my first uber team

[leonmachar]

hello this is my first uber team and I hope that you can help me improve it! So lets get started:
The lead:

Deoxys-s @focus sash
Nature: jolly
EVs are: 252atk/4def/252spe
Stealth rock
Spikes
Taunt
Extremespeed
Since im pretty new at ubers I picked this lead because its really fast and has 99% on seting SR up , spikes is as an extra entry hazard to hurt my enemy even more , taunt is here so I can be sure that I wouldn't get any status problem and extremespeed just as a filler
ADV: Deoxys-s advantage is his speed that makes one of a kind lead
DIS: Bulky leads like kyogre who can 1hko-2hko my deoxys

Kyogre @leftovers
Nature: Modest
EVs: 4hp/252spA/252spe
Calm mind
Surf
Ice beam
Thunder
I chose a calm mind kyogre to get even higher spA then it is now surf as a powerfull stab atack ice beam for hiting flying troubles like rayquaza and I have thunder for 100% acuracy while in rain
ADV: that kyogre usualy can take the hit and hit back even harder with a caml mind or two i becomes almost unstopable
DIS: Speed since in ubers almost every pokemon is outspeeding even with EVs in speed and yeah other kyogres do threaten mine really big if we need to go down to speed tie

Mewtwo @leftovers
Nature: timid
EVs: 4hp/252spA/252spe
Taunt
Calm mind
Aura sphere
Shadow ball
Here's the calm mind + taunt mewtwo calm mind to make the atacks even more powerfull taunt is to make that anoying wobufet useless aura sphere and shadow ball are for coverage
ADV: well mewtwo can really stop the battonpasers like mew and can uterly ruin wobufet and his sweeping abilities really are helpfull
DIS: main threats to mewtwo are scisor and metagross since this set lacks flamethrower maybe I should replace it over aura sphere?

Rayquaza @life orb
Nature: Hasty
EVs: 40atk/252spA/216spe
Dracometeor
Fire blast
Extremespeed
Brick break
Rayquaza I think it is an uber variant of mixmence :) dracometeor for powerfull stab atacks extremespeed is here for its priority and fireblast and brick break are for covarage
ADV: Rayquaza has the ability to rip throuth half of my oponents team and this set is good to counter most of the common switch ins.
DIS: The bigest disadvantage is that it is really hard to switch this in, and sciror does anoy rayquaza as well

Giratina-o @platinum orb
nature: Naive
EVs: 248atk/64spA/196spe
HP (fire)
Outrage
Shadow sneak
Draco meteor
HP fire is to take care of anything steel outrage is a powerfull STAB atack same goes with draco meteor shadow sneak is here for its priority
ADV: and i think that giratino-o is one of the best spin blockers in ubers (if not the best) giratina has the ability to knock out a couple of my oponents pokemon as well
DIS: well yeah I can't hold a normal item this is not really helpfull and the bigest thing I should look out is heatran since it can take all of the atacks prety well

Foretress @leftovers
nature: carefull
EVs: 252hp/44atk/212spD
Spikes
Toxic spikes
Payback
Rapid spin
this set makes foretress take some special hits spikes here if deoxys-s doesn't have a chance to set them up toxic spikes to spread some poison rapid spin is to well spin away the entry hazards and payback is mostly filler
ADV: Even if you don't know this if one on one foretress can easily take care of scisor and spin away the entry hazards
DIS: the bigest disadvantage is the terible fear of fire atacks one hit from ho-oh = dead fortress

So that's it i'm hoping to get some good advise on my first uber team :)
Thank you for reading this!

 

[ultimifier]

2 things.

1) you might want to add more descriptions in the OP or it will get locked. This looks like a decent team and I want to help so do that ASAP (mod edit the above out when he changes it please)

This looks like an offensive team and you REALLY dont want a forry on an offensive team. He slows down the momentum and you already have spikes on deoxys-e. Since you are a newer ubers player I suggest throwing Wobbofet into that spot. He can help you revenge scarfers, trap blissey, and help you set up sweepers. Assuming you do this:

your team is prettty good against stall. You have CM kyogre, wobboffet, mixquaza, AND CM mewtwo. I suggest changing Rayquaza to the standard SD set. Wob can help you set him up and wob can also trap and revenge those annoying choice scarf palkias, jirachis, whatever who try and revenge him.

The team will still not be perfect but play around with these changes and let me know how it goes.

 

[shrang]

Agreeing with ultimifier, Forrretress is pretty much dead weight on your team, ESPECIALLY when you have Deoxys-S Spiking for you already. Replace him with Wobbuffet, so your Ray can get free switch-ins and wreak havoc. He can also act as a make shift revenge killer if you really need to.

I would suggest changing CM Kyogre's set to the Boosting Tank set or just the RestTalk set to counter RP Groundons. You lose coverage, but you gain survivability, and because you have Mewtwo as your typical CM sweeper, so there's no need for Kyogre to do the same, especially with its mediocre speed.

Kyogre @ Leftovers
Ability: Drizzle
EVs: 240 HP / 244 Def / 24 Spe
Modest nature
-Rest
-Sleep Talk
-Surf
-Thunder/Ice Beam/Calm Mind

I smell a Ray weakness after this, so if you want, you can replace Giratina-O with one of Scarfchomp, Scarf Palkia, Scarf Jirachi.

 

[iShedinja]

A well used Scarf Palkia really just screws this team over.


The one other suggestion that I'll like to make is changing foretress to wobbuffet. With this change, you have a direct counter for a Rayquaza locked onto outrage (you live and can use counter) or a Palkia using some sort of choiced attack. Also, I just want to know what Kyogre is seriously doing for your team other than boosting down the power of Rayquaza's fire blast.

 

[shrang]

PUT A TIMID NATURE ON DEOXYS! You're running a special attack and a -sp.atk nature is just silly.

Wait what, he's using Extremespeed.

 

[iShedinja]

Oh, I accidentally misread it as signal beam for some odd reason ^_^;