SM OU My First Ou Team

[Neymar14]

Landorus-Therian @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Intimidate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 248 HP / 240 Def / 20 Spe
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Stealth Rock
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- U-turn

Magearna @ Assault Vest
Ability: Soul-Heart
EVs: 248 Atk / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Volt Switch
- Ice Beam
- Fleur Cannon
- Hidden Power [Fire]

Gyarados-Mega @ Gyaradosite
Ability: Intimidate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 68 HP / 252 Atk / 188 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Crunch
- Waterfall

Tapu Koko @ Shuca Berry
Ability: Electric Surge
EVs: 104 HP / 12 Def / 176 SpA / 216 Spe
Timid Nature
- Thunderbolt
- Volt Switch
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Defog

Hawlucha @ Electric Seed
Ability: Unburden
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 96 HP / 252 Atk / 36 SpD / 124 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Acrobatics
- Swords Dance
- High Jump Kick
- Drain Punch

Victini @ Normalium Z
Ability: Victory Star
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Celebrate
- Searing Shot
- Stored Power
- Focus Blast


Since it is my 1st Ou Team, I would like to have opinions. Of course also suggestions for improvement :)

 

[Nunyyyyyy]

Your team would be so much better if you played it screen I think,
Hawlucha + koko screen, I think that magearna ice beam is useless because you already touch the types fly with koko, so mageana calm mind would not be so stupid with the screens of koko and finally earthquake on gyarados mega for what to do? You already have Lando T who can touch with his earthquake more you play it DD so substitute is a better idea I find your team may be a good idea but the sets you put are to change.

 

[Gross Sweep]

Welcome to Smogon! I'm locking your RMT for the time being as the forum rules require that you provide in-depth descriptions for each Pokemon to explain their roles. Please read the rules carefully and take a look at Team Showcase to see the level of detail we require. PM me with updated descriptions and I'll be happy to unlock this.