my first rmt....

[luigiowns]

well, i was thinking up teams for shoddy (username:swampertforever) and i thought up this little beauty. (well, it is in progress)


Absol@scope lens
super luck
jolly
swords dance
sucker punch
night slash
aerial ace
(my lucksol, boost up with sd and crithax does the rest)

Gardevoir@choice specs
synchronize
modest
psychic
focus blast
shadow ball
healing wish
(specsvoir + a couple of drifblims speed/sp atk boosts = a force to be reckoned with. and healing wish helps a little if there is no other option)

Drifblim@salac berry
unburden
(coming tommorow)
substitute
calm mind
shadow ball
baton passer
(yep, my special passer, + the speed boosts are helpful)

slaking@muscle band
truant
adamant
mega punch
shadow claw
aerial ace
bulk up
(my bulk up slaking may ony get a couple of attacks in, but they are super powerful)

empoleon@(coming tomorrow)
torrent
(coming tommorow)
steath rock
iron defence
yawn
aqua jet
(my phys wall and statuser)

slowking@choice specs
own tempo
quiet
flamethrower
psychic
surf
shadow ball
(yep specsking)

evs and stuff are coming tommorow as i don't have access to shoddy and have a poor memory

 

[Lee]

We need some more in-depth descriptions here. "Yep, specsking" and "my phys wall and statuser" really doesn't help the raters.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

If you're still not sure what to do, take a look through some other RMTs for examples.