My first Actual try at an OU team

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zenitier

Well... here goes

Gyarados @ Leftovers
Adamant
216 HP / 16 Atk / 176 def / 100 spd (Traditional Bulky Gyarados)
Dragon Dance
Waterfall
Taunt
EQ


Dusknoir @ Leftovers
Bold
252 HP / 192 Def / 64 Sp Def
Calm Mind
Pain Split
Ice Beam / Shadow Ball / W-o-W
Ice Beam / Shadow Ball / W-o-w (I cant decide which to pick. w-o-w covers my defenses, whereas if i use that i dont get very good type coverage)



Weavile @ Focus Sash
Jolly
252 Atk / 252 Spd / 6 hp
Ice Punch
Night Slash
Brick Break
Aerial Ace / Swords Dance



Gliscor @ Leftovers
Impish
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 Atk
Roost
EQ
Knock Off
Stealth Rock


Infernape @ Focus Sash
Naive
24 Atk / 252 Sp Atk / 232 Spd
Nasty Plot
Grass Knot
Flamethrower
Close Combat


Gengar @ Choice Scarf
Modest
252 Sp Atk / 252 Spd / 6 HP
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball
Focus Blast
Energy Ball

BulkyGyara is there for a starter. I can set up immediately if my opponent's starter is something that fears gyara. A thunder type move can be nulled by a gliscor switch. EQ is there to handle heatran. Also if I choose not to use w-o-w its intimidate will work well.
Infernape is my wall killer. It can take out suicune with grass knot, destroy blissey with close combat.
Gengar is there so i have some electric type coverage and it should be generally fast enough to outrun most pokes.
Gliscor is there for support, to lay out SR, knock off items from walls.
Weavile is a physical sweeper since it seems im lacking those here. Also there for ice coverage if Dusknoir is not packing ice beam.
Dusknoir functions as a special wall / sweeper assuming it sets up with CMs. Its a nice surprise seeing as it isnt very common (to me anyways).
 
zenitier said:
Well... here goes

I'll rate, but please read the rules before you post, as your rmt needs to explain the pokemon in detail. Thanks


Gyarados @ Life orb
Adamant
216 HP / 16 Atk / 176 def / 100 spd (Traditional Bulky Gyarados)
Dragon Dance
Waterfall
Taunt
EQ

Gyarados is great with leftovers, but Life orb is the overall better choice. With SR on the field, he won't last too long anyways.

Dusknoir @ Leftovers
Bold
252 HP / 192 Def / 64 Sp Def
Calm Mind
Pain Split
Ice Beam / Shadow Ball / W-o-W
Ice Beam / Shadow Ball / W-o-w (I cant decide which to pick. w-o-w covers my defenses, whereas if i use that i dont get very good type coverage)
Used as a surprise since CM dusknoir isn't very common (in my environment anyways)

Will-o-wisp and Shadow sneak should be your main forms of dealing damage. You shouldn't fear dragons as he is a ghost type, hitting him neutral.

Weavile @ Choice Band
Jolly
252 Atk / 252 Spd / 6 hp
Ice Shard
Night Slash
Brick Break
Aerial Ace

Why do people sash these?! Anyways, Choice Band is the best overall item to give Weavile. Ice Shard will hurt Chomp, mence etc really badly, you don't need to chance it with Ice punch. Aerial ace banded will deal some hefty damage, so stick with that.

Gliscor @ Leftovers
Impish
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 Atk
Roost
EQ
Knock Off
Stealth Rock

General support poke

Standard, I don't have to rate.

Infernape @ Life orb
Naive
24 Atk / 252 Sp Atk / 232 Spd
Nasty Plot
Grass Knot
Flamethrower
Close Combat

Here to break up Skarm / Bliss and take out Blisseys that give me a little trouble

Use Life orb on your Mixape. He'll hit alot harder.

Gengar @ Choice Scarf
Modest
252 Sp Atk / 252 Spd / 6 HP
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball
Focus Blast
Energy Ball
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Looks good.


Anyways, at least reformat this so we can understand why you chose each pokemon.

Thanks

\-Dark
 
Read the rules before posting an RMT in future.

RMT Rules said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
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You'll need to expand a little more than what you've wrote at the end there. If you're not sure what to do, look through other RMTs for ideas!
 
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