Larvitar (Analysis)

It's immune to Thunder Wave.

It's risky switching into WoW. Missy might have NPed and will OHKO with HP Fighting/Shadow Ball. Or Sub.

Pururiru used water attack, it killed.

Toxic is pretty nonexistant.

Flame Orb is kinda better.




Stone Edge on the switch in hurts.



Important distinction.
The set is still good regardless of whether or not its good switching into status, I just thought I would point that out.

Also forgot about being immune to T-wave, CB tyranitar is a favorite of mine and I usually switch it into a T-wave if need be, I seem to forget bout type difference in Little Cup at times.....
 
Larvitar is a mediocre CBer compared to its Rock-Ground peers, such as Geodude and Rhyhorn. Not that CB's even that good in this meta on a Rock/Ground type. Larvitar's analysis should emphasize its usage of Dragon Dance/Rock Polish and Guts, and basically nothing else.
 
The set is still good regardless of whether or not its good switching into status, I just thought I would point that out.

Also forgot about being immune to T-wave, CB tyranitar is a favorite of mine and I usually switch it into a T-wave if need be, I seem to forget bout type difference in Little Cup at times.....

Flame Orb Guts boost=CB boost.

What about a Resttalk set? DD/Stone Edge/Rest/Sleep Talk @ Evo-stone, perhaps. There are a lot less water-types in Gen 5 than Gen 4 (I've mostly seen Pururiru and a few Scarfchou), and Snover is the only grass-type I've encountered a lot.

And Monmen, but they don't usually run offensive grass moves.

...could go in OC?
 
Flame Orb Guts boost=CB boost.

What about a Resttalk set? DD/Stone Edge/Rest/Sleep Talk @ Evo-stone, perhaps. There are a lot less water-types in Gen 5 than Gen 4 (I've mostly seen Pururiru and a few Scarfchou), and Snover is the only grass-type I've encountered a lot.

And Monmen, but they don't usually run offensive grass moves.

...could go in OC?

I'm thinking not. Stone Edge is not a good mono-attacking type as a lot of common Pokemon resist it (Tesshiido, Zuruggu, Meditite, Bronzor, Croagunk, Diglett). Also, a 1/3 chance of attacking really is too unreliable with 2 4x weaknesses. imagine: you're up against Chinchou and you have only a 1/3 * 0.8 (Stone Edge accuracy makes it even worse) chance of attacking before she KO's you. Same applies for every Water and Grass-type.
 
I'm thinking of adding this set to OC:

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name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Earthquake
move 2: Stone Edge / Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower / Crunch
move 4: Sleep Talk
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Guts
nature: Jolly
evs: 36 HP / 244 Atk / 36 Def / 188 Spe

It's a great status absorber:
Thunder Wave: Ground typing makes him immune
Will-o-Wisp: Guts gives him an attack boost
Toxic: Guts gives him an attack boost
Hypnosis: Sleep Talk and Guts give him an attack boost while still being able to attack
Spore: Sleep Talk and Guts give him an attack boost while still being able to attack
Sleep Powder: Sleep Talk and Guts give him an attack boost while still being able to attack

He also hits the magic 14/21 speed number.
 
The scarf set seems pretty good as a revenge killer, though it's going to be pretty easy for your opponent to set up on it after you successfully revenge. Misdreavus comes in on Superpower or Earthquake, Zuruggu comes in on Stone Edge / Rock Slide, Sleep Talk seems a little bit gimmicky.
 
A bit gimmicky = OC
Also, Sleep Talk + Guts works, especially when immune to Thunder Wave. (Heracross does the same thing)
 
It's immune to Thunder Wave.

It's risky switching into WoW. Missy might have NPed and will OHKO with HP Fighting/Shadow Ball. Or Sub.

Pururiru used water attack, it killed.

Toxic is pretty nonexistant.


Flame Orb is kinda better.

Stone Edge on the switch in hurts.

Important distinction.

While I would never consider using CB Larvitar, Toxic is absolutely existent (where the fux are stats amirite). This should definitely be mentioned in comments. Stallish Slowpoke, Hippopotas, and even Pururiru use Toxic, and if you can actually get any sort of attack or DD up while they mispredict and use Toixc (if you're using the DD set without Flame Orb) you can actually break through that team, the CB variant will at least break the walsl down.

I'm thinking of adding this set to OC:

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name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Earthquake
move 2: Stone Edge / Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower / Crunch
move 4: Sleep Talk
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Guts
nature: Jolly
evs: 36 HP / 244 Atk / 36 Def / 188 Spe

It's a great status absorber:
Thunder Wave: Ground typing makes him immune
Will-o-Wisp: Guts gives him an attack boost
Toxic: Guts gives him an attack boost
Hypnosis: Sleep Talk and Guts give him an attack boost while still being able to attack
Spore: Sleep Talk and Guts give him an attack boost while still being able to attack
Sleep Powder: Sleep Talk and Guts give him an attack boost while still being able to attack

He also hits the magic 14/21 speed number.

I honestly don't like this much since the metagame is so slow anyway. You're just unlikely to do the necessary damage.
 
Mention Scarf in OC, but also mention how it is generally outclassed and isnt very good.

Otherwise this looks quite good.
 
Both choice sets can get OC mentions, in my opinion. It's usually at least worth explaining why a Choiced set isn't good.
 
Posting a placeholder to give this analysis a proof-read / GP Check. Please keep in mind that I am not a member of the GP Team.

All right, lets get down to business.

Blue = Correction / Addition
Red = Deletion
Black (bold) = Comments

[Overview]
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<p>With a fantastic ability in Guts and two good boosting moves in Rock Polish and Dragon Dance, Larvitar makes a great set up sweeper. Not only that, but he Larvitar also hits just enough speed to outspeed all nonboosted unboosted Pokemon after a Dragon Dance,. (breaking up the sentence into 2 smaller ones, making it easier for the reader) and he It has also gets near-perfect (hyphen between "near" and "perfect") coverage with his its dual STAB attacks. Unfortunately, Larvitar has weaknesses to common priority attacks like Aqua Jet, Mach Punch, Vacuum Wave and Bullet Punch which really limit its effectiveness. (Be consistent with how you refer to the Pokemon. At the start of the Overview, you refer to Larvitar using "he", but at the end, you refer to it using "it". For the purposes of this analysis, let's use "it".) </p>

[Set]
name: Boosting Sweeper
move 1: Dragon Dance / Rock Polish
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Stone Edge / Rock Slide
move 4: Crunch / Facade
item: Flame Orb
ability: Guts
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 36 HP / 244 Atk / 36 Def / 188 Spe

[Set Comments]
<p>As a set-up sweeper, Larvitar can run a threatening boosting set with either Dragon Dance or Rock Polish as its boosting move. Dragon Dance is the preferred option, (add comma) as it allows Larvitar to muscle through Pokemon holding an Evolution Stone when combined with Guts. However, you can also use Rock Polish to outspeed all Choice Scarf users who have 17 Speed or less.</p>

<p>When using Dragon Dance, a Jolly nature is recommended as you can will hit 21 Speed after a Dragon Dance, which is enough to outspeed every non-boosted unboosted Pokemon, while still allowing you to reaching a great huge 36 Attack stat. However, when using Rock Polish, an Adamant nature is recommended, as Larvitar needs all the power he it can get. A Jolly nature is still an option, though, (shift the "though" at the end of the sentence to here) to atleast (remove space between "at" and "least") tie with all Choice Scarf users with 19 Speed or less, such as Abra, Staryu and Gligar, though. Earthquake is Larvitar's (add apostrophe) most reliable STAB move, and a staple on any Larvitar set. Stone Edge is the main option in the second third moveslot, because of its great high Base Power which is further boosted by STAB. Rock Slide can also be used instead of Stone Edge, as it has better accuracy and a 30% flinch chance to help turn some 2HKO's in OHKO's, but it's outdamaged by Facade for the higher accuracy which it provides, but you will lose out on a lot of power. Crunch gives perfect neutral coverage and hits Ghost-types like Misdreavus and Frillish hard, completing the coverage.(first mention the more important fact that Crunch hits the mentioned Ghost-types hard. Then talk about the coverage.) Facade also is a great option in the last slot, as its Base Power is doubled to a great huge 140 when Larvitar is afflicted with a status condition. However, using Facade will leave Larvitar with imperfect coverage.</p>

[Additional Comments]
<p>Larvitar is extremely weak to Water-type and Fighting-type priority attacks, and is often getting OHKOed by these very attacks. (Remember, past tense of OHKO is OHKOed, not OHKO'd)Therefore, you can use An Evolution Stone can be used to survive those these priority attacks, but you will lose out on a lot of power, and thus struggle to break through the defenses of bulky Pokemon to break through bulky Pokemons. (never use the word "Pokemons". The plural form is also "Pokemon") You can also use a Toxic Orb if you think Larvitar is going to stay in for three turns or less, but seeing as since Larvitar tends to is meant to stay in, (add comma) set up and then sweep for as long as possible, Toxic Orb is generally less useful than Flame Orb Flame Orb is usually the better choice.</p>

<p>Having a teammate who can switch into the Water-type and Fighting-type attacks directed at Larvitar is will be very useful as Larvitar oftern encounters those type of attacks. Some good options are Croagunk and Frillish. Croagunk can also switch into the Grass-type attacks that Larvitar hates.</p>
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[Team Options]
<p>When using Larvitar, having teammates who can switch into Water-type and Fighting-type attacks is recommended when using Larvitar(move it to the beginning of the sentence). Croagunk is a great example teammate, as he it also has a Grass-type resistance to Grass-type attacks and he can set up Nasty Plot on an the opponent's switch. Pururiru Frillish and Mantyke can also switch into Fighting-type and Water-type attacks, while also having a resistance to Bullet Punch.</p>

<p>Wynaut is a great teammate for Larvitar as he it can trap and Encore opponents, giving Larvitar a free turn of time to setup (space between "set" and "up"). Larvitar resists both of Wynauts weaknesses, almost guaranteeing a turn of set-up.(Larvitar is not part Dark-type)Even though Encore got nerfed to last only three turns this generation, Larvitar will get one free turn to set up either Dragon Dance or Rock Polish.</p>

[Optional Changes]
<p>Substitute can protect Larvitar from help Larvitar take priority attacks, and eases prediction, but it comes at the cost of a moveslot. and (split the sentence into 2) Larvitar is already also immune to status anyway, courtesy Flame Orb and Guts. Outrage gives provides good neutral coverage, but its secondary effect makes it a worse bad option. Superpower hits Bronzor the hardest, from out of all of his Larvitar's moves, but the Attack drop is undesirable and makes it often not worth it. Curse can be used along with Sandstorm support and an Evolution Stone with and Evolution stone equipped and a Special Defense boost from sand, but its Larvitar's common 4x weaknesses make it fairly unviable a bad choice.</p>

<p>Larvitar can also run a Choice Scarf set, as it then outspeeds all hits 21 Speed with a Choice Scarf, outspeeding unboosted Pokemon, hitting 21 Speed. It also has Guts and a Thunder Wave immunity to set it apart from other Choice Scarfers users, but its lack of power is noticeable lets it down. Larvitar can also run a Choice Band set as it makes a good status absorber with Guts, but it's is outclassed by Rhyhorn and Geodude and lacks a lot of power.</p>

[Counters]
<p>Pokemon with powerful priority attacks can KO Larvitar are Larvitar's best checks. Aqua Jet users such as Carvanha, Totodile and Kabutops Kabuto, (It is Kabuto. Also, add comma) and Mach Punch users such as Dokkora are good examples. Life Orb Meditite can also KO Larvitar with a combination of Fake Out and Bullet Punch when he is equipped with a Life Orb.</p>

<p>Choice Scarf users with a super effective attacks can revenge kill Dragon Dance Larvitar easily. Staryu and Gligar are good examples. The Rock Polish set is much harder to revenge kill, as only Choice Scarf users with 20 Speed or higher, such as Diglett and Elekid, can reliably revenge kill it him, such as Diglett and Elekid.</p> (End paragraph here, continue in the next paragraph)

<p>Fortunately, it's it is much easier to wall Larvitar, so using a bulky Pokemon such as like Bronzor, Frillish or Ferroseed is usually enough should suffice. Bronzor probably is probably the best counter to Larvitar, as He it resists both of his Larvitar's STAB attacks and KO's can OHKO it with a STAB super effective Gyro Ball.</p>

[Dream World]
<p>Larvitar has gets Sand Veil as a Dream World ability, but it should never be used as Larvitar is extremely outclassed when not using Guts but it is outclassed by Guts.</p>

[Overview]

<p>With a fantastic ability in Guts and two good boosting moves in Rock Polish and Dragon Dance, Larvitar makes a great set up sweeper. Not only that, but Larvitar also hits just enough speed to outspeed all unboosted Pokemon after a Dragon Dance. It also gets near-perfect coverage with its dual STAB attacks. Unfortunately, Larvitar has weaknesses to common priority attacks like Aqua Jet, Mach Punch, Vacuum Wave and Bullet Punch which really limit its effectiveness.</p>

[Set]
name: Boosting Sweeper
move 1: Dragon Dance / Rock Polish
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Stone Edge / Rock Slide
move 4: Crunch / Facade
item: Flame Orb
ability: Guts
nature: Jolly / Adamant
evs: 36 HP / 244 Atk / 36 Def / 188 Spe

[Set Comments]
<p>As a set-up sweeper, Larvitar can run a threatening boosting set with either Dragon Dance or Rock Polish as its boosting move. Dragon Dance is the preferred option, as it allows Larvitar to muscle through Pokemon holding an Evolution Stone. However, you can also use Rock Polish to outspeed all Choice Scarf users who have 17 Speed or less.</p>

<p>When using Dragon Dance, a Jolly nature is recommended as you will hit 21 Speed after a Dragon Dance, which is enough to outspeed every unboosted Pokemon, while still reaching a huge 36 Attack stat. However, when using Rock Polish, an Adamant nature is recommended, as Larvitar needs all the power it can get. A Jolly nature is still an option, though, to atleast tie with all Choice Scarf users with 19 Speed or less, such as Abra, Staryu and Gligar. Earthquake is Larvitar's most reliable STAB move, and a staple on any set. Stone Edge is the main option in the third moveslot, because of its high Base Power which is further boosted by STAB. Rock Slide can also be used instead of Stone Edge for the higher accuracy which it provides, but you will lose out on a lot of power. Crunch hits Ghost-types like Misdreavus and Frillish hard, completing the coverage. Facade also is a great option in the last slot, as its Base Power is doubled to a huge 140 when Larvitar is afflicted with a status condition. However, using Facade will leave Larvitar with imperfect coverage.</p>

[Additional Comments]
<p>Larvitar is extremely weak to Water- and Fighting-type priority attacks, often getting OHKOed by these very attacks. An Evolution Stone can be used to survive these priority attacks, but you will lose out on a lot of power, and thus struggle to break through the defenses of bulky Pokemon. You can also use a Toxic Orb if you think Larvitar is going to stay in for three turns or less, but since Larvitar is meant to stay in, set up and then sweep for as long as possible, Flame Orb is usually the better choice.</p>

<p>Having a teammate who can switch into the Water- and Fighting-type attacks directed at Larvitar will be very useful. Some good options are Croagunk and Frillish. Croagunk can also switch into the Grass-type attacks that Larvitar hates.</p>

[Team Options]
<p>When using Larvitar, having teammates who can switch into Water- and Fighting-type attacks is recommended. Croagunk is a great teammate, as it also has a resistance to Grass-type attacks and can set up Nasty Plot on the opponent's switch. Frillish and Mantyke can also switch into Fighting- and Water-type attacks, while also having a resistance to Bullet Punch.</p>

<p>Wynaut is a great teammate for Larvitar as it can trap and Encore opponents, giving Larvitar time to set up. Even though Encore got nerfed to last only three turns this generation, Larvitar will get one free turn to set up either Dragon Dance or Rock Polish.</p>

[Optional Changes]
<p>Substitute can help Larvitar take priority attacks, and eases prediction, but comes at the cost of a moveslot. Larvitar is also immune to status anyway, courtesy Flame Orb and Guts. Outrage provides good neutral coverage, but its secondary effect makes it a bad option. Superpower hits Bronzor the hardest, out of all of Larvitar's moves, but the Attack drop is undesirable. Curse can be used along with Sandstorm support and an Evolution Stone, but Larvitar's common 4x weaknesses make it a bad choice.</p>

<p>Larvitar can also run a Choice Scarf set, as it then outspeeds all unboosted Pokemon, hitting 21 Speed. It also has Guts and a Thunder Wave immunity to set it apart from other Choice Scarf users, but its lack of power lets it down. Larvitar can also run a Choice Band set as it makes a good status absorber with Guts, but is outclassed by Rhyhorn and Geodude.</p>

[Counters]
<p>Pokemon with powerful priority attacks are Larvitar's best checks. Aqua Jet users such as Carvanha, Totodile, and Kabuto, and Mach Punch users such as Dokkora are good examples. Life Orb Meditite can also KO Larvitar with a combination of Fake Out and Bullet Punch.</p>

<p>Choice Scarf users with a super effective attacks can revenge kill Dragon Dance Larvitar easily. Staryu and Gligar are good examples. The Rock Polish set is much harder to revenge kill, as only Choice Scarf users with 20 Speed or higher, such as Diglett and Elekid, can revenge kill it.</p>

<p>Fortunately, it is much easier to wall Larvitar, so using a bulky Pokemon like Bronzor, Frillish or Ferroseed should suffice. Bronzor is probably the best counter to Larvitar, as it resists both of Larvitar's STAB attacks and can OHKO it with STAB Gyro Ball.</p>

[Dream World]
<p>Larvitar gets Sand Veil as a Dream World ability, but it is outclassed by Guts.</p>

Will finish the rest later.
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EDIT: Done. Here a few things to keep in mind:

(1)Follow the type name with "-type" in most places. There a few exceptions, however. See (3).

(2)Be consistent in referring to the Pokemon. You start off with referring to Larvitar as "he", but then you use "it" in a few places. For the purposes of this GP check, I have used "it", but you are free to use whichever you feel comfortable with.

(3)When you are referring to several types, as in "Water-type, Fighting-type and Steel-type attacks", you can shorten it to "Water-, Fighting- and Steel-type attacks".

(4)Unless I am badly mistaken, it is "unboosted", and not "nonboosted".

Good luck with your analysis.
 
Please forgive me for this, but I forgot to point out the fact that the "2" at the beginning of the [Overview] should be "two", keeping in line with the rule that you should expand numerals below 100 in words whenever possible. Please make this change in the analysis.
 
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