New to Competitive Pkmn, RMT please

[El Hoangster]

Ferrothorn @ Leftovers
Trait: Iron Barbs
EVs: 252 SDef / 252 HP / 4 Def
Quiet Nature
IVs: 30 Atk / 30 Def / 2 Spd
- Stealth Rock
- Spikes
- Leech Seed
- Power Whip
>I usually start with this guy to set up rocks.

Tyranitar @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 64 Atk / 192 SDef / 252 HP
Careful Nature
- Crunch
- Stone Edge
- Pursuit
- Aerial Ace
>I use him as a physical tank.

Gyarados @ Life Orb
Trait: Moxie
EVs: 248 Atk / 204 Spd / 56 HP
Serious Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Substitute
- Bounce
- Waterfall
>Substitute - Dragon Dance sweep.

Alakazam @ Life Orb
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 SAtk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Calm Mind
- Recover
- Psychic
- Shadow Ball
> Special sweep. Max speed to get Calm Mind and Psychic or Shadow Ball out before enemy can 2HKO me.

Metagross @ Expert Belt
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 252 Atk / 108 Def / 148 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Zen Headbutt
- Meteor Mash
- Ice Punch
- ThunderPunch
>Tank that'll land SE's on unsuspecting enemies.

Hydreigon @ Choice Specs
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 252 SAtk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Modest Nature
- Dark Pulse
- Draco Meteor
- Focus Blast
- Fire Blast
>Sweep.

Thanks :naughty::nerd:

 

[Zero Hour 17]

First things first. If you don't add more to this, a mod will lock the thread. You need to add individual descriptions of what each pokemon does, why you chose what moves and so on and so forth.

Volcarona will eat this entire team alive. Fiery dance will destroy Ferrothorn and Metagross while Bugg Buzz will KO everything else except Gyarados, which if Rocks are up, which they probably will be, and Volcarona has a quiver dance up, it can KO Gyarados no sweat.

Terrakion will also run through this team. Close Combat will destroy Ferrothorn, Tyranitar, Hydreigon, and Metagross. Stone Edge finishes Gyarados and if it has a scarf, any move other than cc will KO Alakazam easy.

Dragonite will also give you alot of problems. Most run either fire blast or fire punch which will KO Metagross and Ferrothorn and the only Ice move you have is on Metagross.

Honestly the team has too many holes and I don't think I know enough to plug them without sitting down for an hour and basically reworking the whole team with different pokemon.

 

[LUST]

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