my ou team.. first time team be nice :p

[ipulse]

Roserade@focus sash
evs 4 hp 184 spe 252 spca
timid nature natural cure
MOVE SET
grass knot
hp fire
sleep powder
toxic spikes

Swampert@leftovers
relaxed nature torrent
evs 252 hp 252 def 4 spd
MOVE SET
stealth rocks
ice beam
eq
roar

GENGAR@black sludge
hasty nature levitate
ev 100 atck 252 speed 156 sp atck
MOVE SET
hypnosis
shadow ball
substitute
focus punch

SCIZOR@chioce band
adamant nature technician
ev 248 hp 252 atck 8 speed
MOVE SET
bullet punch
superpower
u-turn
pursuit

SCEPTILE@life orb
ev 252 atck 252 spe 4 def
jolly nature overgrow
MOVE SET
substitute
leaf blade
sword dance
thunder punch

BLISSEY@leftovers
ev 24 hp 252 def 232 sp def
calm nature natural cure
MOVE SET
toxic
protect
wish
flamethrower



thats prty much the team i use in ou.. if there are any moves or over pokes you think i should change i would love to hear it. though i love the pokes on my team there some of my favs thats why i choose them just give me some insight im new and looking for advice ty.

 

[Lee]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Feel free to try again whenever you're ready.