way to set them up.

Mega Sableye is always constrained to stall teams, which appreciates it reflecting hazards for its team. Mega Sableye also functions as a check to common Fighting-types like Mega Medicham, Great Tusk, and Zamazenta, threatening them with Wil-O-Wisp. This is appreciated by Pokemon like Chansey, Blissey, and Clodsire, which can now switch into special attackers that Mega Sableye can’t handle, like Raging Bolt, Zapdos, and Mega Charizard Y. Clodsire in particular, as well as Toxapex, can help with Fairy-types that Mega Sableye would have to run from, like Iron Valiant and Mega Diancie. Although Mega Sableye is really good at able to deny hazards, it can’t nessesarily remove hazards once they go up. Additionally, hazard setters like the aforementioned Mega Diancie, Tinkaton Heatran, tink is so beyond fake and Hisuian Samurott can bypass this by either going through Magic Bounce or just threatening out Mega Sableye, causing some unwanted mind games leading to hazards being able to come up regardless. As such, Pokemon that can deal with these Pokemon are amazing partners, like Clodsire, Dondozo, and Corviknight respectively, are amazing partners. im personally not a fan of this sentence because if sable is threatened out by these guys and they get hazards up, they dont need to engage with the defensive partners because they already got their rocks up to chip those defensive partners. I dont think you have to write a whole like "how to stall 101" but i think mentioning either other fog guys like gliscor (who also can answer mdia conveniently) should probably be mentioned. I think saying smth like "gliscor and corv can defog and threaten these threats with iron head or eq, but for hrott some way to punish contact or other method of dealing with ceaseless edge is needed" sorry for yapsesh but like just defensive switching in on these setters that can beat msab isnt going to actually deal with the pressure they exert if u catch my drift Corviknight in particular can run Defog to remove these hazards if Mega Sableye is put in a position where it can’t block them. can integrate this w the above stuff

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