plz rate my wacky shoddy team

[hyperactiveraichu]

1st pokemon:Fear
-QA, -SuckerPunch, - toxic(for those that ignore ratata due to lefties and then uses stat boosting moves),-endeavor
@ Focus sash

2nd pokemon: electrode
-twave, explosion ( for blisseys), - charge beam(stat boosting skill), -HP ice
@ wise glasses
ev spread: max speed, 140atk, rest on sp atk ; hasty nature
pupose:for charge beaming weakened mon, the stat boost helps, revkill

3rd pokemon: aerodactyl
-rock slide( accuracy), - EQ, -Crunch, -ice fang
muscle band
@ev spread: max atk and speed, rest on hp; jolly nature
purpose: sweeping weakened mon, revkill

4th pokemon: starmie
-BoltBeam,-surf,-psychic
@CSpecs
evs: max speed and sp atk, timid nature
purpose: another revenge killer sweeper

5th pokemon: Donphan
-R-spin,-EQ,-SR, -Ice shard
@lefties
evs: max def and atk, rest on hp; impish nature
purpose: Rs support, SR setter, and dragon killer, also staller

6th pokemon: shedinja
-SD, -ShadowSneak,-ShadowClaw, -X-scissor
@ focus sash
evs: max atk and speed; adamant
purpose: late game sweeper after donphan

 

[Ryfle]

Try reading the rules next time.

6. Formatting. Make your post readable. If the format is messy and illegible you won't be likely to receive help and may have your thread locked. Adding pictures to your post can make it more visually appealing too, but pay attention to point 11. Here's a guideline on how to post each Pokemon.

Pokemon @ Item
Ability:
EVs:
Nature:
- move
- move
- move
- move

This isn't set in stone, but the above example or a slight variation thereof makes for a much "cleaner" post.

 

[Lee]

Take a look at Rule No.3 as well while you're at it.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.