PLEASE RATE MY TEAM!

[bxchink89]

Please rate my team...

NINJASK@Focus Sash 176 hp/252 atk/80 speed Jolly

-Substitute
-Swords Dance
-Baton Pass
-Aerial Ace

This is my starter and he is the Baton Passer of the team. My plan to put up a Swords Dance. Focus Sash kicks in and then I pass to either my Infernape or Gyrados for a +2 atk and +1 spd. Thats pretty good.

Gyrados@ Left Overs 252 Atk/ 4 def/ 252 Speed Adamant
-D-Dance
-Waterfall
-E-quake
-Ice Fang

PURE POWER AND SPEED after 3-4 Dragon Dances. This is my main late game sweeper since i can D-dance and with its excellent atk and speed after D-Dancing. Also it has excellent type coverage moveset.

Infernape@ Life Orb 64 atk/ 192 speed/ 252 SpA Jolly
-Nasty Plot
-Fire Blast
-Close Combat
-HP Ice

My early game sweeper since he has a great moveset with great type coverage. This is the Smogon Set, i was thinking maybe to turn it into a Sub-Liechi set...but it might not be a good idea.

Dragonite@ Yache Berry 252 atk/ 252 Speed/ 4 Sp. A Adamant
-Dragon Dance
-Outrage
-E-Quake
-Fire Punch

Although this pkmn is largely outclassed by Salamence, I don't want such a main stream pkmn that everyone has. Plus, it would make a great pokemon for ninjask to pass to. This would totally screw up the moment for the opponent early in the game.

Forretress @ Shed Shell 252 Hp/ 112 atk/ 144 def Relaxed
-Spikes
-Gyro Ball
-Rapid Spin
-Explosion
The classic rapid spinner with its great type coverage. It only has one weakness and I'm only afraid of Infernape. But i can cover that with my Gyrados. It can explode which I enjoy when it done its duty of setting up spikes and spinnin'.

Gengar @ Petaya Berry 4 hp/ 252 Speed/ 252 spA
-Substitute
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast
-HP fire

My Sub-Petaya Gengar which is rather uncommon and not the exact same set as Marriland. I like it because if I can abuse Shadow Ball after Petaya's effect, I can easily ensue the best sweep...I hope. this is a gamble rather.


PLEASE RATE! PLEASE RATE! RATE! RATE!

 

[Despotar]

Spikes doesn't help non-stall team's that much, I would switch Forretress to a
Life Orb Celebi.
(http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/celebi)

 

[haunter]

Welcome to Smogon. Your descriptions are definitely too short and not up to the standards required in this forum. If you expand them, then send me a PM and I'll unlock your thread. Locking this under rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.