My First Team (Mostly OU)

[Printer]

Aerodactly@Focus Sash
Pressure
Jolly
252 spd/ 252 atk/ 4 hp
~Taunt
~Stealth Rock
~Earthquake
~Stone Edge

Stealth rock opener, can do some damage if needed, but mostly just to stealth rock

Blissey@Leftovers
Natural Cure
Calm
126 Def/252 HP/ 4 Sp atk/126 sp def
~Wish
~Protect
~Ice Beam
~Toxic

The obvious wall, wish adds team support, and can do some toxic stalling

Tyranitar@Choice Band
Sand Stream
Adamant
252 atk/120 spd/ 136 hp
~Stone Edge
~Crunch
~Pursuit
~Outrage

Good STAB physical sweeper with some mixed speed/hp to add some bulk

Empolean@Life Orb
Torrent
Modest
252 sp atk/ 252 speed/ 4 hp
~Surf
~Grass Knot
~Agility
~Yawn

Special sweeper with yawn for extra coverage

Porygon-Z@Choice Specs
Adaphtability
Modest
4 hp/252 Sp Atk/ 252 Spe
Tri attack
Dark Pulse
Ice Beam
Hyper Beam

The main special attacker, one of my fav pokes

Forretress@Shed Shell
Sturdy
Relaxed
252 hp/252 def/ 4 atk
Spikes
Gyro Ball
Rapid Spin
Rest

Physical wall with rapid spin to get rid of stealth rock. I liked this poke from GSC

Any helpful advice would be nice, my first pokemon team ive ever made

 

[familyguyman]

This topic will be closed if you don't add THOROUGH explanations. Do that and I'll comment.

 

[Printer]

ok i will add some explanations

 

[Toxic~]

You should make your Aerodactyl your leading Pokemon so you can quickly set up Stealth Rocks or Taunt if you have to.

 

[Printer]

Thats what i meant but i just didnt put it in that order lol sorry changing it

 

[Kirby119]

Add more Explanations, or this is going to be closed.

 

[Printer]

Argh dunno what to add

 

[Xeorr]

like why you chose what you did etc. thats the kind of things team raters need to change your team

 

[Zach]

Argh dunno what to add

What is the goal of the team (no, 'winning' is not the goal, it's how you try to achieve that win)? How does that member of the team help achieve the goal?

 

[Printer]

oh ok, give me a bit, raiding on wow :)