Reviewing Magma's AMQC, iamnathan you can ignore this
Bold will be my notes
Bold will be my notes
So the biggest thing you can do is explaining why you suggest some changes. An author won't understand why they need to change something if they put what you want to have changed in the first place.AM QC Check plz wait for official QC unless you agree on it Red= Merge and Red withstrikethroughdelete Blue=comments Purple=add
[OVERVIEW]
• Mega Sableye fills a solid role in the 1v1 metagame thanks to its access to two useful abilities in Prankster and Magic Bounce, as well as its great defensive typing and stats. I think that that this should be explained on, like what does these abilities do for Sableye in terms of beating a mon, more than likely merge the two bullets below as they tie to the same point.
• Useful for defeating many physical attackers, such as Dragonite, thanks to priority Will-O-Wisp Merge with above
• Counters Pokemon that rely on status, such as Jumpluff, due to Magic Bounce. Merge with above
Mention set up special sweepers like Naga. Not primarily a setup special sweeper, poor example
Mention Mold Breaker Pokemon(I think this is mostly just Mega Gyra) as these are huge against Mega eye as it can get taunted by mega gyra and it can dd up. and cant be wisped if eye stays unmega for prankster. If its only one relevant Mold Breaker mon, you don't need to mention it as a main counter. Either that, or you could say "Mega Sableye has trouble against Mega Gyarados, one of the best Pokemon in the tier)
• Fairies are Mega Sableye’s biggest weakness and Twinkle Tackle What mons? I also think that Tapu Fini should be mentioned along with Prima, as it sometimes run Waterium Z will knock it out regardless of investment.
[SET]
name: Metal Burst
move 1: Will-O-Wisp
move 2: Recover
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Metal Burst
item: Sablenite
ability: Prankster
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 112 Def / 144 SpD
[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
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• Will-O-Wisp is Mega Sableye’s form of neutralizing many physical attackers like Dragonite, Garchomp, and Mega Metagross. as having them burned will make them unable to take care of Mega Sableye. self explanatory/flavor text. Not needed to convey the message. You could instead explain how Burn is able to halve their Attack
• Recover is a necessary healing move to stop Mega Sableye from gradually getting chipped down. in what matchups, express more on this point.
• Foul Play helps to beat opponents that will try to set up on Mega Sableye. Again, examples like Dragonite, Haxorus, Mega Charizard X, Landorus-T etc.
• Metal Burst makes use of Mega Sableye’s bulk to strike back against opponents that try to knock out Mega Sableye in one hit with a Z-Move or other powerful attack. Needs examples like Magnezone, Special Dragonite, and Heatran.
Set Details
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• This EV spread allows Mega Sableye to survive a wide array of physical and special attacks. Merge the two lines above with this one, just because this is in bullets does not mean it needs to be separated like this since it is the same thought.
• These include a +1 Shadow Ball from Conversion Porygon-Z, Flare Blitz from Mega Charizard X, Hydro Vortex from Greninja, Never-Ending Nightmare from Aegislash, Draco Meteor from Naganadel, and Subzero Slammer from Kyurem.
• Surviving these attacks allows Mega Sableye to use Metal Burst to OHKO the opponent. Merge
Usage Tips
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• Mega Sableye is useful against Pokemon that it can hit with Will-O-Wisp Such as? or Pokemon that rely on status moves to win. Such as?
• These include Pokemon such as Dragonite, Jumpluff, Landorus-T, Garchomp, Mega Swampert, Salamence, and Donphan. Merge with above
• Remember when playing against Mega Gyarados and Tyranitar to mega evolve and then Will-O-Wisp because prankster moves do not affect dark types.
• It is also important to keep in mind that some players will try to play around Metal Burst by using a weaker move for chip damage on the first turn or use it to set up on and then their Z-Move or more powerful attack on the second.
Team Options
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• Pokemon that deter fairies are key support to help Mega Sableye. Merge below line to here.
• Mega Venusaur, Mega Metagross, and Aegislash are all good options. Merge, and explain a bit of how they counter Fairy-types.
• Mega Charizard X could be a solid teammate as well to handle Magearna and Mega Gardevoir. as its Fire-typing allows it to set up once setting up once isnt necessarily what it needs to do to beat these mons. For Aegi its a straight up 50/50 anyway, unless sub is run and take care of these.
• An answer for Charizard Y also helps out Mega Sableye because a sun-boosted Blast Burn will OHKO Mega Sabelye even if you raise its Special Defense.
Mention Dragon-types like Dragonite, Haxorus and Garchomp. You give no reason why he should include Dragon-types.
• Tapu Koko or Zeraora could both fill this role. Merge this with above.
I think there should be another set with max spD with cm, but wait for offical qc. This is mainly to help with bad mus like naga and other special set up sweepers that are not Fairy-types.
Sableye-Mega @ Sablenite
Ability: Prankster
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Recover
- Dark Pulse
- Calm Mind
- Taunt / Will-O-Wisp
[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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• Swapping out a move or two and switching up the EV spread can make Mega Sableye have much better matchups against specific Pokemon. Merge all of this together
• For example, adding Taunt helps beat stall Pokemon like Slowbro, Blissey, and Chansey. Merge this with above
•Snarl orCalm Mind along withNight ShadeDark Pulse could also help Mega Sableye handle special attackers better. Merge this with above
• However, due to the typical fast-paced nature of the 1v1 metagame, these moves will be more niche, making Mega Sableye less useful overall.
Why did you tell him to remove those options? You give no explanation. Even if you know you're right, ppl can't magically tell that.
Checks and Counters
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**FairiesFairy-types**: Fairies, such as Magearna, Mega Gardevoir, and Primarina, will easily OHKO Sableye with a STAB Twinkle Tackle or Hyper Voice and there is no way to stop it.This is not needed.
**Charizard Y**: Charizard Y can OHKO Mega Sableye with a Blast Burn or weaken it first with an Air Slash or Solarbeam (not enough for Metal Burst to kill though)and then KO it the next turn. Not needed.
Mention speical set up sweepers that are not fairy
Mention how mold break mega dos counters it with taunt and can set up with dd.
**Facade Mega Lopunny**: Facade Mega Lopunny beats Mega Sableye because Will-O-Wisp is neutralized and even if you try to go for Metal Burst, Fake Out into High Jump Kick is a guaranteed KO.Not a set.
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