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lincoln503

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Landorus-Therian @ Life Orb
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Swords Dance
- Outrage

Landorus-T is an excellent sweeper and i
personally think should be banned from OU
and linger in Uber

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Lucario @ Leftovers
Trait: Inner Focus
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Close Combat
- Extreme Speed
- Ice Punch
- Swords Dance

my most favorite pokemon in the whole game (and my main sweeper)
is strong beyond beleif. Its main goal is to get a swords dance up,
then it will be able to 6-0 your opponents team.

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Hydreigon @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Modest Nature
- Dark Pulse
- Draco Meteor
- Fire Blast
- Surf

all out attacker, pretty damn good at it to,
with 252 SAtk EV's it is a total beast

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Espeon @ Life Orb
Trait: Magic Bounce
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Calm Mind
- Psychic
- Shadow Ball
- Hidden Power [Fighting]

Calm mind is an essential move on most psychic types,
but extra useful on my team (because i dont have or want
a stupid wall) plus it boosts its already super high SAtk to
new hights.

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Heatran @ Air Balloon
Trait: Flash Fire
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Earth Power
- Magma Storm
- Stealth Rock
- Will-O-Wisp

My lead, is a popular choice on many OU teams and
I can see why. heres what I always do: Send out lava lamp (heatran)
set up stealth rock, meanwhile my opponent switches his or
her lead with gastrodon or dugtrio. Then turn ends
(next turn) opponent tries to use earthquake however it misses because
i send out hydreigon.


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Jolteon @ Life Orb
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Modest Nature
- Shadow Ball
- Thunderbolt
- Baton Pass
- Subsitute


my support obviously, i personally think its pretty good at Subsite-Batonpass.
life orb i could do better but people these days are smart to air balloon users.
 
You don't need baton pass to give wish to another pokemon. It automatically goes to the pokemon that is on the field next turn. Also, Jolteon is a terrible wish passer, as it has only a base 65 HP. Your team also has zero defensive presence. Plus, you can't switch heatran out against dugtrio because it has arena trap.
 
Landorus shouldn't be Ubers. Haxorus has higher attack and Speed, and it's OU.

Lucario just doesn't possess the power the power in his attacks to use Leftovers.

Heatran will get KO'd by Dugtrio... big time.

Jolteon as a Wish-passer? One hit and he's dead.
 
Hi,
seeing as you're a beginner I will kindly ask you to do some more research / testing before you post your team. This is because a lot of the movesets and descriptions are a bit... Off. Landorus-T should never use Outrage because of the confusion factor, so you should replace it with something like HP Ice so you can hit Gliscor or opposing Landorus. Heatran can not 'switch into Landorus-T or Hydreigon' if Dugtrio comes in like you said, because Dugtrio's ability, Arena Trap, traps any grounded pokemon (pokemon without an air balloon, without Levitate as their ability, or flying type) so they can't switch. Unfortunately for both you and many other battlers, Heatran is trapped, which is why Dugtrio is such a problem. You should consider giving Heatran an Air Balloon so it can switch in and out of Dugtrio freely. That said Dugtrio can also come in on Lucario as it sets up Swords Dance, and OHKO it with EQ, ending your 6-0 sweep, so you might want to give Lucario a priority move such as Extreme Speed so it can at least hit back before it goes down. Walls are definitely not stupid; every balanced team such as your needs a few Walls so your sweepers don't get hurt too badly before they sweep. Jolteon should not be using Wish because of it's poor HP stat- I recommend you use Substitute, so you pass Subs to Landorus-T, Lucario, and Espeon to help them set up.
 
It does indeed learn Outrage courtesy of BW2 move tutors. However, in general, Dragon-type moves should never be used on non-Dragons because of the STAB loss and poor super effective coverage. Not to mention Outrage locks you into the move for 2-3 turns, making you incredibly susceptible to revenge killing. Your team doesn't really seem very well-thought out, I'd recommend lurking a little more and learning the metagame before posting an RMT.
 
Skyfall said:
You don't need baton pass to give wish to another pokemon. It automatically goes to the pokemon that is on the field next turn. Also, Jolteon is a terrible wish passer, as it has only a base 65 HP. Your team also has zero defensive presence. Plus, you can't switch heatran out against dugtrio because it has arena trap.
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Sorry to burst your bubble but i have air balloon so that allows me to switch freely
 
To put it bluntly, you essentially to need to completely revamp the team. Firstly, some defensive presence is necessar, both physical and special. I'll make a brief list of both physical and special walls that you can pick from, and then give some more specific suggestions.

physical:
Tangrowth
Forretress
Quagsire
Skarmory
Ferrothorn
Gliscor
Jirachi
Hippowdon
Bronzong

Special:
Latias
Vaporeon
Jellicent
Blissey
Chansey
Gastrodon
Tentacruel

Now, physically, I'd most highly suggest gliscor, as it patches up your strong fighting weakness, that would let most people rip your team a new one. With a toxic orb, its ability lets it heal 1/8th of its health each turn, which gives it incredible survivability when paired with its massive defense stat. Tangrowth would also work, and would work well for drawing fire attacks to let Heatran take, to get that nice flash fire bonus. Look on smogon for good sets for these (Gliscor has some offensive sets, take one of the wall ones for the love of god. Walls are a good thing.)

Speciall, I'd say go with either Vaporeon or Gastrodon, as both heatran and Landorus are weak to water, so both their abilities will get use, as well as them patching up the obvious water weakness your team has.

This will give your team more of a defensive presence. There are still quite a few flaws you need to take a look at, and I'm sure more people will cover those. Those are just my two cents, and your team is far enough away from being good that I don't want to spend any more time trying to patch it up.
 
Sorry to burst your bubble, but Mamoswine can OHKO all your pokemon with it's STABs once Heatran's ballon is popped, and all your pokemon except jolteon are weak to a priority move, and none have the defenses to switch into a strong STAB from an opponent.
Also, you put air balloon on after I made that post.
 
After the Eevee's are dead, which will most likely happen early, Conkeldurr says hi. Good game, pack your bags.
You dont have enough defensive synergy, this is pretty much all I can say! :pimp:
 
I was going to write a full review for this team, but after reading all of the comments, I'm not going to do so because you aren't able to take constructive criticism well, so it doesn't really matter. Your biggest problem, other than your attitude towards receiving help, is that you built your team based mainly upon pokemon that work well independently, all pulling in different directions, and you don't necessarily have a "goal" to work towards. You need to develop a goal and build the team around that, not simply "this pokemon KOs things well, and so does this one." Instead of that mentality, do something such as planning a team around a Lucario sweep. Start with Lucario, and then fill the team with members that assist him in that goal, members that counter his own counters.
 
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