Latest laddering team in a bit of a slump - please critique!

As you can see from the title, my latest laddering team is in a bit of a slump. It was doing very well and I was slowly creeping up the leaderboard, but now I'm back down to the 1300 range. I can blame a lot of it on hax, if I'm completely honest (burns, crits that lose me the game etc), but there's no doubt that something's wrong. The structure of my notes will go like this:

General Comments: Does what it says on the tin.
EVs: My thoughts on the EV spread of the Pokemon.
Moveset: My thoughts on the moveset of the Pokemon.
Other: Stuff like performance, etc.

Team at a Glance

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Team in depth

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Gengar @ Life Orb
Levitate/Hasty
EVs: 40 Atk/216 SpAtk/252 Speed
~Shadow Ball
~Focus Blast
~Explosion
~Thunderbolt

My lead, and a good one at that. It kills Tyranitar leads that don't invest a huge amount in SpDef and HP, while scaring away several others. It can't beat Azelf, though :(

The EVs allow for a garunteed Explosion OHKO on Blissey if she switches into Stealth Rock (which I generally set up very early). Max Speed helps against other Gengars and allows me to outpace Infernape. I had just enough Speed to get past Infernape at one point, but I was garunteed to lose all my other Gengar matchups and it wasn't worth it for about 3 more points of SpAtk. The rest of the EVs go in SpAtk, which is a no-brainer.

The moveset is something of an issue. The only things set in stone now are Shadow Ball and a Fighting-type move. Focus Blast is a good move; it destroys Tyranitar (unless they run Max HP and a helluva lot of SpDef) and Steels/Normals in general. Focus Punch is tempting. I haven't tried it yet, though. The 70% accuracy of Focus Blast is pretty shaky as well, which is problematic because if it misses against Tyranitar then Gengar gets owned (or even worse, DD'd against). Explosion is the real Blissey-killer. It also means that Gengar will usually take something out of the opponent's team. Thunderbolt is still on this set, but I'm having doubts about it. It doesn't offer as great coverage as I'd like, and my team lacks an Ice move which is why I think HP Ice might be better here. There's also the option of Hypnosis. However, the new 60% accuracy is a BIG turn-off, as it was touch-and-go at 70%. Like I said, Gengar doesn't like missing.

Gengar is a great Pokemon in general, and he's more than earned his place on the team. He can scare stuff away, blow stuff up and even sweep in a pinch.


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Heatran @ Leftovers
Flash Fire/Modest
EVs: 252 HP/16 SpA/240 SpDef
~Overheat
~Stealth Rock
~Roar
~Will-O-Wisp

It might be unorthodox, but I love this guy. Since I already have a great revenge killer in Flygon I changed Heatran's moveset as an experiment, and it really works.

The EVs allow Heatran to take the most hits. Max HP and 240 SpDef EVs really allows Heatran to take Special hits, including survival of Life Orb Gengar's Focus Blast (73% max). The rest is in SpA to reach 330, a nice number.

Overheat is for bite. Even though attacking isn't this Heatran's primary goal, a 140 Base Power STAB'd move coming off of 330 SpAtk is nothing to sneeze at. It's a garunteed OHKO on Gengar as well. Stealth Rock setup is important for obvious reasons and this Heatran is a prime candidate for setting it up. Will-O-Wisp cripples Heatran's "friends" Salamence, Gyarados and Tyranitar, amongst others. Finally, Roar rounds out the set. A phazer is pretty important, as it ruins Baton Pass chains and Ninjask.

Heatran is one of the most important members of the team, crippling stuff whilst setting up Stealth Rock and blazing stuff into the ground. It's also an effective counter for non-CB Weavile, unless they're Swords Dancers that have a Life Orb (and even then, there's a good chance Brick Break won't OHKO). The quad-Ice resistance is key to this team, as well, what with Salamence and Flygon. Since most people expect Heatran to be choiced in some way or another, it has great surprise value.

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Azelf @ Expert Belt
Levitate/Timid
EVs: 40 HP/252 SpAtk/216 Speed
~Nasty Plot
~Flamethrower
~Psychic
~Grass Knot

Azelf is a good Special Sweeper, but it isn't as useful as the other Pokemon on this team. I can't put my finger on it, but it just can't sweep as easily as I'd like. If Gengar can clear Blissey away then it has a good chance, it just doesn't seem to work too well.

40 HP puts Azelf at 301 HP, enough to survive 3 Seismic Tosses from Blissey. It also garuntees survival from Choice Band Weavile's Pursuit, as long as I stay in. Max Special Attack is a given on a Special Sweeper. The Speed EVs put Azelf at 352, enough to beat Gengar.

Nasty Plot makes Azelf dangerous if I can get one off. Psychic, Flamethrower and Grass Knot hits pretty much everything in the game not called Heatran or Houndoom. I quite liked HP Fighting when I had it, Grass Knot does way more to Swampert though (who I have a weakness to otherwise).

Azelf is usually quite good in late-game situations, it's just not as useful as the other Pokemon. If anyone has some suggestions for a replacement, I'd be glad to hear them.


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Salamence @ Life Orb
Intimidate/Adamant
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Speed
~Dragon Dance
~Outrage
~Earthquake
~Fire Blast

The dreaded DDMence makes an appearance on my team, and what a fine specimen of a Physical Sweeper he is. I usually save Mence for mid-late game shenanigans, where I can grab a DD and fire off an Outrage to destroy the opponent's remaining team.

Max Attack and Speed for optimal sweeping. I had 270 Speed at one point, but always being outsped by enemy ScarfTrans was no fun at all.

Dragon Dance is pretty much a given on Dragon Dance Salamence, lol. Outrage gets insane power and accuracy. Earthquake destroys all grounded Steels that resist Outrage and Fire Blast is for Skarm. It can also finish off a Bronzong.

As the most powerful Physical threat this team has, Mence is pretty much a staple. I have, however, thought about switching him out for Scizor since Scizor would remedy the Weavile weakness as well as providing more resistances.

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Flygon @ Choice Scarf
Levitate/Adamant
EVs: 80 HP/252 Atk/176 Speed
~Outrage
~Earthquake
~U-turn
~Stone Edge

One of the best revenge killers in the metagame in my opinion, Flygon uses his great Speed, surprising power and useful array of resistances to bring something unique to my team.

Max Attack with Adamant is needed to give Flygon that aforementioned power. With Max Attack and Adamant, Flygon can 2HKO Blissey with Outrage and deal more damage to Gyarados with Stone Edge. 176 Speed EVs gets Flygon to 420 Speed, enough to beat Choice Scarf Heatran and several Speed uppers (the ones that rest at 270 Speed). The rest goes in HP to help Flygon take a few hits. Without the extra HP, CB Tyranitar's Stone Edge would have a greater chance of 2HKOing for example.

Dragon/Ground is great offensive typing (as well as defensive) and Flygon gets the moves to use it. Outrage and Earthquake really hurt everything that doesn't resist them. U-turn is for scouting, and it's surprisingly useful. Stone Edge allows me to revenge kill Gyarados, or come in on a Dragon Dance to hit it very hard (unless the Gyarados is Jolly, which is very rare).

A great Pokemon, Flygon is another staple to the team. However, he doesn't have the same insane power as Salamence does.

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Blissey @ Leftovers
Natural Cure/Calm
EVs: 252 Def/80 SpA/176 SpDef
~Wish
~Protect
~Flamethrower
~Seismic Toss/Ice Beam

Special wall. Standard Bliss, doesn't need much explanation. In fact, I'm going to skip straight to the moveset dilemma.

Flamethrower isn't moving from the set. It roasts Scizors who think they can come in a SD up on Blissey, as well as hitting Heracross hard. It's the final moveslot that I'm having problems with. Seismic Toss is a good move in general for Blissey, and I need it to deal with Starmie. Ice Beam however will give my team the much-needed Ice attack. It'll hit the Dragons really hard, and I often wish I had Ice Beam to hit Salamence as it comes in and DDs up.

Problems

Gyarados: I don't have very good methods of dealing with it. If it grabs a DD and it runs Max Speed with Adamant, only Flygon outspeeds it (who can't OHKO with Stone Edge).

Weavile: Only one thing deals with Weavile for sure, and that's Heatran. Swords Dance Weavile has a good chance of mowing this team down if it has Ice Shard. Life Orb Weaviles put me in a similar dilemma, although they can't kill Heatran. Choice Weaviles aren't as big of a problem; Heatran resists both STAB moves and I have two Pokemon to resist Brick Break and one that's immune.

Starmie: If it has Recover, it can pretty much own my team. If not, Blissey can stall it out even without Seismic Toss. Otherwise there's not much I can do.
 
While your team seems to be very nicely balanced with no major weakness, I can see one pokemon that give you trouble: Substitute Gengar. I find yourself having to sacrifice at least one pokemon before you can safely switch into it, since Heatran will not enjoy continously taking Focus Blast/Punch, as Heatran will eventually get worn down. Blissey cannot take two FP's, and Salamence, Gengar, and Azelf run the risk of getting shut down by Hypnosis and Shadow Ball respectively as they try to take down the Substitute.

As you have stated, swapping out Salamence for Scizor would be an extremely good idea. Scizor can serve as en effective Gengar check as long as it has Roost while Gengar will be doing minimum damage. Scizor, as you stated, also helps against Weavile with Bullet Punch keeping it in check. The Swords Dance set can outperform DDMence anyways after 1 boost for both pokemon.
 
You make a good point about Subbing Gengar. Blissey doesn't like Focus Punch, although she's not too threatened after the sub is broken. Thanks to Ownage as well.

I was trying a standard Subpass Jolteon on Shoddy with decent results, but it's still not what I want from that final slot. Ideally it's a strong Special Attacker with a Grass move. Thoughts?
 
I was trying a standard Subpass Jolteon on Shoddy with decent results, but it's still not what I want from that final slot. Ideally it's a strong Special Attacker with a Grass move. Thoughts?
If you need strong attacker with grass move, then I think Tinkerbell Celebi would help here ? Credits to RaikouLover for this set. And still can take a few hits if neccesary. But with Celebi Scizor would be more troublesome, so more bulky DD Mence would help here when Heatran is dead. But in overall team looks solid, nothing else to add here. Cheers.

[SET]
name: Choice
move 1: Leaf Storm
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Hidden Power Fire / Hidden Power Ice / Earth Power
move 4: U-turn / Rest
item: Choice Scarf / Choice Specs
nature: Timid / Modest
evs: 80 HP / 176 Spe / 252 SpA

[SET COMMENTS]

<p> Celebi's well rounded stats make it a very good user of Choice Scarf and Choice Specs. The element of surprise should be in you favor, as many forget about Celebi's offensive potential. Leaf Storm is your primary STAB, dealing massive damage to anything that doesn't resist it. With the Choice Specs boost, it is powerful enough to blast right through Tyranitar's defenses. Psychic is secondary STAB, and offers reasonable coverage alongside Leaf Storm to hit things like Zapdos and Salamence. The third attack depends on what fits your team best: Hidden Power Fire will keep steels at bay, Hidden Power Ice will give you added protection against Dragons, and Earth Power for the surprise KO on Heatran. It should be noted that Hidden Power Ice is the best option on the Scarf set, as you lack the power to do fatal damage to Shaymin-S, Salamence, and Dragonite. Hidden Power Fire is better on the Choice Specs set because Psychic hits those three hard enough already, and it has the best coverage alongside Grass and Psychic.</p>

<p> The final slot of the set is what separates Celebi from other effective Choice users. Choice Scarf Celebi makes a surprisingly good lead, scoring surprise KOs on a multitude of threats. Baton Pass allows Celebi to escape the dangerous Pursuit or Crunch from Tyranitar, because Choice Scarfed Leafstorm is not a OHKO. U-turn allows for Celebi to scout for Pursuit users that can catch it off guard and potentially KO it. If Celebi is leading, Baton Pass can be an option against strong Pursuit leads like Tyranitar; however, you don't want to accidentally pass an Intimidate to your counter and since a lot of leads carry Intimidate, Baton Pass isn't the best option to go with. Keep in mind with a Timid Nature, that Leaf Storm will always 2HKO maximum HP/ minumum SpD Tyranitar with a Choice Scarf; with Choice Specs, it's an OHKO nearly 100% of the time; with a Modest Nature and Choice Specs, Leaf Strom will always OHKO the same Tyranitar and 2KO maximum HP/maximum SpD Tyranitar, even if it's Careful. Rest is also an option to abuse Natural Cure on the switch. </p>

And DD Bulky Mence:

move 1: Dragon Claw / Outrage
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Dragon Dance
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 180 Def / 76 Spe OR 152 HP / 12 Atk / 252 SpD / 92 Spe (Adamant) (choice between being physically bulky or specially bulky)

I hope that I helped a bit. Cheers.
 
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