UU Indeedee

[Splash]

[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Mystical Fire
move 3: Hyper Voice / Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Terrain Extender
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe



[SET COMMENTS]
Indeedee-M is a fantastic support option for hyper offensive teams, being able to set Psychic Terrain for setup sweepers such as Polteageist, Necrozma, and Barbaracle, helping to limit opposing offensive counterplay with priority. With its solid Special Attack stat and above-average Speed stat in conjunction with its unique ability Psychic Surge, Indeedee-M is able to set itself apart from other Psychic-types in the UU tier. A Psychic Terrain-boosted Psychic deals a great amount of damage to neutral targets and can OHKO Pokemon such as Roserade and Machamp. Mystical Fire allows Indeedee-M to hit Steel-types such as Bronzong, Doublade, and Escavalier. Hyper Voice is a strong STAB move, being able to hit Pokemon such as Incineroar, Necrozma, and Reuniclus. Dazzling Gleam allows Indeedee-M to hit Umbreon for super effective damage and OHKO Pangoro. Calm Mind allows Indeedee-M to increase its wallbreaking potential to muscle past bulky Pokemon like Milotic and Sylveon. Terrain Extender allows Indeedee-M's Psychic Terrain to last 8 turns, which can be vital for boosting the power of Psychic and, more importantly, for its teammates to take advantage of for a longer duration. Maximum Speed investment alongside a Timid nature is necessary so that Indeedee-M can outpace threats such as Roserade and Lucario.


Indeedee-M serves as a great teammate on Hyper Offensive teams, as it is able to provide Psychic Terrain support for setup sweepers. Polteageist is fantastic teammate for Indeedee-M, as Polteageist benefits greatly from Psychic Terrain, being able to deny priority attacks from Pokemon such as Doublade, Golisopod, and Sirfetch'd, thus aiding it to sweep. Furthermore, Psychic Terrain boosts the power of Polteageist's Stored Power, allowing it to OHKO Sylveon at +2 and do greater damage to Gigalith. In return, Indeedee-M can wear down Polteageist's most common checks such as Incineroar, Gigalith, and Drapion. Late-game sweepers such as Dragon Dance Haxorus and especially Necrozma benefit from Psychic Terrain, preventing revenge killers such as Haxorus and Golisopod from revenge killing them in addition to boosting Necrozma's Photon Geyser; in return, Indeedee-M can weaken Incineroar for it. Indeedee appreciates Swords Dance users such as Pangoro, Cobalion, and Incineroar as teammates, as they can threaten Pokemon such as Umbreon, Reuniclus, Bronzong, and opposing Incineroar, which can take Indeedee-M's attacks fairly easily. Indeedee-M appreciates Stealth Rock setters such as Cobalion and Barbaracle and Spikes setters such as Froslass, as they are able to wear down the opposing team. Furthermore, Shell Smash Barbaracle can also serve as a mid-game wallbreaker or function as a late-game sweeper on a team with Indeedee-M, since Psychic Terrain can support it in the process.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Splash, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[Estarossa, 461329], [Twilight, 344575]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Estronic, 240732]]

 

[Twilight]

Splash we have discussed that we want this to be the Indeedee set.

name: Support
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Mystical Fire
move 3: Hyper Voice / Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Terrain Extender
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

 

[Estarossa]

[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Mystical Fire
move 3: Hyper Voice / Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Terrain Extender
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe



[SET COMMENTS]
With its solid Special Attack stat and above-average Speed stat, in conjunction with its unique ability Psychic Surge, Indeedee is able to set itself apart from other Psychic-types in the UU tier. You should focus exactly on Indeedee's niche in the intro here, specifically that its a fantastic support option on HO that can set Psychic terrain for Pokemon like Necrozma, Polteageist, and Barbaracle to benefit from by severely limiting offensive counterplay to them, while being able to weaken some of their checks like Incineroar. A terrain boosted Psychic deals a great amount of damage to neutral targets and can OHKO Pokemon such as Roserade, Toxtricity, Galarian Weezing, and Machamp. Mystical Fire allows Indeedee to hit Steel-types such as Bronzong, Doublade, and Escavalier. Hyper Voice is a strong STAB boosted move being able to hit Pokemon such as Incineroar, Drapion, Necrozma, Reuniclus, and Gardevoir harder. Unecessary amount of examples here. Dazzling Gleam allows Indeedee to break through Umbreon easier, you won't break through Umbreon even with Dazzling Gleam, just say that it allows you to weaken Umbreon much more and OHKO Pangoro. Calm Mind allows Indeedee to increase its wallbreaking potential to muscle past bulky Pokemon or sweep late-game. Unlikely to sweep late game with its speed stat, its really just to help wallbreak better through mons like Zong/incin Terrain extender allows Indeedee's Psychic Terrain to last 8 turns, which can be vital for boosting its Psychic attacks and for its teammates to take advantage of. more specifically its to ensure it lasts long enough for setup sweeping teammates to actually benefit from it so that golisopod/haxorus/doub can't just revenge them immediately Maximum Special Attack and Speed investment alongside a Timid nature is necessary so that Indeedee can hit as hard and be as fast as possible to outpace threats such as Roserade and Lucario. (Fluff, just say its to outsped Roserade and Lucario)


Mention specifically that it fits on Hyper Offense teams that appreciate its Psychic terrain support to prevent revenge killers.Polteageist serves as a great teammate for Indeedee, as Polteageist benefits greatly from Psychic Terrain being able to deny priority attacks from Pokemon such as Doublade, Golisopod, and Sirfetch'd, aiding it to sweep. You should briefly comment on how it boosts the power of Stored Power, giving a stronger attack for Gigalith and an attack that can OHKO Sylveon. In return, Indeedee can wear down Polteageist's most common checks such as Incineroar, Gigalith, and Drapion. Other Psychic-types such as Necrozma, Gardevoir, and Espeon Espeon + Indeedee is ludicrously difficult to make work, and you'd probably be running DD Necrozma instead as a Psychic-type if you were running Espeon Screens all benefit from Psychic Terrain, boosting their attacks. Rephrase this section to focus specifically on Dragon Dance Necrozma as a teammate, since it loves Golisopod and CB Hax being unable to revenge kill it, having Incineroar weakened, and its stab being powered up. VoltTurn users such as Noivern, Flygon, Rotom-W, and Toxtricity can allow Indeedee to enter the battle safely. Feel free to bring up Shift Gear Toxtricity, but rest are not HO relevant. Indeedee appreciates Pangoro, Cobalion, and Incineroar as teammates, as they can threaten Pokemon such as Umbreon, Reuniclus, Bronzong, and opposing Incineroar which can take Indeedee's attacks fairly easily. Talk about how Coba can provide entry hazards, and specifically mention SD Pangoro and Incineroar. Sylveon can take Dark-type attacks that threaten Indeedee, in addition to providing Wish support for it. Bulky Water-types such as Milotic and Rotom-Wash can take attacks from threats such as Golisopod and Darmanitan which both threaten Indeedee. Again, not relevant to HO. Electric-types such as Nasty Plot Rotom-W, Toxtricity, and Heliolisk are able to threaten bulky water-types such as Milotic, Mantine, and Vaporeon, which Indeedee can struggle to break. Likewise, and Toxtricity already being mentioned above Celebi is also able to aid in weakening Indeedee's shared checks such as Gigalith and Incineroar. Late game sweepers such as Haxorus, Necrozma, Reuniclus, appreciate Indeedee's ability to break through teams early-mid game with Calm Mind. Put the Haxorus stuff up with Necrozma, talk specifically about how it likes rkers like Golisopod / CB Hax being prevented Indeedee appreciates Stealth Rock setters such as Cobalion, Bronzong, and Gigalith, Barbaracle in addition to Spikes setters such as Roserade, and Golispod, Froslass being able to wear down the opposing team. Try and put this after the Coba point so it isn't so disjointed.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Splash, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

Please tag me after you have implemented this, would like to have another look due to the large amount of comments. There's a lot of stuff to remove or edit here due to a lot of reference's to non-Hyper Offense teams and teammates, and a lack of focus on exactly what niche it provides to such teams in the introduction.

 

[Estarossa]

was PM'd on discord to say this was ready for another check.

[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Mystical Fire
move 3: Hyper Voice / Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Terrain Extender
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe



[SET COMMENTS]
With its solid Special Attack stat and above-average Speed stat, in conjunction with its unique ability Psychic Surge, Indeedee is able to set itself apart from other Psychic-types in the UU tier. Indeedee is a fantastic support option on Hyper Offensive teams, being able to set PsychicTerrain for setup sweepers such as Polteageist, Necrozma, and Barbaracle while limiting helping to limit opposing offensive counterplay with priority. I would lead with this statement and just incorporate the stats part into it and mention how it can weaken common Pokemon like Incineroar for its teammates. A terrain boosted Psychic deals a great amount of damage to neutral targets and can OHKO Pokemon such as Roserade, Toxtricity, Galarian Weezing, and Machamp. Mystical Fire allows Indeedee to hit Steel-types such as Bronzong, Doublade, and Escavalier. Hyper Voice is a strong STAB boosted move being able to hit Pokemon such as Incineroar, Necrozma, and Reuniclus harder. Dazzling Gleam allows Indeedee to hit Umbreon harder, and OHKO Pangoro. Calm Mind allows Indeedee to increase its wallbreaking potential to muscle past bulky Pokemon. Terrain extender allows Indeedee's Psychic Terrain to last 8 turns, which can be vital for boosting its Psychic attacks and more importantly, for its teammates to take advantage of for a longer duration. Maximum Speed investment alongside a Timid nature is necessary so that Indeedee can outpace threats such as Roserade and Lucario.


Indeedee serves as a great teammate on Hyper Offensive teams, as it is able to provide Psychic terrain support for set up sweepers. Polteageist is fantastic teammate for Indeedee, as Polteageist benefits greatly from Psychic Terrain being able to deny priority attacks from Pokemon such as Doublade, Golisopod, and Sirfetch'd, aiding it to sweep, and Psychic Terrain boosts the base power of Polteageist's Stored Power allowing it to OHKO Sylveon at +2 and do greater damage to Gigalith. In return, Indeedee can wear down Polteageist's most common checks such as Incineroar, Gigalith, and Drapion. Late-game sweepers such as Dragon Dance Haxorus and especially Necrozma benefit from Psychic Terrain, preventing revenge killers such as Haxorus and Golisopod from revenge killing it in addition to boosting Necrosma's Photon Geyser, and in return, Indeedee can weaken Incineroar for it. Indeedee appreciates Swords Dance users such as Pangoro, Cobalion, and Incineroar as teammates, as they can threaten Pokemon such as Umbreon, Reuniclus, Bronzong, and opposing Incineroar which can take Indeedee's attacks fairly easily. Celebi is also able to aid in weakening Indeedee's shared checks such as Gigalith and Incineroar. Don't like this mention particularly, Celebi faces too much competition from DD Necrozma which is extremely good on HO right now. Indeedee appreciates Stealth Rock setters such as Cobalion and Barbaracle and Spikes setters such as Froslass as they are able to wear down the opposing team. Give a little information about how well Shell Smash Barbaracle can break for late game cleaners here, and how it can also serve as a late game cleaner itself due to Indeedee's Psychic Terrain.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Splash, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

QC 1/2.

 

[Twilight]

[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Mystical Fire
move 3: Hyper Voice / Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Terrain Extender
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its solid Special Attack stat and above-average Speed stat, in conjunction with its unique ability Psychic Surge, Indeedee is able to set itself apart from other Psychic-types in the UU tier. Indeedee is a fantastic support option on Hyper Offensive teams, being able to set Psychic Terrain for setup sweepers such as Polteageist, Necrozma, and Barbaracle, helping to limit opposing offensive counterplay with priority. This sentence should be the first thing mentioned. The main reason to use it is because of the support it creates with Psychic Terrain. You can mention afterward how the ability to do this + its Speed and SpA set it apart. A terrain boosted Psychic deals a great amount of damage to neutral targets and can OHKO Pokemon such as Roserade, Toxtricity, Galarian Weezing, You OHKO these without terrain anyways and Machamp. Mystical Fire allows Indeedee to hit Steel-types such as Bronzong, Doublade, and Escavalier. Hyper Voice is a strong STAB boosted move being able to hit Pokemon such as Incineroar, Necrozma, and Reuniclus harder. Dazzling Gleam allows Indeedee to hit Umbreon harder, and OHKO Pangoro. Calm Mind allows Indeedee to increase its wallbreaking potential to muscle past bulky Pokemon like Milotic and Sylveon. Terrain extender allows Indeedee's Psychic Terrain to last 8 turns, which can be vital for boosting its Psychic attacks and more importantly, for its teammates to take advantage of for a longer duration. Maximum Speed investment alongside a Timid nature is necessary so that Indeedee can outpace threats such as Roserade and Lucario.

Indeedee serves as a great teammate on Hyper Offensive teams, as it is able to provide Psychic terrain support for setup sweepers. Polteageist is fantastic teammate for Indeedee, as Polteageist benefits greatly from Psychic Terrain being able to deny priority attacks from Pokemon such as Doublade, Golisopod, and Sirfetch'd, aiding it to sweep, and Psychic Terrain boosts the base power of Polteageist's Stored Power allowing it to OHKO Sylveon at +2 and do greater damage to Gigalith. In return, Indeedee can wear down Polteageist's most common checks such as Incineroar, Gigalith, and Drapion. Late-game sweepers such as Dragon Dance Haxorus and especially Necrozma benefit from Psychic Terrain, preventing revenge killers such as Haxorus and Golisopod from revenge killing it in addition to boosting Necrosma's Photon Geyser, and in return, Indeedee can weaken Incineroar for it. Indeedee appreciates Swords Dance users such as Pangoro, Cobalion, and Incineroar as teammates, as they can threaten Pokemon such as Umbreon, Reuniclus, Bronzong, and opposing Incineroar which can take Indeedee's attacks fairly easily. Indeedee appreciates Stealth Rock setters such as Cobalion and Barbaracle and Spikes setters such as Froslass as they are able to wear down the opposing team. Furthermore, Shell Smash Barbaracle can also serve as a mid-game wallbreaker and can also function as a late-game sweeper, with Indeedee's Psychic Terrain support.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Splash, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

Add credits 2/2

 

[Milak]

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[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Mystical Fire
move 3: Hyper Voice / Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Terrain Extender
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Indeedee-M is a fantastic support option on Hyper Offensive hyper offensive teams, being able to set Psychic Terrain for setup sweepers such as Polteageist, Necrozma, and Barbaracle, helping to limit opposing offensive counterplay with priority. With its solid Special Attack stat and above-average Speed stat, in conjunction with its unique ability Psychic Surge, Indeedee-M is able to set itself apart from other Psychic-types in the UU tier. A terrain Psychic Terrain-boosted Psychic deals a great amount of damage to neutral targets and can OHKO Pokemon such as Roserade and Machamp. Mystical Fire allows Indeedee-M to hit Steel-types such as Bronzong, Doublade, and Escavalier. Hyper Voice is a strong STAB boosted move,(AC) being able to hit Pokemon such as Incineroar, Necrozma, and Reuniclus harder. Dazzling Gleam allows Indeedee-M to hit Umbreon harder,(RC) and OHKO Pangoro. Calm Mind allows Indeedee-M to increase its wallbreaking potential to muscle past bulky Pokemon like Milotic and Sylveon. Terrain extender allows Indeedee-M's Psychic Terrain to last 8 turns, which can be vital for boosting its Psychic attacks and,(AC) more importantly, for its teammates to take advantage of for a longer duration. Maximum Speed investment alongside a Timid nature is necessary so that Indeedee-M can outpace threats such as Roserade and Lucario.

Indeedee-M serves as a great teammate on Hyper Offensive hyper offensive teams, as it is able to provide Psychic terrain Terrain support for setup sweepers. Polteageist is fantastic teammate for Indeedee-M, as Polteageist benefits greatly from Psychic Terrain,(AC) being able to deny priority attacks from Pokemon such as Doublade, Golisopod, and Sirfetch'd, thus aiding it to sweep.(RC -> full stop) and Furthermore,(AC) Psychic Terrain boosts the base power of Polteageist's Stored Power,(AC) allowing it to OHKO Sylveon at +2 and do greater damage to Gigalith. In return, Indeedee-M can wear down Polteageist's most common checks such as Incineroar, Gigalith, and Drapion. Late-game sweepers such as Dragon Dance Haxorus and especially Necrozma benefit from Psychic Terrain, preventing revenge killers such as Haxorus and Golisopod from revenge killing it them (didn't know if you were only referring to Necrozma or both, since you also mentioned Haxorus in the previous sentence) in addition to boosting Necrosma's Necrozma's Photon Geyser;(RC -> semicolon) and in return, Indeedee-M can weaken Incineroar for it Necrozma. Indeedee-M appreciates Swords Dance users such as Pangoro, Cobalion, and Incineroar as teammates, as they can threaten Pokemon such as Umbreon, Reuniclus, Bronzong, and opposing Incineroar,(AC) which can take Indeedee-M's attacks fairly easily. Indeedee-M appreciates Stealth Rock setters such as Cobalion and Barbaracle and Spikes setters such as Froslass,(AC) as they are able to wear down the opposing team. Furthermore, Shell Smash Barbaracle can also serve as a mid-game wallbreaker and can also function as a late-game sweeper, with Indeedee-M's Psychic Terrain support.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Splash, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[Estarossa, 461329], [Twilight, 344575]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

 

[Astra]

going over the amcheck
Milak: add remove comments
Estronic: add remove comments

swag

[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Mystical Fire
move 3: Hyper Voice / Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Terrain Extender
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Indeedee-M is a fantastic support option on Hyper Offensive for hyper offensive teams, being able to set Psychic Terrain for setup sweepers such as Polteageist, Necrozma, and Barbaracle, helping to limit opposing offensive counterplay with priority. With its solid Special Attack stat and above-average Speed stat, (RC) in conjunction with its unique ability Psychic Surge, Indeedee-M is able to set itself apart from other Psychic-types in the UU tier. A terrain Psychic Terrain-boosted Psychic deals a great amount of damage to neutral targets and can OHKO Pokemon such as Roserade and Machamp. Mystical Fire allows Indeedee-M to hit Steel-types such as Bronzong, Doublade, and Escavalier. Hyper Voice is a strong STAB boosted move,(AC) being able to hit Pokemon such as Incineroar, Necrozma, and Reuniclus harder (harder than what? if there's no specific move than just remove the word). Dazzling Gleam allows Indeedee-M to hit Umbreon harder,(RC) (same thing) and OHKO Pangoro. Calm Mind allows Indeedee-M to increase its wallbreaking potential to muscle past bulky Pokemon like Milotic and Sylveon. Terrain extender Extender allows Indeedee-M's Psychic Terrain to last 8 turns, which can be vital for boosting its the power of Psychic attacks and,(AC) more importantly, for its teammates to take advantage of for a longer duration. Maximum Speed investment alongside a Timid nature is necessary so that Indeedee-M can outpace threats such as Roserade and Lucario.

Indeedee-M serves as a great teammate on Hyper Offensive hyper offensive teams, as it is able to provide Psychic terrain Terrain support for setup sweepers. Polteageist is fantastic teammate for Indeedee-M, as Polteageist benefits greatly from Psychic Terrain,(AC) being able to deny priority attacks from Pokemon such as Doublade, Golisopod, and Sirfetch'd, thus aiding it to sweep.(RC -> full stop) and Furthermore,(AC) Psychic Terrain boosts the base power (using base power in the context of how stored power works may be a little confusing) of Polteageist's Stored Power,(AC) allowing it to OHKO Sylveon at +2 and do greater damage to Gigalith. In return, Indeedee-M can wear down Polteageist's most common checks such as Incineroar, Gigalith, and Drapion. Late-game sweepers such as Dragon Dance Haxorus and especially Necrozma benefit from Psychic Terrain, preventing revenge killers such as Haxorus and Golisopod from revenge killing it them (didn't know if you were only referring to Necrozma or both, since you also mentioned Haxorus in the previous sentence) in addition to boosting Necrosma's Necrozma's Photon Geyser;(RC -> semicolon) and in return, Indeedee-M can weaken Incineroar for it Necrozma. Indeedee-M appreciates Swords Dance users such as Pangoro, Cobalion, and Incineroar as teammates, as they can threaten Pokemon such as Umbreon, Reuniclus, Bronzong, and opposing Incineroar,(AC) which can take Indeedee-M's attacks fairly easily. Indeedee-M appreciates Stealth Rock setters such as Cobalion and Barbaracle and Spikes setters such as Froslass,(AC) as they are able to wear down the opposing team. Furthermore, Shell Smash Barbaracle can also serve as a mid-game wallbreaker and can also or (i'm assuming it can only do one or the other in a single game, if i'm wrong tho just lmk) function as a late-game sweeper, (RC) on a team with Indeedee-M's, (AC) since Psychic Terrain can support it in the process.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Splash, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[Estarossa, 461329], [Twilight, 344575]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

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[Hilomilo]

uploaded but please mind your spacing, particularly between the set and [SET COMMENTS]