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Quality Control Pain Split Hatt (QC 0/2) (GP 0/1)

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Hatterene (F) @ Rocky Helmet / Leftovers
Ability: Magic Bounce
EVs: 252 HP / 204 Def / 52 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Bold Nature
- Psychic Noise
- Draining Kiss
- Pain Split
- Nuzzle

With the combination of Magic Bounce, strong physical bulk, and utility options such as Pain Split, Hatterene becomes key hazard control while checking key threats like Zamazenta, Great Tusk, and Deoxys-S. Psychic Noise is used to block recovery attempts from defensive walls like Clefable and Garganacl, threaten opponents through Substitutes like Zamazenta and Iron Moth, and temporarily inhibits Gliscor's Poison Heal. Draining Kiss is additional recovery, and meaningfully chips Dark-types like Ting-Lu and Hisuian Samurott, and Dragon-types like Dragonite and Raging Bolt. Pain Split allows Hatterene to both gain back health and wear high HP walls like Blissey and Ting-Lu down. Nuzzle lets it spread paralysis against opponents that would have an easy time switching in like Choice Scarf Gholdengo and Iron Crown, which allows opportunities for its teammates to take advantage of. It additionally deters set up sweepers like Ogerpon-W and Dragonite from setting up in front of it. Rocky Helmet allows Hatterene to punish Rapid Spin attempts from Great Tusk and Iron Treads, while it can also punish Hisuian Samurott's Ceaseless Edge and U-turns from pivots Landorus-T or Cinderace. Leftovers can also be used to gain additional longevity, making Hatterene even more difficult to take out. Tera Water gives Hatterene an easier matchup against Cinderace, while it turns its Steel-type weakness into a resistance against Gholdengo and Iron Crown, with the added bonus of being able to take on Walking Wake to use Nuzzle on. 52 Speed EVs are to outspeed Garganacl and Toxapex.

Hatterene is used on bulky offense and offense as a hazard control option, while improving the matchup against specific opponents like Zamazenta. Teammates weak to hazards like Assault Vest Tornadus-T, Kyurem, and Non Heavy-Duty Boots Dragonite appreciate Hatterene being solid hazard control, while Hatterene appreciates their offensive and defensive capabilities like threatening Iron Treads. Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a exceptional parter, aiding Hatterene against threats like Darkrai, Gholdengo, and Choice Specs Dragapult. Heatran is also appreciated as a teammate, providing a useful switch in against Scizor and Pecharunt while also setting its own hazards, with Hatterene in return taking on Zamazenta and Ting Lu. Both Assault Vest Tornadus-T and Heatran are also able to pressure Hatterene's checks like Galarian Slowking and Corviknight. Hatterene struggles to get past Steel-types like Iron Treads, Heatran, and Tinkaton, as they are able to threaten Hatterene and still set Stealth Rock up after Hatterene is KOd. Thus, strong Fighting- and Ground- types like Zamazenta, Great Tusk, and Ting-lu, are able to maintain hazard superiority. Zamazenta notably appreciates a solid Psychic-type switch in against Deoxys-S, with Zamazenta also being able to run non Heavy-Duty Boots sets more freely, while Hatterene likes Zamazenta handling Steel-types like Kingambit. Ghost-types like Gholdengo and Pecharunt provide a similar threat to Hatterene, so Dark-types like Kingambit and Darkrai are useful to threaten immense damage onto them, while the Dark-types appreciate Hatterene staving off non Heavy Slam Zamazenta. Additional hazard control options like Great Tusk, Iron Treads, and Cinderace, are heavily appreciated to relieve some of the pressure off of Hatterene. Ogerpon-W can pressure Hatterene's checks like Galarian Slowking and Gholdengo with Knock Off, and can both set hazards and pivots Hatterene in with U-turn. Hatterene, meanwhile, can check physical walls like Galarian Weezing and Zamazenta, while keeping hazards off for Ogerpon-W and paralyzing faster threats like Cinderace for Ogerpon-W to take advantage of.
 
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Please let me know once it is implemented and I can give it another look, thank you!

Hatterene (F) @ Rocky Helmet / Leftovers
Ability: Magic Bounce
EVs: 252 HP / 204 Def / 52 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Bold Nature
- Psychic Noise
- Draining Kiss
- Pain Split
- Nuzzle

With the combination of Magic Bounce and its utility options, Hatterene becomes hazard control while checking key threats like Zamazenta, Great Tusk, and Deoxys-S. This is true for Hatterene in general. Anything in particular to note about this set? You could make special emphasis on the physical bulk or even Pain Split here, just what separates it from other sets Psychic Noise is used to block recovery attempts from defensive walls like Clefable and Garganacl, threaten opponents through Substitutes like Zamazenta and Iron Moth, and temporarily inhibits Gliscor's Poison Heal. Draining Kiss is additional recovery, and meaningfully chips Dark-types like Ting-Lu and Hisuian Samurott, and Dragon-types like Dragonite and Raging Bolt. Pain Split allows Hatterene to both gain back health and wear high HP walls like Blissey and Ting-Lu down. Nuzzle lets it spread paralysis against opponents like Choice Scarf Gholdengo and Iron Crown, which allows opportunities for its teammates to take advantage of. Would be good to mention it deters setup sweepers such as Ogerpon-W and Dragonite from using Hatterene as fodder. Likewise if you are keeping the Gholdengo and Iron Crown mentions, make sure its clear that you mention them cause they do well into Hatterene Rocky Helmet allows Hatterene to punish Rapid Spin attempts from Great Tusk and Iron Treads, while it can also punish Hisuian Samurott's Ceaseless Edge. Also mention U-turns Leftovers can also be used to gain additional longevity, making Hatterene even more difficult to take out. Tera Water gives Hatterene an easier matchup against Cinderace, while it gains a notable Water- and Steel- resistance against Walking Wake and Gholdengo. Think this part could be expanded a on a fair bit; note how it turns Hatterene's Steel weakness into a resistance as you are not exactly beating Gholdengo; also why is resisting Water-type moves important, perhaps to cripple Walking Wake in an emergency(?) Just remember to make it clear for the reader

- Remember to mention the Speed investment allows Hatterene to outspeed Garganacl, also Toxapex if you want to mention it but that you can Nuzzle, so Garg is the big one


Hatterene is used on bulky offense and offense as a hazard control option, while improving the matchup against specific opponents like Zamazenta. Teammates weak to hazards like Ogerpon-W, Kyurem, and Non Heavy-Duty Boots Dragonite appreciate Hatterene being solid hazard control, while Hatterene appreciates their offensive and defensive capabilities like threatening Iron Treads. Hatterene struggles to get past Steel-types like Tinkaton, Heatran, and Iron-Treads, Iron Treads, Heatran, and Tinkaton, Lets leave the UU Pokemon at the end as they are able to threaten Hatterene and still set Stealth Rock up after Hatterene is KOd. Thus, strong Fighting- and Ground- types like Zamazenta, Great Tusk, and Ting-lu, are able to maintain hazard superiority. Zamazenta notably appreciates a solid Psychic-type switch in against Deoxys-S, with Zamazenta also being able to run non Heavy-Duty Boots sets more freely, while Hatterene likes Zamazenta handling Steel-types like Kingambit and Scizor. Ghost-types like Gholdengo and Pecharunt provide a similar threat to Hatterene, so Dark-types like Kingambit and Darkrai are useful to threaten immense damage onto them, while the Dark-types appreciate Hatterene staving off non Heavy Slam Zamazenta. Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a big Pokemon missing, and one that can aid against the likes of Gholdengo, Darkrai, Iron Crown, and Choice Specs Dragapult, while it appreciates Hatterene keeping hazards off the field. Heatran may similarly help against these special attackers as well as Iron Moth and Scizor. Finally, Great Tusk and Cinderace aid against entry hazards to aliviate pressure from Hatterene. Perhaps a route is to restructure the text to mention Tornadus-T in place of Ogerpon-W, and mention Ogerpon-W separatedly. A few of the Pokemon you listed also eal with Galarian Slowking, which is another check missing.
 
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Only small comments this time around, ty sm for taking the time, QC 1/2 after implemented!

Hatterene (F) @ Rocky Helmet / Leftovers
Ability: Magic Bounce
EVs: 252 HP / 204 Def / 52 Spe
Tera Type: Water
Bold Nature
- Psychic Noise
- Draining Kiss
- Pain Split
- Nuzzle

With the combination of Magic Bounce, strong physical bulk, and utility options such as Pain Split, Not sure how to improve this without getting into specifics, perhaps something like "to let it stick around longer" could be an option, but perhaps the second checker has a better idea Hatterene becomes key hazard control while checking key threats like Zamazenta, Great Tusk, and Deoxys-S. Psychic Noise is used to block recovery attempts from defensive walls like Clefable and Garganacl, threaten opponents through Substitutes like Zamazenta and Iron Moth, and temporarily inhibits Gliscor's Poison Heal. Draining Kiss is additional recovery, and meaningfully chips Dark-types like Ting-Lu and Hisuian Samurott, and Dragon-types like Dragonite and Raging Bolt. Pain Split allows Hatterene to both gain back health and wear high HP walls like Blissey and Ting-Lu down. Could mention other Pokemon that aim to chip it down such as Landorus-T and Garchomp, but this alone is fine Nuzzle lets it spread paralysis against opponents that would have an easy time switching in like Choice Scarf Gholdengo and Iron Crown, which allows opportunities for its teammates to take advantage of. It additionally deters set up sweepers like Ogerpon-W and Dragonite from setting up in front of it. Could mix this with the previous sentence, Idt Nuzzle requires two separated sentences but fine if you want to keep it as is Rocky Helmet allows Hatterene to punish Rapid Spin attempts from Great Tusk and Iron Treads, while it can also punish Hisuian Samurott's Ceaseless Edge and U-turns from pivots Landorus-T or Cinderace. Leftovers can also be used to gain additional longevity, making Hatterene even more difficult to take out. Tera Water gives Hatterene an easier matchup against Cinderace, while it turns its Steel-type weakness into a resistance against Gholdengo and Iron Crown, with the added bonus of being able to take on Walking Wake to use Nuzzle on. 52 Speed EVs are to outspeed Garganacl and Toxapex.

Hatterene is used on bulky offense and offense as a hazard control option, while improving the matchup against specific opponents like Zamazenta. Teammates weak to hazards like Assault Vest Tornadus-T, Kyurem, and Non Heavy-Duty Boots Dragonite appreciate Hatterene being solid hazard control, while Hatterene appreciates their offensive and defensive capabilities like threatening Iron Treads. Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a exceptional parter, aiding Hatterene against threats like Darkrai, Gholdengo, and Choice Specs Dragapult. Heatran is also appreciated as a teammate, providing a useful switch in against Scizor, Iron Moth, and Pecharunt while also setting its own hazards, with Hatterene in return taking on Zamazenta and Ting Lu. Both Assault Vest Tornadus-T and Heatran are also able to pressure Hatterene's checks like Galarian Slowking and Corviknight. Hatterene struggles to get past Steel-types like Iron Treads, Heatran, and Tinkaton, as they are able to threaten Hatterene and still set Stealth Rock up after Hatterene is KOd. Thus, strong Fighting- and Ground- types like Zamazenta, Great Tusk, and Ting-lu, are able to maintain hazard superiority. Zamazenta notably appreciates a solid Psychic-type switch in against Deoxys-S, with Zamazenta also being able to run non Heavy-Duty Boots sets more freely, while Hatterene likes Zamazenta handling Steel-types like Kingambit. Ghost-types like Gholdengo and Pecharunt provide a similar threat to Hatterene, so Dark-types like Kingambit and Darkrai are useful to threaten immense damage onto them, while the Dark-types appreciate Hatterene staving off non Heavy Slam Zamazenta. Additional hazard control options like Great Tusk, Iron Treads, I am not quite sure about this one myself but dont mint it much either and Cinderace, are heavily appreciated to relieve some of the pressure off of Hatterene. Ogerpon-W can pressure Hatterene's checks like Galarian Slowking and Gholdengo with Knock Off, and can both set hazards and pivots Hatterene in with U-turn. Hatterene, meanwhile, can check physical walls like Galarian Weezing and Zamazenta, while keeping hazards off for Ogerpon-W and paralyzing faster threats like Cinderace for Ogerpon-W to take advantage of. Galarian Slowking and Gholdengo are more naturally checked by the Ground-types and Dark-types you mentioned above, please try to make the text reflect this if possible
 
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