New Team for Shoddy (No Blissey)

[2PWN4U]

Drapion @Leftovers
Impish / Battle Armor
252 HP / 6 Atk / 252 Def-
-Knock Off
-Night Slash
-Wirlwind
-Toxic Spikes
Sets up Toxic Spikes for Zappados to abuse and knocks of important items.

Zapados @Leftovers
Timid / Pressure
252 HP / 160 SpD / 96 Spe
-Thunderbolt
-HP Ice
-Substitute
-Roost
Abuses spikes and forces switches.

Vaporeon @Leftovers
Bold / Water Absorb
108 HP / 252 Def / 48 Spe
-Subtitute
-Baton Pass
-Surf
-Wish
A must have or my team. Heals everyone and passes subs.

Donphan @Leftovers
Impish / Sturdy
252 HP / 6 Atk / 252 Def
-Rapid Spin
-Stalth Rock
-arthquake
-Ice Shard
I needed a spinner s I picked Donphan. Also my insurance against Yanmega/Salamence leads with Ice Shard.

Infernape @Life Orb
Naive / Blaze
24 Atk / 252 SpA / 232 Spe
-Nastey Plot
-Flamethrower
-Grass Knot
-Close Combat
Mixnpe fr taking out walls and sweeping.

Garchomp @Yache Berry
Jolly / Sand Veil
6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
-Sords Dance
-Eartquake
-Dragon Claw
-Fire Fang
Classic Garchomp and just nother sweeper for my team.

 

[Venom]

Standard stuff, although I don't like how you have problems with Mamoswine and Deoxys-E to a certain extent. Just gonna point out some stuff.

Vaporeon seems to be the only thing that can "stop" Mamoswine here, everything else is Ice Shard / Earthquake here, unless you revenge kill it with Infernape, but of course it won't stay into a MixApe, but yeah, you have serious problems. Bronzong, the best counter to it could fit well, fixing it up, and patching up the Deoxys thing here.

I would rather go Calm > Timid, to handle MixApe and Gengar better. 172 Hp / 252 Def / 84 SpAtk would be better, you still have the same things, just a little more HP to handle things better. Wish + Protect would be better too, so you are able to heal yourself. I gotta run, but if I see any other things, I will edit or past later

 

[Lee]

I'm sorry but we need a little more detail than that.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Put a little more effort into your descriptions and try again.