Ludicolo (Analysis) [GP 0/2]

[Oglemi]

No. No this is not ready for GP checks.

Please read this thread to see how to format and structure the writing, and this thread to see a great example of the content that should be included in the write up first. If you're not willing to step up the quality of this, then I can find someone else to write it.

 

[RevolverKnight]

If you're not willing to step up the quality of this, then I can find someone else to write it.

I want to apologize if I'm being any trouble, but as I said, this is my first analysis. What do you mean by the quote above?

 

[Demoness]

Well, you don't have Additional Comments at all, and your writing isn't really the best just from skimming through it.

 

[RevolverKnight]

Well, you don't have Additional Comments at all, and your writing isn't really the best just from skimming through it.

I meant did he mean have someone else do the whole analysis or just have someone else do the polish/writing?

 

[prem]

he meant that if you cant meet up the standards of the writing, he will find someone else to push this through the GP portion of this analysis

 

[RevolverKnight]

I think I will take up Oglemi's offer of having someone else do the GP part of the analysis. It would be helpful for me to see a quality written version for future reference.

 

[RevolverKnight]

So how does this work?

 

[Oglemi]

Patience is not a virtue of yours.

Anyway, we wait for someone to post in the Index thread that they're interested in taking your analysis. We'll take it from there.

 

[RevolverKnight]

Ok, no need to be mean though, I really didn't know (plus I didn't see your post in the index).