My Platinum OU Team

[Unicorngangster]

Umbreon @leftovers HP252/SD252/D4
-Curse
-Payback
-Moonlight
-Toxic

Tyranitar @leftovers Attack 252/Defense 252/4 Speed
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake
-Crunch
- Fire Blast

Togekiss @leftovers HP252/SD252/D4
-Thunder Wave
-Roost
-Nasty Plot
-Baton Pass

Starmie @Life Orb SA252/Speed252/SD4
-Hydro Pump
-Thunderbolt
-Ice Beam
-HP Fire

Roserade @Big Root D252/SD252/HP4
-Sleep Powder
-Leech Seed
-Giga Drain
- Rest

Dragonite @Lum Berry D252/SD252/HP4
-Dragon Dance
-Outrage
-Waterfall
-Fire Punch

 

[dragonuser]

Hi,

So this team is in violation of RMT Rule #2, which states that you need to have at least 3 lines of description per Pokemon. Try to explain why you chose that specific Pokemon, and why you chose that specific set (moves/evs/etc). It would also be best to post your sets in the following format:

format

Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 156 HP / 252 Atk / 100 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Pursuit
- Superpower

as this format carries all important information (your current format lacks some information) and is easy to read. If you would like to see excellent examples of what I am talking about, it would be best to look at the RMT Archive.

PM me your descriptions and I will unlock this thread for you.

On a side note, if this is an ingame team, you may also find some use in posting this in the Orange Islands SQSA thread.