I want to know if my team is good or bad (RMT)

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Weavile @ NeverMeltIce
Ability: Pressure
EVs:200 Atk/166 Spd
Nature: Brave
- Metal Claw
- Beat Up
- Ice Shard
- Icy Wind
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Feraligatr @ Sea Incense
Ability: Torrent
EVs:207 Hp/168 def.
Nature: Calm
- Surf
- Hydro Pump
- Shadow Claw
- Mud Sport
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Electivire @ Magnet
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs:199 Atk/135 Spd
Nature:Adamant
- Thunder Punch
- Ice Punch
- Cross Chop
- Earthquake
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Magmortar @ Charcoal
Ability: Flame Body
EVs:189 Sp.atk/135 sp.def
Nature: Modest
- Flamethrower
- Psychic
- Hyper Beam
- SolarBeam
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Persian @ Silk Scarf
Ability: Technician
EVs:145 Spd./165 Hp.
Nature: Relaxed
- Nasty Plot
- Assurance
- Protect
- Night Slash

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Rampardos @ X Speed
Ability:
EVs:252 Atk / 158 Spd / 4 Sp.Def
Nature: Impish
- Assurance
- Head Smash
- Zen Headbutt
- Ancient Power
 
What does your team do? Who the starter? who the wall or sweeper or speical sweeper etc, who are they weak against! To your experience...

Maybe that why not much peepz are posting
 
I don't know that much my friend gave me his Pokemon game and they are in the order of which they appear on my team. So i am basically a beginner. Oh and Ferailgatr is my speacil sweeper. I am not really familar with the sweeper things and my friend is not either
 
There are many things on this team that need help. EVs not equal to 510/not divisible by 4, strange Natures/Moves that do not fit the needs of specific Pokemon (EX: Relaxed Persian with Nasty Plot and no special attack moves), lack of walls, ect. I recommend you read some of the guilds featured at Smogon before attempting to create a team.
 
Rule Number 1: Never use two moves of the same type. There are rare exceptions though, but for the most part(cough Weavile, Fergy). I know this kid on my forum who wanted this moveset for a Pikachu:
Thunder, Thunderbolt, Volt Tackle, Iron Tail.

I lol'ed

Also, you aren't really familiar with support moves I guess. There are 6 pokemon here who *can* sweep, and you have nothing to absorb damage. Read the analysis page, and the Team Building article, please.
 
Also, never use items that boost only one type of move. They're, to put it lightly, fucking useless. You're better off with recovery items or items that boost a certain stat.

+ everything above posters have said.
 
Another thing, don't use natures that lower a poke's best stats. For instance, Brave on Weavile. If you want a + attack nature, go adamant, which lower's weaviles useless Sp. Atk, not his awesome speed
 
FirepkmnGirl101 said:
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Weavile @ Life Orb / Focus Sash / Choice Band
Ability: Pressure
EVs:252 Attack / 252 Speed
Nature: Jolly
- Night Slash / Pursuit
- Ice Punch
- Ice Shard
- Brick Break

Standard sets work best on him... But you can stick Counter in here as long as you pair it with Focus Sash.

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Feraligatr @ Salac Berry
Ability: Torrent
EVs:252 Attack / 252 Speed
Nature: Adamant
- Swords Dance
- Waterfall
- Dragon Claw
- Endure

A set I designed. Rediculously powerful once Torrent / STAB / Swords Dance are working together.


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Electivire @ Expert Belt
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs:200 Attack / 56 Special Attack / 252 Speed
Nature:Hasty
- Thunder Punch
- Ice Punch
- Cross Chop
- Flamethrower

This way Bronzong can't totally wall it.

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Magmortar @ Choice Specs
Ability: Flame Body
EVs:252 Special Attack / 252 Speed
Nature: Modest
- Flamethrower
- Focus Blast
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball
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Persian @ Life Orb
Ability: Technician
EVs:252 Speed / 252 Special Attack
Nature: Timid
- Nasty Plot
- Swift
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball

If you want to use Nasty Plot this is literally all it can do. Focus sash could work for an item...

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Rampardos @ Choice Band
Ability:
EVs:252 Atk / 252 HP
Nature: Adamant
- Earthquake
- Head Smash
- Zen Headbutt
- Crunch

X Speed has no affect in a Wifi battle. Rampardos is very slow, but Choice Band will let Head Smash massacre basically anything that doesn't resist it in one hit.
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You have a team of 6 sweepers with no defenses what so ever. A Cresselia could almost make up for that, but you would have no counter for tyranitar or Weavile.
 
So with Blue Harvest's suggestions in mind, you'll have to get rid of your Weavile, Electivire, Persian, and Rampardos for new ones.

Also, when building a team, watch out for any weaknesses your Pokemon have. If your team has at least 3 Pokemon weak to a single type, that's a bad thing and you should fix it.
Right now, 3 of your Pokemon of are weak against 2 specific types. Do you know what those 2 types are?
(Don't tell her, people. Let her figure it out by herself)
 
There are far batter pokemon to use than Feraligatr and a few others. They might work, but then again they may not most of the time. May I suggest the Overused garchomp for a place here? Having a taunter is really helpful. Rampardos is almost a joke to use in competitive battling. X-Speed is definitely not good...Redo some of the team members and movesets as well as EV spreads.
 
BlitzTheReaper said:
There are far batter pokemon to use than Feraligatr and a few others. They might work, but then again they may not most of the time. May I suggest the Overused garchomp for a place here? Having a taunter is really helpful. Rampardos is almost a joke to use in competitive battling. X-Speed is definitely not good...Redo some of the team members and movesets as well as EV spreads.
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Feraligator can be a real threat with Swords Dance. Garchomp has more attack / speed, but he doesn't have Torrent and needs to deal with a 4x weakness to a type that pokes tend to have shoved on them "just incase".

Rampardos is not a joke if your team doesn't have a sturdy ground type. Choice Band Head Smash decimates EVERYTHING that doesn't resist it.
 
SirRaven said:
Also, never use items that boost only one type of move. They're, to put it lightly, fucking useless.
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Not useless. They increase power of type-represented moves %20 without recoil damage or becoming stuck in choice. Some Pokemon use them competitively to guarantee a KO without sacrificing some of it's bulkiness.

BlitzTheReaper said:
Rampardos is almost a joke to use in competitive battling.
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If Rampardos was a joke in competitive battling, they wouldn't of mentioned him in the Speed Tier. Also, his Trick Room capabilities are phenomenal.

This team is too lost to be editing, we'd just end up replacing most everything.
 
True Rampardos is excellent in Trick room, but on occassions it may be brought down. Many sweepers(AKA Garchomp) or Rhyperior may come. The pokemon was just an example. I know Feraligatr can sweep, but how effective against others? Anyways I can not debate now. School is pulling me away.
 
FirepkmnGirl101 said:
I don't really care I am keeping the PBR event pokemon the same
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Okay then, but your wasting valuable space. If your using persain, then please use the fake out starter set. And Mud sport on ferialgatr? Give me a break. This team can be saved in this form, but It's going to need a lot of work. Can I recomend throwing in bronzong to make up for your 3/6 CB Mamoswine weakness?
 
So we spent time helping you and you just ignore all of our advice and give us that outburst?

Whatever, you're probably just a troll. No one's going to help you anymore with that attitude.
 
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