Phione, her second battle: A Warstory

SuperAzelf Vs PK_Thunder

Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause

My Team:

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My Opponent's Team:

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6-6


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PK_Thunder sent out Dragonite (lvl 100 Dragonite ?).
SuperAzelf sent out Deoxys-e (lvl 100 Deoxys-e).
Deoxys-e is exerting its pressure!
Deoxys-e used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
Dragonite lost 40% of its health.
The Yache Berry weakened Ice Beam's power!
Dragonite used Dragon Dance.
Dragonite's attack was raised.
Dragonite's speed was raised.
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Crap, I'm off to a horrible start, I didn't get to use my new variant of Deoxys-E this battle... -_- ... OH, and Dragonite unforuntately has a DD under its belt thanks to its hidden Yache Berry.

Dragonite used Outrage.
Dragonite went on a rampage!
A critical hit!
Deoxys-e lost 100% of its health.
SuperAzelf's Deoxys-e fainted.
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I should've saw that coming <.<.

5-6
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SuperAzelf switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Dragonite's attack!
Dragonite used Outrage.
It's super effective!
Salamence lost 100% of its health.
SuperAzelf's Salamence fainted.
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I had to drop Nite's attack a bit before I could switch in Jirachi, unfortunately Outrage wasn't a 2KO as I thought it would be :/.

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4-6
SuperAzelf switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Dragonite used Outrage.
It's not very effective...
Jirachi lost 25% of its health.
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
Dragonite lost 33% of its health.
Dragonite's rampage ended.
Dragonite became confused!
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
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Good thing I invested those attack EVs on Jirachi, Zen Headbutt is doing decent damage to it. I can already see that Earthquake brewing in Dragonite's tail- head- horn- whatever.

Dragonite is confused!
Dragonite used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 51% of its health.
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
Jirachi's attack missed!
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
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SHIT! Through the confusion, Earthquake hits and to add onto that, Zen Headbutt misses.

Dragonite is confused!
It hurt itself in its confusion!
Dragonite lost 16% of its health.
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
Dragonite lost 12% of its health.
PK_Thunder's Dragonite fainted.
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
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Thank you god. It was bound to happen <_<.

4-5
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PK_Thunder switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Jirachi used Wish.
Jirachi made a wish!
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Jirachi fell asleep!
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
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Seriously, why didn't I see that coming? Snorlax could've SleepTalked its way out of that. I did the next best thing and just Wished and left.

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SuperAzelf switched in Phione (lvl 100 Phione).
Bronzong used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
The wish came true!
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Phione, the Sea Fairy. I decided to use one on Shoddy after I saw some on Pokemon Dungeon 2. Trust me, that game is influential O_O, after hatching Manaphy, I was gonna make a topic trying to move it back to OU... then I realized that I would get an ass lashing for even bringing that up.

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PK_Thunder switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Phione used Waterfall.
Blissey lost 27% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Waterfall would've done shit damage to Bronzong <_<, so, I decided to predict a switch.

Phione used Waterfall.
Blissey lost 27% of its health.
Blissey used Wish.
Blissey made a wish!
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Blissey used Protect.
Blissey protected itself!
Phione used Waterfall.
Blissey protected itself!
The wish came true!
Blissey restored 42% of its health.

The word "stall" popped into my head and I didn't want to risk Phione getting crippled or poisoned, so, I decide to U-Turn out the next turn.

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PK_Thunder switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Phione used U-turn.
It's not very effective...
Gengar lost 8% of its health.
SuperAzelf switched in Smeargle (lvl 100 Smeargle ?).
Pointed stones dug into Smeargle.
Smeargle lost 12% of its health.
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Damn, my opponent was thinking the same exact thing. I switched in Smeargle to try and get an Agility in.

Gengar used Focus Blast.
Gengar's attack missed!
Smeargle used Spore.
Gengar fell asleep!
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Hmph, that 70% acc was bound to haunt Gengar, I was hoping that it'd miss, so, I Spored it.

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PK_Thunder switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
Smeargle used Agility.
Smeargle's speed was sharply raised.
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What do you think'll come, next ? Hopefully, it doesn't have Mach Punch.
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Smeargle used Baton Pass.
SuperAzelf switched in Phione (lvl 100 Phione).
Pointed stones dug into Phione.
Phione lost 12% of its health.
Infernape used Close Combat.
Phione lost 58% of its health.
Infernape's defence was lowered.
Infernape's special defence was lowered.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
Phione's leftovers restored its health a little!
Phione restored 6% of its health.
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I didn't think it could take an Infernape's LO Close Combat like that. It just shows that Phione isn't Manaphy's adopted son.

Phione used Waterfall.
It's super effective!
Infernape lost 90% of its health.
PK_Thunder's Infernape fainted.
Phione's leftovers restored its health a little!
Phione restored 6% of its health.
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A Relaxed Phione with no speed EVs outsped and took out a 90% HP -1 defense Infenape. That made me happy.
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4-4
PK_Thunder switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Phione used U-turn.
Bronzong lost 15% of its health.
SuperAzelf switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Pointed stones dug into Jirachi.
Jirachi lost 6% of its health.
Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
It's not very effective...
Jirachi lost 13% of its health.
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
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That Speed boost wasn't really gonna help Phione kill off Bronzong, so, instead of trying to stall, I decided to switch to Jirachi.

Jirachi is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 34% of its health.
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
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Jirachi is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 7% of its health.
SuperAzelf's Jirachi fainted.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 3% of its health.
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Unfortunately, I forgot Jirachi was asleep.

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3-4
SuperAzelf switched in Smeargle (lvl 100 Smeargle ?).
Pointed stones dug into Smeargle.
Smeargle lost 12% of its health.
Smeargle used Endeavor.
Bronzong lost 30% of its health.
Bronzong used Earthquake.
Smeargle lost 51% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
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Smeargle used Endeavor.
Bronzong lost 54% of its health.
Bronzong used Earthquake.
Smeargle lost 24% of its health.
SuperAzelf's Smeargle fainted.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
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Spore was useless, so, I decided to bring its HP down low enough for Phione to kill it off.

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2-4
SuperAzelf switched in Phione (lvl 100 Phione).
Pointed stones dug into Phione.
Phione lost 12% of its health.
Phione used Waterfall.
Bronzong lost 24% of its health.
Bronzong flinched!
Phione's leftovers restored its health a little!
Phione restored 6% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
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It wouldn't have done shit in the first place, the next move would've been the same... I think.

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PK_Thunder switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Phione used Waterfall.
Blissey lost 30% of its health.
Phione's leftovers restored its health a little!
Phione restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Repeating my past actions, I try to avoid the potential stall war coming up.

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Phione used U-turn.
Blissey lost 15% of its health.
SuperAzelf switched in Snorlax (lvl 100 Snorlax ?).
Pointed stones dug into Snorlax.
Snorlax lost 12% of its health.
Blissey used Toxic.
Snorlax was badly poisoned!
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax is hurt by poison!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
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That bloated bastard is my savior, today. I U-Turned, knowing that Phione was gonna get poisoned or crippled the next turn.

Blissey used Flamethrower.
Snorlax lost 5% of its health.
Snorlax used Body Slam.
Blissey lost 31% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax is hurt by poison!
Snorlax lost 12% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Okay, my plan is almost fully placed into action, time to kill that pink egg.

Snorlax used Body Slam.
Blissey lost 36% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It can't move!
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax is hurt by poison!
Snorlax lost 19% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Ooooo-hoo-hooooooooo. The paralysis is finally working for me.
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PK_Thunder switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Snorlax used Body Slam.
It doesn't affect Gengar...
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax is hurt by poison!
Snorlax lost 25% of its health.
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Damn... it. So close and my opponent wants to save Blissey.

Gengar is fast asleep!
Snorlax used Fire Punch.
Gengar lost 38% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax is hurt by poison!
Snorlax lost 31% of its health.
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Gengar is fast asleep!
Snorlax used Rest.
Snorlax fell asleep!
Snorlax restored 80% of its health.
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I just remembered what Rest does and I decide to use it, good-byyyyyyye Poison, helloooooooo Focus Blast <_<.

Gengar is fast asleep!
Snorlax is fast asleep!
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=_= Don't ask, I forgot to use Sleep Talk.

Gengar is fast asleep!
Snorlax is fast asleep!
Snorlax used Sleep Talk.
Snorlax used Body Slam.
It doesn't affect Gengar...
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And when I use Sleep Talk, Body Slam pops up.

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Gengar woke up!
Gengar used Focus Blast.
It's super effective!
Snorlax lost 51% of its health.
Gengar lost 10% of its health.
Snorlax woke up!
Snorlax used Fire Punch.
Gengar lost 39% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Gengar used Focus Blast.
Gengar's attack missed!
Snorlax used Fire Punch.
Gengar lost 6% of its health.
PK_Thunder's Gengar fainted.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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It wouldn't've killed Snorlax anyway. Fire Punch was gonna kill it off and the battle would've had the same outcome.

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PK_Thunder switched in Hippowdon (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
Hippowdon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
Snorlax used Body Slam.
Hippowdon lost 17% of its health.
Hippowdon used Roar.
SuperAzelf switched in Phione (lvl 100 Phione).
Pointed stones dug into Phione.
Phione lost 12% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Phione is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Phione lost 6% of its health.
Phione's leftovers restored its health a little!
Phione restored 6% of its health.
Hippowdon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hippowdon restored 6% of its health.
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I tried to cripple it and my plan went sour

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Phione used Grass Knot.
It's super effective!
Hippowdon lost 58% of its health.
Hippowdon used Roar.
SuperAzelf switched in Snorlax (lvl 100 Snorlax ?).
Pointed stones dug into Snorlax.
Snorlax lost 12% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Snorlax is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
Hippowdon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hippowdon restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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As bulky as this fat bastard may be, a Grass Knot will still rip its heart out.

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Hippowdon used Slack Off.
Hippowdon restored 50% of its health.
Snorlax used Body Slam.
Hippowdon lost 16% of its health.
Hippowdon is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
The sandstorm rages.
Snorlax is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Hippowdon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hippowdon restored 6% of its health.
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Paralysis at last.

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Snorlax used Body Slam.
Hippowdon lost 16% of its health.
Hippowdon used Roar.
SuperAzelf switched in Phione (lvl 100 Phione).
Pointed stones dug into Phione.
Phione lost 12% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Phione is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Phione lost 6% of its health.
Phione's leftovers restored its health a little!
Phione restored 6% of its health.
Hippowdon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hippowdon restored 6% of its health.
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I was hoping the paralysis would take effect, sadly, it didn't. Although... Hippowdon takes over 50% damage from a Grass Knot, so, that'll do some good..

Phione used Grass Knot.
It's super effective!
Hippowdon lost 52% of its health.
Hippowdon used Roar.
SuperAzelf switched in Snorlax (lvl 100 Snorlax ?).
Pointed stones dug into Snorlax.
Snorlax lost 12% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Snorlax is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Hippowdon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hippowdon restored 6% of its health.
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Snorlax used Body Slam.
Hippowdon lost 16% of its health.
Hippowdon is paralysed! It can't move!
The sandstorm rages.
Snorlax is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
Hippowdon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hippowdon restored 6% of its health.
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Good, it's unable to Slack Off that Grass Knot, again. The next Body Slam should do the trick, so........

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PK_Thunder switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Snorlax used Body Slam.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 11% of its health.
PK_Thunder's Bronzong fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Snorlax is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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All of that switching has come back to haunt PK_Thunder. Everyone is gonna die to Snorlax, their fate is inevitable. >:D

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... you know that? Blissey should be included in this as well:
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2-2
PK_Thunder switched in Hippowdon (lvl 100 Hippowdon ?).
Hippowdon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Snorlax used Body Slam.
Hippowdon lost 13% of its health.
PK_Thunder's Hippowdon fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Snorlax is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Xode has entered the room.

2-1
PK_Thunder switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Blissey used Protect.
Blissey protected itself!
Snorlax used Body Slam.
Blissey protected itself!
The sandstorm rages.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Snorlax is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Snorlax lost 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Snorlax's leftovers restored its health a little!
Snorlax restored 6% of its health.
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Blissey used Toxic.
Snorlax was badly poisoned!
Snorlax used Body Slam.
Blissey lost 13% of its health.
PK_Thunder's Blissey fainted.
SuperAzelf wins!

2-0

I won. All praise the fat boy (Snorlax).
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Alright, let's talk about the good and the bad occourances that have happened, here:

Good:
  • Snorlax for giving paralysis support.
  • Focus Blast missing Smeargle.
  • Snorlax for "sweeping".
Bad:
  • Dragonite KOing 2 of my pokemon.
  • Dragonite attacking Jirachi through confusion
  • Sleep Talk choosing Body Slam on Gengar.
My overall rating of this warstory is mediocore-ish. Hax has been an important factor in me winning and good battles don't normally rely on luck.

I'll be testing out my team with a few changes on Shoddy, later. This is my second warstory, here.
 
Commentary was really lacking, especially given the uncut, uncolored log. There were a couple good lines, but--and most people make this same mistake--a warstory really needs a lot more than describing what happened on x turn.
 
There is little to no commentary in the story, let alone commentary of merit. Therefore, the representative "log" is somewhat boring and difficult to maintain interest. The use of Phione in an OU battle does not necessitate Warstory-age.
 
Like you said, it wasn't a great battle. Your prediction was wonky, especially when Snorlax was facing off against Gengar. And you were really expecting a super-effective, STAB'd Outrage running off 134 Attack to 2KO Salamence? Pretty sad to watch. x(

I thought I'd be reading some clever use of Phione, but my hopes were crushed. Snorlax really just stole the show.

Regarding your Deoxys, exactly what EV spread were you using? You obviously weren't using max speed if Dragonite outsped it with one DD. I find that a Choice Specs Modest D-E usually works best as a lead, but that's just me.
 
^I myself am also wondering how did Dragonite outspeed Deoxys after a DD.

I loved the use of Snorlax, but that's it. Warstory was just average.
 
you said yourself that it wasn't that good
you should put that at the beginning next time, so i don't have to read it
pick a better battle next time, you don't have to warstory every match
you really had no opportunity for commentary as there was no prediction, or general pokemon knowledge
you won with alot of hax and "i hoped it would miss"
you made alot of mistakes, some of which you noticed

please take the crap out of the log:
dd raises speed and attack (thanks, i forgot what it did)
sand storm
leftovers

wait until you have a good, diferent battle and can present it decently
 
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