My first RMT I ever made

[EvilMonkey]

Salamence @ Choice Specs
Modest Nature
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Draco Meteor
Dragon Pulse
Flamethrower
Hydro Pump

Gengar @ Leftovers
Timid Nature
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Hypnosis
Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt
Focus Blast

Garchomp @ Life Orb
Jolly Nature
16 HP / 252 Atk / 240 Spe
Swords Dance
Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Substitute

Weavile @ Choice Band
Jolly Nature
40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
Ice Punch
Night Slash
Brick Break
X-Scissor

Blissey @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
Bold Nature
148 HP / 252 Def / 104 SpA / 4 Spe
Ice Beam
Seismic Toss
Thunder Wave
Softboiled

Skarmory @ Leftovers
Impish Nature
252 HP / 96 Atk / 156 Def / 4 Spe
Drill Peck
Roost
Stealth Rock
Whirlwind


Allright, first of all, I'm not yet into competitive battling. But what I have been doing is watching a crapload of video's. By that I kind of figured out what works against what and what doesn't. Based on that experience I created a team with the help of Smogon's great resources.

Now, I just want to know if there are some major leaks in my build and if so, how to get rid of them.

Thanks in advance.

 

[Skote07]

At first glance, i think taunting Gyara might ruin this team if given the opportunity.

And just out of curiosity, why is weavile rocking X-scissor?

 

[EvilMonkey]

Hmm, would you have any suggestion on how I should change my team to withstand a taunting Gyara?

And about X-scissor, basically I was dubbing between Ice Shard and X-scissor but since Ice Punch was already in there I decided to go with X-scissor. But now I take a closer look at it I might have aswell picked something like Aerial Ace if I came up against Heracross.

 

[Lee]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Feel free to repost your RMT when you've explained your team. If you're not sure how to do so, take a look through some of the other RMTs in the forum. You might wanna do something about that Weavile weak too!