I realy would like to have this get rated

[Lightsabre]

THIS IS MY OLD RMT which now exists somewhere way back in the pages and I can't edit or bump it. I would like to qualify for voting on the lati's so I realy need something to make this team work. any help(please explain the reason) would be vastly appreciated :)

Team at a glance

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with Choice Scarf
Hasty
252SPEED/120ATK/138SPATK
Fire Blast
Ice Beam
Stone Edge
Earth Quake/Crunch​

I switched my old CB TTar for a CS version. I'm currently using EQ but will switch if given a reason. the biggest reason for this switch was I got 5-0ed by a Mamo :( I hope this will help.

and Life Orb
Flash Fire
Hasty
252SPEED/126SPATK/100ATK
Flamethrower
HP[ground]
Crunch
Extreemspeed


well, this guy can work wonders at many times. I took him over scarfdoom becuase I like to switch between these attacks. now I use him more as a finnisher then a lead. HP[ground] over ice for the obvios heatran switchins

and Life Orb
Technician
Jolly
252ATK/232HP/26SPEED
Bullet Punch
X scizzor
Brick Break
Swords Dance


well, who doesn't run this beast. With the Bullet punch blessing that platinum gave it, this beast became a huge hit. Jolly so I can outrun other Scizors. I might try running more speed evs to outrun some other stuff

and leftovers
Timid or Bold
EVs=252SPATK/252 speed or 252DEF/
Roost/roar
Thunderbolt
Heat Wave
HP[grass]


replacing my rotom is this. He also takes care of my swampert dificulty. I only lose the ability to trick stuff when I get this. I like the option for instant recovery, but would roar be worth switching?

and Leftovers
Calm
252HP/156DEF/100SPATK
Charge Beam/Thunderbolt
Ice Beam
Rest
Sleep Talk


My special wall. I know Blissey is technicaly better, but I hate that thing and this can take hits almost as well anyway. I currently use charge beam for the SPATK boost, but the accuracy has costed me a couple of times. Should I switch? also absorbs statuses for the team.

and Leftovers
Sand Veil
Jolly
180HP/56ATK/56DEF/218SPEED
Earth Quake
Ice Fang
Roost
Swords Dance/Stealth Rock


With enough speed Evs to outrun Jolly max speed luke and the rest distibuted among the more important stats, this set works alot of the time. I use SD but SR is something this team lacks, and it can change the battle severely. should I switch?





and that's my team
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Threat list

I'll edit this in later, if you see any glaring weaknesses then PLEASE PLEASE point them out

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Thank you for reading, please rate :)​

 

[TAY]

This thread is being locked under rules 3 and 15:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

15. As a site dedicated to competitive battling, we request that your team is as competitive as possible within its given metagame. In-game teams, gimmick teams and teams that demonstrate a lack of understanding of the metagame will be closed. Battle Tower teams are permitted. "Theme Teams" are also OK as long as they demonstrate an understanding of the competitive metagame they are to be used in. This is completely up to the discretion of the mods.

Besides the descriptions severely lacking in content, your comment regarding Blissey is pretty clearly contrary to rule 15. Your EV spreads and sets also make it pretty clear that you don't know what you're doing.