If Castform was good I'd use it but its bad and btw this is a RMT

[Reliking]

OHAYY
this is my rmt.

So today I came to the conclusion that Raikou is a badass mofo. So yea. I was just like "I should use Raikou..."

Wouldnt it be cool if I had some kind of weird offensive core that isnt FWG but comes pretty close?

Everybody loves a good Spiker

Not only is this thing also a badass mofo, but it also blocks rapid Spin n' stuff.

GET THE FUCK OUT OF THE WAY ITS XATU

The gangs all here

Scolipede@leftovers
Poison Point, Jolly
4 Hp/252 Att/252 Spe
-Toxic Spikes
-Spikes
-Megahorn
-Earthquake

Give me alternative to dis kthx.

Heatran@ Choice Scarf
Flash Fire, Modest
252 SpA/4 SpD/252 Spe
-Fire Blast
-Dragon Pulse
-Earth Power
-Hidden Power (Ice)

pretty chill. Burns stuff. (Hah see what i did there)

Raikou@Leftovers
Pressure, Timid
252 SpA/ 4 SpD/ 252 Spe
-Calm Mind
-Shadow Ball
-Thunderbolt
-Hidden Power (Ice)

Ehhhh...I think I need a different set.

Cofagrigius@Leftovers
Mummy, Bold
252 Hp/ 136 Def/ 120 SpD
-Rest
-Haze
-Will-O-Wisp
-Hex

IDK on Hex or Shadow Ball.....

Azumarril@Choice Band
Huge Power, Adamant
232 HP/ 252 Att/ 24 Spe
-Aqua Jet
-Superpower
-Waterfall
-Ice Punch

AQUA JET WHOOOOPPPSHHH

Xatu@Leftovers
Magic Bounce, Bold
248 HP/ 180 Defense/ 80 Spe
-FeatherDance
-Psychic
-Hidden Power (Fire)
-Roost

MOVE THE fudge OUT OF THE WAY Snitches ITS XATU



Tell me what to change.

KAKKAAAAAAAW

 

[JuliusEW]

On Cofagrigius go with Shadow Ball instead of Hex. It'll prove better when you don't want to rely on WoW accuracy as well as hitting pokes with subs up that you can't status better.

 

[kingdra22]

This is really embarrassing... for you. They're not being mean, they ALL are trying to imply that your team is obviously something that you just made out of fun. If it isn't, then sorry for the erroneous assumption, but if you really want your team to be taken seriously [and receive some good rates] you need to write more about them, tell us what they do in your team, how they benefit you. And by writing more, I mean more than a line of words. 3 lines is usually enough, but if you could write more, why not?

 

[mukery]

HP Ice AND Dragon Pulse on heatran? You will most likely only need one move to take care of dragons, use HP Grass instead.

 

[Faladran]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which puts you in violation of the rule above. Please elaborate more on each team member - about 3 or 4 solid sentences per member is a good goal to reach for. The RMT archive contains some examples of well-written RMTs. If you fix your descriptions, PM me with the updates and I'll be happy to unlock your thread.