my competitive battle team :)

[applesauceninja]

ok so here is my wifi team its decent although im having trouble with tyranitar (if i dont get it instantly with my counter-zam)
and ive only done a few battles so no other extreme problem comes up except that so far


Alakazam@ focus sash
Abillity: inner focus
EV: 252 SA, 25 Spe, 4 HP
hasty nature
Moves:
Counter
Taunt
Psychic
Knockoff

I love him evan though he dosent live long i almost always kill starting with him this is generally how ive dealt with a starting tyranitar otherwise im stuck :( and inner focus for fakeout

Forretress @ leftovers
Abillity:sturdy
EV: 252 HP / 162 Atk / 96 Def
relaxed nature
Moves:
spikes
rapid spin
earthquake
explosion

pretty self explanitory earth quake for magnezone

Gengar @ life orb
Abillity: levitate
EV:252 Atk / 252 Spd / 4 HP
Timid nature
Moves:
Hypnosis
Shadow ball
Thunderbolt
Focus Blast

My main special sweeper because kazam dies generally quickly

Snorlax @ leftovers
Abillity: Thick Fat
EV: 244 HP / 28 Def / 236 SpD
careful nature
Moves:
Rest
Sleeptalk
Bodyslam
Earthquake

basic sleep talk snorlax

Weezing @leftovers
Abillity: Levitate
EV:252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpA
Bold nature
Moves:
flamethrower
thunderbolt
painsplit
will o wisp

physical wall

Weaville @ life orb
Abillity: pressure
EV 40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
jolly nature
Moves:
nightslash
sword dance
ice punch
brick break

physical sweeper


rate and tell me what to inprove thanks in advance

 

[Lee]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

We need more than "physical wall" and "physical sweeper." We already know that! Please expand on their roles a little more.