My first RMT here

[linkhawkins]

Ok, these pokemon will be set up into 3 groups, Leader, Core and Revenge
now what you think of this

First group Leader:

Gengar @ Life Orb
Timid nature
Levitate
6 hp / 252 spa / 252 speed
-Substitute
-Pain Split
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast

This is the fist lead, with its speed it is almost always going to go first to set up a sub. From there I can attack my next turn (lowering my health more thanks to life orb) or pain split, really hurting big HP pokemon and healing Gengar. Shadow Ball and Focus Blast are a good coverage combo.

Metagross @ lum berry
Adamant nature
Clear Body
252 hp / 252 atk / 8 speed
-Stealth Rock
-Meteor Mash
-Bullet Punch
-Hammer Arm

Second in my lead catagory, sets up rocks. Lum berry is for those pokemon that like to set up status. Bullet punch for priority and Hammer Arm for extra coverage.

Second Group Core:

Heatran @ Leftovers
Calm nature
Flash Fire
250 HP / 100 spd / 160 speed
-Magma Storm
-Lava PLume
-Protect
-Flash Cannon

Heatran is a an ever present fear of mine, so I guess it is about time I use one. This can switch in on attacks aimed at my Shymin. I know there are 2 fire attacks here but I am hoping to trap the pokemon with Magma Storm the take the appropriate action, be it switch or attack. Protect to gain more leftovers health and scout. Flash cannon is my secondary STAB and possibly stat reduction.

Vaporeon @ Leftovers
Bold nature
Water Absorb
248 hp / 252 def / 10 spd
-Wish
-Ice Beam
-Scald
-Protect

Great Wish passer with Huge HP. Scald will hopefully land the burn to lower the attackers attack. Protect is good for scouting out attacks or insuring that I get wish. Water Absorb the water attack coming in on Heatran.

Shaymin @ leftovers
Bold nature
Natural Cure
252 hp / 78 def / 180 spd
-Aromatherapy
-Seed Flare
-Leech Seed
-Protect/Substitute/Rest (cant decide)

This is a great defensive pokemon that is also a cleric with Aromatherapy. Seed Flare is a strong Stab. Leech Seed pairs with leftovers and its defences to gain lots of HP back. The last move I am not sure what to do. Sub would be a great stall for HP regain, Sub works well with its defences and rest would fully heal it then switch out to get rid of sleep.
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This is a standard Grass/Fire/Water core I think it is solid

Third Group Revenge:

Dugtrio @ Choice Band
Jolly nature
Arena Trap
252 atk / 6 def / 252 speed
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge
-Sucker Puunch
-Reversal/Shadow Claw

This is a very standard revenge Dugtrio. Choice band raises its abysmal attack. The move is based on who I am revenge killing. Reversal can be taken out for shadow claw

@pwnage and ecksplode: Thank you both for the help.

 

[pwnage77]

First of all, add pictures. Second, add more description.

Nice team though. On Metagross, try replacing Explosion with Hammer Arm or Earthquake since Explosion in this gen sucks badly. I would recommend replacing Arcanine with a Heatran. The reason for this is because FGW cores are usually meant to last long and alive and I mean all three of them. Removing one of the core means total destruction for the rest. Try adding walls to make a good balanced team. Sp. Defensive Heatran would be good and replace the Starmie with a Vaporeon so that your team could just scramble through your opponent's while they get annoyed. For example, Shaymin is out then you go to Heatran to absorb a Fire-type move then to Vaporeon to absorb Water-types then back to Shaymin for some action. For Metagross, replace it with a Donphan or a Forretress. Forretress would be more recommended as Heatran will have Stealth Rock and Forretress can have the rest of the Hazards.

BTW, that Gengar set is kinda underrated in this gen. You might be basing this team on a 4th Gen Smogon Dex.

 

[pwnage77]

To me Gengar with Thunder and Sludge Bomb just doesn't work. Like I said, Gengar with that set is underrated. Even if you look on this site: http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/gengar , you won't find that set. With the team preview, you'll pretty much know the obvious leads and there aren't many leads that are faster than Gengar other than Choice Scarfers and Deoxys-S(before it was banned of course)

 

[pwnage77]

Umm please delete all your other posts and post them as one. The remake of your team, just edit your first post. Trust me, this is against the rules

 

[SharpEyes]

Link, copy and paste your team with pictures, then go to edit under your main post/thread. Delete it all and paste your copied format. Then go down the list to your posts and remove them one by one , in the end you will have the finished product.
Hope that helped. just take your time and do it right.

Also interesting team you have, only thing i can say is its kind of rain weak. nothing to really answer to rain teams cept perhaps shaymin wich wont really hurt all the rain abusers, and once metagross explodes you have no dragon resists.
I might suggest replacing dugtrio with a choiceband scizor for revenging. and also perhaps instead of metagross you could run standard rotom W. this would help your team keep offensive presure aswell as help you deal with rain and sand. Heatrans set is a bit shaky and having flash cannon serves no purpose. i would suggest the following... In short :

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Scizor @choiceband (Technician)
Adamant/248atk/248hp/12speed
U-turn
bullet punch
super power
pursuit


Rotom W @choicescarf
Modest/252speed/252spatk/6hp
Volt switch
hydro pump
hidden power ice
trick


Heatran@ airballoon (flashfire)
timid/252speed/194spatk/64hp
Stealth rock
hidden power ice
Lava Plume
Earthpower
Allows heatran to set rocks, kill outragers, and hit opposing heatrans, while lava plume allows you to burn once ina while.