Please rate and comment on my current OU Team

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please rate and comment on my current team.

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Salamence @ Life Orb
200 SpA / 252 Spe / 56 Atk
Ability: Intimidate
Naughty (+Atk -SpD)

Fire Blast, Draco Meteor, Earthquake, Outrage

my starter mixmence, takes out stealth rocker and walls at begging, then switch out for mid game. im not sure if i want to use heatran as starter though. it counters most starters pretty well except salamence.

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Cressalia @ Leftovers
252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpA
Ability: Levitate
Bold (+Def -Atk)

Calm Mind, Thunder Wave, Ice Beam, Moonlight

physically defensive cress. im only afraid of scizor but heatran can handle it.
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Blissey @ Leftovers
252 Def / 252 SpD / 4 HP
Ability: Natural Cure
Calm (+SpD -Atk)

Stealth Rock, Toxic, Seismic Toss, Softboiled

well, i can always find a time to set Steath Rock when every opponent has a

special sweeper. Should i teach it Counter?

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Scizor @ Life Orb
252 Atk / 160 Spe / 96 HP
Ability: Technician
Adamant (+Atk -SpA)

Sword Dance, Bullet Punch, Super Power, X-Scissor

after one sword dance, i can ko and sweeper. super power stops steel types. the

pokemon i have to switch out against is heatran, skarmory (whirlwind). the EVs are set this way so scizor has 200 speed and 300 health.


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Heatran @ Choice Specs
252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 HP
Ability: Flash Flare
Modest (+SpA -Atk)

Overheat, Dragon Pulse, Earth Power, Fire Blast

overheat + choice will pretty much kill everything. fire blast deal with stalling pokemons


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Togekiss @ Choice Scarf
252 SpA / 200 Spe / 56 HP
Ability: Serene Grace
Modest (+SpA -Atk)

Air Slash, Trick, Aura Sphere, Roost

if i no longer need the speed, i use trick. this usually flinches sweepers in early games and kill them off


thats pretty much my team. well i have a few other pokemon to work around with,

so please suggest which six works the best



ADDITIONAL OPTIONS:
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Kingdra @ Life Orb
252 Atk / 200 Spe / 56 Hp
Ability: Swift Swim
Adamant (+Atk -SpA)

Dragon Dance, Waterfall, Outrage, Yawn

i want to do more damage so life orb over lum berry. please make a suggestion

here. im not sure. yawn or draco meteor (then has to be another nature). im not

sure here either. yawn forces stalling pokemon to switch though.

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Suicune @ Leftovers
252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpA
Ability: Pressure
Bold (+Def -Atk)

Calm Mind, Surf, Ice Beam, Rest

same idea with cress. but i dont have Thunder Wave. and skarm and cune both weak

to electric. Rest is good when theres sandstorm. suicune is not afraid of toxic

because of rest. i dont know. u guy help me out :)
 
@Mini: please be patient as I requires plenty of time to analyze your team before replying. Have you tried it out on Shoddybattle or wifi yet?
 
yeah i won a few battles now, almost but haven't lost yet,

thanks for the first reply Expert Evan+, greatly appreciated
 
hold onto to ur horses mini

if you want kingdra at full power have kingdra/zapdos/suicune rain dance to get double speed as well as extra boost for waterfall

other than that good team A-
 
good idea, shadow monkey, i will take that into consideration.

mrIndigo, what would be a good SR lead then? skarmory is reliable, whirlwind if opponent sword dances,
 
i edit my team a bit, took out hippowdon and replaceit with salamence. 2 walls and a tank is one too many. cressalia does fine as a physical wall.
 
RMT Rules said:
2. Do not post incomplete teams. If you are smart enough to pick five Pokemon, you can easily pick another one. If you are smart enough to pick nine, you can easily cut that down to six. Make sure to include natures, EV spreads and items. If you are unsure of your selections, make a note of this or simply add a question mark after them so team raters can help you focus on perceived problems first.
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RMT Rules said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
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RMT Rules said:
7. Bumping. If your team is interesting enough to comment on, people will do it for you. If no one at all comments on your RMT for around 24 hours, feel free to bump it. After you have bumped your thread once, or after it has been inactive for two weeks, do not bump it again unless you are making significant changes. "Stealth Bumps" will not be tolerated. Moderators and Administrators can see your deleted posts, so do yourself and us a favor and do not even attempt this.
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You have 8 Pokemon on your team, your descriptions are terrible, and you have bumped your thread a total of five times. Perhaps if you put some more effort into your team and its presentation, people might put some more effort into the rates they give you? Feel free to try again once you've read the rules.
 
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