XY OU OU Beginner

[The Loner]

Hello, everyone!

I'm starting now to project and building my first competitive team and I'd like to receive some feedback and advise from you veterans. It's based on Mega Charizard-X. Here we go:

Tyranitar @ Smooth Rock
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 248 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
Impish Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Crunch
- Ice Beam
- Earthquake

Excadrill @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sand Rush
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Iron Head
- Rapid Spin

Clefable @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
- Moonblast
- Wish
- Protect
- Heal Bell

Greninja @ Life Orb
Ability: Protean
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Hydro Pump
- Ice Beam
- Extrasensory
- Grass Knot

Charizard-Mega-X @ Charizardite X
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 144 HP / 252 Atk / 112 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dragon Claw
- Flare Blitz
- Roost

Dragonite @ Choice Band
Ability: Multiscale
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Outrage
- Extreme Speed
- Thunder Punch
- Superpower

Thank you!

 

[Nyron777]

Umm couple things
1. you need more lines of description for the sets and such

2. Change Excadrill from Focus Sash to Life Orb/Air Balloon
Life orb gives it the extra power and if you dont wanna widdle him down, air balloon so he can switch into ground types and smack them back especially choice locked landorus-t and also he can come into ground moves aimed at charizard other than that nice team but mayabe switch thunderpunch on Dragonite to Fire/Ice punch.