My First RMT on Smogon (OU RMT)

At a Glance...
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ComeAtMeBro (Bisharp) (M) @ Focus Sash Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Swords Dance
- Sucker Punch
- Low Sweep
- Iron Head


Although there are no real leads due to Team Preview, Bisharp is as close
as it gets. With Max Speed investment, it can devastate Fake Out leads
such as Ambipom and Mienshao after a Low Sweep. If it's not being used
as a lead it can easily get up a Swords Dance or two and start wrecking
teams. So far it's done pretty good, racking up quite a few 6-0's.

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DESTROYUSALL (Conkeldurr) (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Guts
EVs: 120 HP / 252 Atk / 136 SDef
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bulk Up
- Drain Punch
- Mach Punch
- Payback


Conkeldurr is my more reliable physical attacker and is usually used to clean up late-game. Get a few Bulk
Ups in and then kill off frail and weakened Pokes. Not much else to say, pretty much the generic Conkeldurr.
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Masochist (Gliscor) (M) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 252 HP / 184 Def / 72 Spd
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Toxic
- Taunt
- Ice Fang

Gliscor is my primary Physical Wall and keeps threats like Conkeldurr
at bay. However I'm thinking of switching Toxic for Protect as it isn't seeing much use in practice.
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Trollkoal (Torkoal) (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: White Smoke
EVs: 252 HP / 196 Def / 60 SDef
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Overheat
- Earthquake
- Stealth Rock
- Will-O-Wisp

Torkoal is here for Rocks and Wisp and is used for crippling more than walling. It can usually
get a Wisp in on Pokemon like Tyranitar and then get Rocks up. I'm considering ditching Overheat
for Heat Wave or Flamethrower and possibly fitting Rapid Spin in this set to help out Bisharp later in the game.
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Sergio (Ludicolo) (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Swift Swim
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Giga Drain
- Surf
- Rain Dance
- Ice Beam

Ludicolo is my Special Sweeper, using Rain Dance to set up it's sweep unless facing
a Drizzle team and stealing their rain; making the sweep that much easier. Like
Conkeldurr, I like to save this for late game to clean up the scraps.
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Diarrhea (Gastrodon-East) (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Storm Drain
EVs: 152 HP / 104 Def / 252 SDef
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Scald
- Toxic
- Earth Power
- Recover


Gastro is here for Special Walling and Toxic Stall. There's not much else I can say about it.




I know that this RMT isn't exactly ideal, so please point out any mistakes I made. Thank you for your time.
 
TBH, there's a very good reason why Torkoal is NU. First, it's weakness to SR. Next, poor defensive typing. Last, no recovery move. I think you should switch this with another Poke like Forretress. Although Forretress has no recovery move, it performs like Torkoal, but outclasses it. Forry has Rapid Spin and 2 other entry hazards to abuse. It also has a good defensive typing having weakness only to Fire. You already have Gastrodon and Gliscor to resist Fire type move aimed at Forry so this should't be a prob at all. Although, I can't really find any good use of Rapid Spin other that blowing Toxic Spikes since Gastro gets raped by it. That's pretty much of Pokes.

So let's get on with your RMT as a whole. You should add more description to you pokes. Try adding stuff like what they do best, type resistance that the Poke covers for another and what they can do on a certain situation like if your opponent gets a free set up and which Poke is the best switch in to counter it. Hope I helped :)
 
I would put Jolly on Bisharp since the attack stat can always be raised with Swords Dance, while his speed stat cannot be raised. With max speed, it will make it easier to sweep and will help prevent Bisharp from being OHKOed by something in the same speed tier.
 
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