Offense Team

[matzemix]

@ Focus Sash
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 ATK / 252 SPD
~Taunt
~Stealth Rock
~Stone Edge
~Earthquake

My Taunt/SR Lead.

@ Life-Orb
Nature: Timid
Ability: Volt-Absorb
EVs: 4 DEF / 252 SPD / 252 SATK
~TB
~HP {Grass}
~Shadow Ball
~Signal Beam

LO Sweep. Switching it into Electro ATKs sometimes.

@ Leftcovers
Nature: Calm
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 DEF / 4 SPD
~Ice Beam
~Surf
~Roar
~Calm Mind

Special Wall. IB vs Dragons, Surf has nice STAB. Roar vs Subs/BPing and CM always useful.

@ Leftcovers
Nature: Bold
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP / 252 DEF / 4 SATK
~FT
~TB
~Pain Split
~WoW

Phy. Wall, very nice vs almost every Sweeper, only Heatran is bad. I hope he'll get Uber soon^^ Switch into Ground Moves.

@ Choice Band
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Arena Trap
EVs: 40 HP / 252 ATK / 216 SPD
~Earthquake
~Stone Edge
~Arial Ace
~Night Slash

Base Trapper, switching into Electro Attacks also.

@ Choice Scarf
Nature: Naive
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SPD / 252 SATK
~Fire Blast
~Earth Power
~HP {Grass}
~Explosion

Scarfer, nothing special^^ Had Scizor in before, but i think he's the better choice.



2 Ground Weaks (Heatran,Jolteon) - 2 Ground Immunes. (Aero,Weezing)
2 Electro Weaks (Aero,Suicune) - 2 Electro Immune. (Dugtrio,Jolteon)
3 Water Weaks (Aero,Dugtrio,Heatran) - 1 Counter (Suicune)
2 Ice Weaks (Aero,Dugtrio) - 2 Counter (Suicune,Heatran)
1 Rock Weak (Aero) - 2 Counter (Heatran,Dugtrio)
2 Grass Weaks (Suicune, Dugtrio) - 2 Counter (Heatran,Weezing)

These are Attack Weaks, not Pokemon Type Weaks, thats the reason why Jolteon isnt a Water Counter^^
Water Attacks are stronk vs me, what can i do ?^^ Or dont u think its a problem? Well, hope u'll rate it :)

 

[Justinawe]

Hey dude, I think the team is pretty interesting. Some things that could be changed though. For an offense team, you only have 2/3 of your pokemon being offensive. The point of an offense team is for all the pokemon to be able to sweep and keep the momentum moving in your favor. Instead of that Weezing set, I would switch out for an offensive CM Celebi set. EVs are 76 HP / 252 SpA / 180 Spe. That would give you an extra water resist, as well as having the awesome "Celetran" combo. Now instead of Suicune, I would suggest using a Life Orb Gyarados. That gives you some physical attacking, as your only other physical attacker is Dugtrio. Aero usually dies too quickly from my experience to be a real physical sweeper mid game. The last pokemon I would like to change is Dugtrio, as with Scizor around everywhere, Duggy has lost some of its usefulness. So instead of Dugtrio I think a CB Scizor would be a better option in the last spot. You can still revenge kill things with Pursuit, as well as having Bullet Punch to get some quick KOs. Hope this rate helps, and good luck with the team!

 

[Lee]

Your descriptions are sorely lacking - take a look through other RMTs to see what we expect.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Try again whenever you're ready.