VGC Kyurem-W

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Kyurem-White @ Assault Vest
Ability: Turboblaze
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison
EVs: 76 HP / 252 SpA / 180 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Blizzard
- Draco Meteor
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power

Kyurem-W freezes the competition in Regulation G! Kyurem-W is a monster on any Snow team with its powerful STAB Blizzard, which can both enable it to sweep and offer a slim chance for a freeze. Unlike other Snow users, Kyurem has access to Earth Power, which allows it to threaten Steel- and Fire-types that other Snow users cannot deal with alone such as Zamazenta and Incineroar. Freeze-Dry can threaten Water-types like Kyogre. This EV spread gives Kyurem-W enough Speed to outspeed Modest Terapagos. Thanks to its Assault Vest, Kyurem-W can almost always survive two Astral Barrages from Choice Specs Calyrex-S and three Water Spouts from Kyogre. Being able to capitalize on Kyurem's survivability is key to being able to run it: Alolan Ninetales provides Snow as well as Aurora Veil. A healer with Life Dew like Milotic or Pollen Puff Amoonguss can increase Kyurem-W's longevity as well. However, Fairy-types such as Flutter Mane, Steel-types such as Zamazenta, and Fighting-types like Koraidon are all potentially strong enough to OHKO it, so allies to check these threats such as Alolan Ninetales and Chi-Yu are appreciated.
 
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this is pretty good, however I would like a second look to see if I can trim anything off, dm me questions on cord
Kyurem-White @ Assault Vest
Ability: Turboblaze
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison
EVs: 76 HP / 252 SpA / 180 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Blizzard
- Draco Meteor
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power

Kyurem-White freezes the competition in Regulation G! Kyurem-White is true monster on any Snow team with its powerful STAB Blizzard which both can enable it to sweep and offer a slim, but considerable chance of a Freeze. Unlike other Snow abusers in other regulations, Kyurem has access to Earth Power which allow it to threaten otherwise dangerous Steel and Fire types that most Snow sweepers cannot deal with alone such as Gholdengo, Zamazenta and Torkoal Incineroar (this is up to you but incin seems more meta relevant, you can also add both if you would like). Freeze-Dry can threaten Water types like Urshifu-Rapid-Strike and Kyogre and Draco Meteor can be used in a variety of situations for an easy KO.(fluff, im ngl ep and/or freeze dry could possibly go but im fine with them staying) This EV spread gives Kyurem-White enough speed to outspeed Modest Terapagos. Thanks to its Assault Vest, Kyurem-White can easily shrug many off different special attacks such as potentially being able to survive up to three Astral Barrages (252 SpA Choice Specs Calyrex-Shadow Astral Barrage vs. 76 HP / 4 SpD Assault Vest Kyurem-White: 91-108 (43.3 - 51.4%) -- 5.9% chance to 2HKO the wording is pretty confusing for this area, you never survive 3 barrages you die to three. Say like it allows kyurem-white to almost always survive 2 barrages, change it up in your own words) from Choice Specs Calyrex-Shadow Rider as well as completely walling the otherwise unstoppable Kyogre's Water Spout. (this feels really weird, I don't really think you wall ogre with av but without av it does unstoppable damage, I think you need to change up a wording of this a bit)Being able to capitalize on Kyurem's survivability is key to being able to run it, Alolan Ninetales can set up Aurora Veil as well as provide Snow, boosting its defense. (this isn't the most important part of snow alolatales, you need to mention the blizzard 100% accuracy) you can run a healer with Life Dew like Sinistcha or Milotic, Heal Pulse like Indeedee-F or Pollen Puff Amoongus to increase its longevity as well. Kyurem-White is still vulnerable to some common threats, however. (unnecescary imo, you could start next sentence w/ however or something to transition) Fairy types such as Flutter Mane, Steel types such as Zacian and Zamazenta and Fighting types like Urshifu and Koraidon all are potentially strong enough to OHKO it so allies to check these threats such as Alolan Ninetales, Chi-Yu, and Urshifu-Rapid Strike are appreciated.
 
Flarefox_7 said:
this is pretty good, however I would like a second look to see if I can trim anything off, dm me questions on cord
Kyurem-White @ Assault Vest
Ability: Turboblaze
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison
EVs: 76 HP / 252 SpA / 180 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Blizzard
- Draco Meteor
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power

Kyurem-White freezes the competition in Regulation G! Kyurem-White is true monster on any Snow team with its powerful STAB Blizzard which both can enable it to sweep and offer a slim, but considerable chance of a Freeze. Unlike other Snow abusers in other regulations, Kyurem has access to Earth Power which allow it to threaten otherwise dangerous Steel and Fire types that most Snow sweepers cannot deal with alone such as Gholdengo, Zamazenta and Torkoal Incineroar (this is up to you but incin seems more meta relevant, you can also add both if you would like). Freeze-Dry can threaten Water types like Urshifu-Rapid-Strike and Kyogre and Draco Meteor can be used in a variety of situations for an easy KO.(fluff, im ngl ep and/or freeze dry could possibly go but im fine with them staying) This EV spread gives Kyurem-White enough speed to outspeed Modest Terapagos. Thanks to its Assault Vest, Kyurem-White can easily shrug many off different special attacks such as potentially being able to survive up to three Astral Barrages (252 SpA Choice Specs Calyrex-Shadow Astral Barrage vs. 76 HP / 4 SpD Assault Vest Kyurem-White: 91-108 (43.3 - 51.4%) -- 5.9% chance to 2HKO the wording is pretty confusing for this area, you never survive 3 barrages you die to three. Say like it allows kyurem-white to almost always survive 2 barrages, change it up in your own words) from Choice Specs Calyrex-Shadow Rider as well as completely walling the otherwise unstoppable Kyogre's Water Spout. (this feels really weird, I don't really think you wall ogre with av but without av it does unstoppable damage, I think you need to change up a wording of this a bit)Being able to capitalize on Kyurem's survivability is key to being able to run it, Alolan Ninetales can set up Aurora Veil as well as provide Snow, boosting its defense. (this isn't the most important part of snow alolatales, you need to mention the blizzard 100% accuracy) you can run a healer with Life Dew like Sinistcha or Milotic, Heal Pulse like Indeedee-F or Pollen Puff Amoongus to increase its longevity as well. Kyurem-White is still vulnerable to some common threats, however. (unnecescary imo, you could start next sentence w/ however or something to transition) Fairy types such as Flutter Mane, Steel types such as Zacian and Zamazenta and Fighting types like Urshifu and Koraidon all are potentially strong enough to OHKO it so allies to check these threats such as Alolan Ninetales, Chi-Yu, and Urshifu-Rapid Strike are appreciated.
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Got it, cut out 300+ words
I just put down "and three Water Spouts from Choice Specs Kyogre" for the Kyogre part

hope this looks better
 
looks good implement the change and send to gp
Kyurem-White @ Assault Vest
Ability: Turboblaze
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison
EVs: 76 HP / 252 SpA / 180 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Blizzard
- Draco Meteor
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power

Kyurem-White freezes the competition in Regulation G! Kyurem-White is a monster on any Snow team with its powerful STAB Blizzard which both can enable it to sweep and offer a slim chance for a Freeze. Unlike other Snow abusers, Kyurem has access to Earth Power which allows it to threaten Steel and Fire types that other Snow abusers cannot deal with alone such as Zamazenta and Incineroar. Freeze-Dry can threaten Water types like Kyogre. This EV spread gives Kyurem-White enough speed to outspeed Modest Terapagos. Thanks to its Assault Vest, Kyurem-White can almost always survive two Astral Barrages from Choice Specs Calyrex-Shadow Rider and three Water Spouts from Choice Specs (you only live 2 from specs, assault vest is more popular either way) Kyogre. Being able to capitalize on Kyurem's survivability is key to being able to run it, Alolan Ninetales provides Snow, giving Blizzard 100% accuracy, as well as Aurora Veil. A healer with Life Dew like Milotic or Pollen Puff Amoonguss can increase its longevity as well. However, Fairy types such as Flutter Mane, Steel types such as Zamazenta and Fighting types like Koraidon all are potentially strong enough to OHKO it so allies to check these threats such as Alolan Ninetales and Chi-Yu are appreciated.
 
Good job! I would give the GP Standards another quick glance when you get a chance, though:
- Forme names should be truncated (e.g. Kyurem-White should be Kyurem-W)
- Abuse means "to utilize negatively," and this is not the case here. So don't use abuse.
- There should be a hyphen between a type name and "types" (e.g. "Fire-types")
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Kyurem-White @ Assault Vest
Ability: Turboblaze
Level: 50
Tera Type: Poison
EVs: 76 HP / 252 SpA / 180 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Blizzard
- Draco Meteor
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power

Kyurem-White Kyurem-W freezes the competition in Regulation G! Kyurem-White Kyurem-W is a monster on any Snow team with its powerful STAB Blizzard, (AC) which can both can enable it to sweep and offer a slim chance for a freeze. Unlike other Snow abusers users, Kyurem has access to Earth Power, (AC) which allows it to threaten Steel- and Fire types Fire-types that other Snow abusers users cannot deal with alone such as Zamazenta and Incineroar. Freeze-Dry can threaten Water types like Kyogre. This EV spread gives Kyurem-White Kyurem-W enough Speed to outspeed Modest Terapagos. Thanks to its Assault Vest, Kyurem-White Kyurem-W can almost always survive two Astral Barrages from Choice Specs Calyrex-Shadow Rider Calyrex-S and three Water Spouts from Kyogre. Being able to capitalize on Kyurem's survivability is key to being able to run it (RC): colon Alolan Ninetales provides Snow (RC) giving Blizzard 100% accuracy (RC) dex info as well as Aurora Veil. A healer with Life Dew like Milotic or Pollen Puff Amoonguss can increase its Kyurem-W's longevity as well. However, Fairy types Fairy-types such as Flutter Mane, Steel types Steel-types such as Zamazenta, (AC) and Fighting types Fighting-types like Koraidon are all are potentially strong enough to OHKO it, (AC) so allies to check these threats such as Alolan Ninetales and Chi-Yu are appreciated.
 
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