PU Mr. Mime (Kanto) gp 1/1

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Dazzling Gleam
move 3: Trick
move 4: Healing Wish
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mr. Mime is a great revenge killer due to its overall good Speed and Special Attack, allowing it to pick off threats such as Dubwool, Falinks, Stonjourner, and even some Silvally formes. Its access to Healing Wish allows it to bring in a weakened teammate back to full health and cure any existing status conditions, giving it more utility and team support, while Trick allows it to cripple defensive Pokemon like Type: Null and Musharna. Mr. Mime can also viably run Choice Specs to increase its wallbreaking power, though the Speed boost from Choice Scarf is normally preferred, since Mr. Mime is otherwise outsped by Silvally and Drakloak. Focus Blast or Mystical Fire can be used over a support move to allow Mr. Mime to do more damage to Steel-types like Klang and Mawile. Teleport is another option that allows Mr. Mime to provide a valuable negative-priority pivoting move and gain momentum for an offensive team.

Choice Scarf Mr. Mime itself appreciates strong wallbreakers like Life Orb Falinks, Basculin, and Silvally-Grass so that it can clean up once bulkier Pokemon like Type: Null and Mawile are weakened and faster threats like Manectric or Choice Scarf Leafeon are taken care of. These Pokemon also appreciate Mr. Mime's Healing Wish support so they can come back for a second time late-game, allowing them to be played more aggressively early in the game. Mr. Mime's generally low damage output means it also appreciates help from Spikes setters like Roselia and Crustle to wear down Pokemon it usually can't break through. Setup sweepers like Nasty Plot Gourgeist, Rock Polish Stonjourner, and Shell Smash Crustle also appreciate Mr. Mime's ability to give them a second chance at setting up to sweep with Healing Wish or shut down a defensive Pokemon like Type: Null or Pyukumuku with Trick that could keep them from sweeping. Mr. Mime also appreciates their ability to break through bulkier Pokemon like Mawile and Shiinotic for it to pick off. While Mr. Mime is decently fast, it is still outsped by Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Manectric as well as Flame Charge Silvally formes, so priority users like Hitmontop and Falinks or Speed-boosting sweepers like Rock Polish Stonjourner help take care of these threats. Defensive checks to these Pokemon like Palpitoad, Drakloak, and Pyukumuku also help Mr. Mime handle them. Alternatively, if Mr. Mime is running Trick, its ability to cripple special walls by removing their items allows other specially offensive Pokemon like Raichu and Choice Specs Glaceon to break through them better.

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SergioRules said:
[SET]
name: Choice Attacker
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Dazzling Gleam
move 3: Focus Blast / Mystical Fire
move 4: Healing Wish / Trick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mr. Mime is one of the premier Choice Scarf users in the tier, making it a great revenge killer (it's a great revenge killer because it does the thing you mention later on, not because it can hold a choice scarf. reword this). Its overall good (replace by decent speed and good special attack) Speed and Special Attack allows it to pick off threats such as Dubwool, Falinks, Stonjourner, and even some Silvally forms. Psychic and Dazzling Gleam gives Mr. Mime near perfect coverage for the PU tier, (kinda false considering how common steel-types like mawile are) while its last move of Focus Blast or Mystical Fire helps cover the Steel-types like Klang and Mawile that otherwise wall it (why should i run focus blast over mystical fire? why should i run mystical fire over focus blast? mention what they do and seperate them instead of grouping them together). Its access to Trick allows it to cripple otherwise (no need to say otherwise here, they still act as walls regardless)(trick also allows it to separate itself from galarian rapidash, but maybe wait before implementing this comment) defensive Pokemon like Type: Null and Musharna, while Healing Wish allows it to bring in a weakened teammate back to full health. (giving it more utility)

Choice Scarf Mr. Mime itself appreciates strong wallbreakers like Life Orb Falinks, Choice Specs Glaceon, (idk abt this mention, they dont really overcome their switchins together at all. mention throh) and Swords Dance Silvally forms so that it can clean up once bulkier Pokemon (such as?) are weakened and faster threats (u dont mention any mon that deals with faster threat, and the only faster common scarfer is mane, which isnt much of a threat unless you're under 60%. if you want to keep this part, mention first impression falinks. you already do but that example should get more focus) are taken care of. These Pokemon also appreciate Mr. Mime's Healing Wish support so they can come back for a second sweep late game (they're wallbreakers. also mention this allows them to be used more aggressively early-game). While Mr. Mime is decently fast, it is still outsped by Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Manectric and Raichu, as well as Flame Charge Silvally. (the former two only deal with scarf mime if it's weakened. scarf raichu also isn't that common, so i'd remove the mention) (what are some pokemon that deal with these faster pokemon?) Mr. Mime can also viably run Choice Specs to increase its breaking power, though the speed boost from Choice Scarf is normally preferred. Teleport is another option in the last moveslot that allows Mr. Mime to provide a valuable negative priority pivoting move and gain momentum for an offensive team. (move these last sentences to the paragraph above.)

mention setup sweepers like nasty plot gourgeist and crustle that appreciate mr. mime's healing wish.
mention threats that specifically deal with specially defensive walls.
mention specially offensive threats that appreciate mr. mime crippling spdef wall with trick.

this paragraph is quite lacking and after reading it i barely have an idea of teammates i could run with mr. mime.

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do this and lmk when you're done, i wanna take another look before i stamp this
 
SergioRules said:
change the set to this, and update the set comments accordingly.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Dazzling Gleam
move 3: Trick
move 4: Healing Wish
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET]
name: Choice Attacker
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Dazzling Gleam
move 3: Focus Blast / Mystical Fire
move 4: Healing Wish / Trick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mr. Mime is a great revenge killer due to its overall good Speed and Special Attack, allowing it to pick off threats such as Dubwool, Falinks, Stonjourner, and even some Silvally forms. Psychic and Dazzling Gleam gives Mr. Mime near perfect coverage for the PU tier, (fluff) while its access to Focus Blast helps cover the Steel-types like Klang and Mawile that otherwise wall it. Mystical Fire is a more reliable way of hitting Steel-types, but lacks the power of Focus Blast. Its access to Healing Wish allows it to bring in a weakened teammate back to full health giving it more utility and team support, (and curing it from any status condition) while Trick allows it to cripple defensive Pokemon like Type: Null and Musharna. Mr. Mime can also viably run Choice Specs to increase its breaking power, though the speed boost from Choice Scarf is normally preferred. (explain why the speed is an issue, and mention the competition it receives from its galarian counterpart, as it's faster) Teleport is another option in the last moveslot that allows Mr. Mime to provide a valuable negative priority pivoting move and gain momentum for an offensive team. (mention focus blast here)

again, please change ^this part accordingly

Choice Scarf Mr. Mime itself appreciates strong wallbreakers like Life Orb Falinks, Throh, and Swords Dance Silvally forms so that it can clean up once bulkier Pokemon like Type: Null and Mawile are weakened and faster threats like Manectric or Pokemon with priority like First Impression Falinks are taken care of. (except none of these example happen to answer falinks, or even manectric) These Pokemon also appreciate Mr. Mime's Healing Wish support so they can come back for a second time late game, allowing them to be played more aggressively early in the game. Set up sweepers like Nasty Plot Gourgeist and Shell Smash Crustle also appreciate Mr. Mime's ability to give them a second chance at sweeping. (what fo they bring in return?)(mention they also appreciate mr. rime tricking stuff like type: null, providing them with more setup opportunities) While Mr. Mime is decently fast, it is still outsped by Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Manectric as well as Flame Charge Silvally so priority users like Hitmontop and Falinks or speed boosting sweepers like Rock Polish Stonjourner help take care of these threats. (mention defensive answers to these threats too) Specially defensive walls like Klang and Type: Null give Mr. Mime a hard time, so Pokemon like Guts Throh and Choice Band Basculin help it out a lot. (you already brought this up though, and cb basculin doesnt deserve a mention. if you wanna keep the basculin mention though, mention life orb mixed instead) Alternatively, if Mr. Mime is running Trick, its ability to cripple special walls by removing their items allows other specially offensive Pokemon like Raichu and Choice Specs Galceon to break through them better.

mention mons that beat stuff it cant revenge kill, like flame charge silvally forms
mention spikes support; mr. mime doesnt hit hard at all and struggles to revenge kill stuff when they're healthy

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SergioRules said:
[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Dazzling Gleam
move 3: Trick
move 4: Healing Wish
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mr. Mime is a great revenge killer due to its overall good Speed and Special Attack, allowing it to pick off threats such as Dubwool, Falinks, Stonjourner, and even some Silvally forms. Its access to Healing Wish allows it to bring in a weakened teammate back to full health and cure any existing status conditions giving it more utility and team support, while Trick allows it to cripple defensive Pokemon like Type: Null and Musharna. Mr. Mime can also viably run Choice Specs to increase its breaking power, though the speed boost from Choice Scarf is normally preferred since Mr. Mime is otherwise outsped by Silvally and Drakloak. Focus Blast can be used over a support move to allow Mr. Mime to break do more damage to Steel-types like Klang and Mawile. (mention mystical fire here too) Teleport is another option that allows Mr. Mime to provide a valuable negative priority pivoting move and gain momentum for an offensive team.

Choice Scarf Mr. Mime itself appreciates strong wallbreakers like Life Orb Falinks, Basculin, and Choice Band Gourgeist so that it can clean up once bulkier Pokemon like Type: Null and Mawile are weakened and faster threats like Manectric or Choice Scarf Leafeon are taken care of. (can you mention silvally grass > cb gourg or some different grass like leafeon bc gourg isnt a very common partner.) These Pokemon also appreciate Mr. Mime's Healing Wish support so they can come back for a second time late game, allowing them to be played more aggressively early in the game. Mr. Mime's generally low damage output means it also appreciates help from Spikes setters like Roselia and Crustle to wear down Pokemon Mr. Mime usually can't break through. Crustle in particular also benefits from Mr. Mime's Healing Wish, allowing it to regain its Sturdy ability after taking chip damage. (this isnt shell smash crustle.. crustle runs weak armor when using spikes, remove) Set up sweepers like Nasty Plot Gourgeist and Shell Smash Crustle also appreciate Mr. Mime's ability to give them a second chance at setting up to sweep with Healing Wish or Tricking a defensive Pokemon like Type: Null or Pyukumuku that could keep them from sweeping. (yeah, ss crustle is a fine mention here) Mr. Mime also appreciates their ability to break through bulkier Pokemon like Mawile and Carkol for it to pick off. (yeah ig, even tho carkol isnt very popular. you may want to mention a more relevant mon here) While Mr. Mime is decently fast, it is still outsped by Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Manectric as well as Flame Charge Silvally forms so priority users like Hitmontop and Falinks or speed boosting sweepers like Rock Polish Stonjourner help take care of these threats. (stonjourner also appreciates hwish support and can break down mawile) Defensive checks to these Pokemon like Palpitoad, Drakloak, and Pyukumuku also help Mr. Mime handle them. Alternatively, if Mr. Mime is running Trick, its ability to cripple special walls by removing their items allows other specially offensive Pokemon like Raichu and Choice Specs Galceon to break through them better.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[SergioRules], [265399]]
- Quality checked by: [[gum, 434150], [username2, userid2]] me
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Psychic
move 2: Dazzling Gleam
move 3: Trick
move 4: Healing Wish
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Filter
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mr. Mime is a great revenge killer due to its overall good Speed and Special Attack, allowing it to pick off threats such as Dubwool, Falinks, Stonjourner, and even some Silvally forms formes. Its access to Healing Wish allows it to bring in a weakened teammate back to full health and cure any existing status conditions, (AC) giving it more utility and team support, while Trick allows it to cripple defensive Pokemon like Type: Null and Musharna. Mr. Mime can also viably run Choice Specs to increase its wallbreaking power, though the Speed boost from Choice Scarf is normally preferred, (AC) since Mr. Mime is otherwise outsped by Silvally and Drakloak. Focus Blast or Mystical Fire can be used over a support move to allow Mr. Mime to do more damage to Steel-types like Klang and Mawile. Teleport is another option that allows Mr. Mime to provide a valuable negative-priority (AH) pivoting move and gain momentum for an offensive team.

Choice Scarf Mr. Mime itself appreciates strong wallbreakers like Life Orb Falinks, Basculin, and Silvally-Grass so that it can clean up once bulkier Pokemon like Type: Null and Mawile are weakened and faster threats like Manectric or Choice Scarf Leafeon are taken care of. These Pokemon also appreciate Mr. Mime's Healing Wish support so they can come back for a second time late-game, (AH) allowing them to be played more aggressively early in the game. Mr. Mime's generally low damage output means it also appreciates help from Spikes setters like Roselia and Crustle to wear down Pokemon Mr. Mime it usually can't break through. Set up Setup sweepers like Nasty Plot Gourgeist, Rock Polish Stonjourner, (AC) and Shell Smash Crustle also appreciate Mr. Mime's ability to give them a second chance at setting up to sweep with Healing Wish or Tricking shut down a defensive Pokemon like Type: Null or Pyukumuku with Trick that could keep them from sweeping. Mr. Mime also appreciates their ability to break through bulkier Pokemon like Mawile and Shiinotic for it to pick off. While Mr. Mime is decently fast, it is still outsped by Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Manectric as well as Flame Charge Silvally forms formes, (AC) so priority users like Hitmontop and Falinks or Speed-boosting (AH) sweepers like Rock Polish Stonjourner help take care of these threats. Defensive checks to these Pokemon like Palpitoad, Drakloak, and Pyukumuku also help Mr. Mime handle them. Alternatively, if Mr. Mime is running Trick, its ability to cripple special walls by removing their items allows other specially offensive Pokemon like Raichu and Choice Specs Galceon Glaceon to break through them better.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[SergioRules], [265399]]
- Quality checked by: [[gum, 434150], [TJ, 331538]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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