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[Helado]

Hey Guys (:
I made a new team a few hours ago. It works but i think there are a few weaks and things i can do better, so please rate ^.^ I cant speak english very well so forgive me <.<

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First, Darkrai and Skymin and Dizzle+Swift Swimm + Blaziken are allowed, thanks.
Because of this nearly everyone will use a Rain Dance Team so i have to build a Anti Rain Dance Team. Problem of Anti Teams are - if your opponent dont use the team that you ecpected, u are fucked, ok. I decided to make a sun team.

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Team Building Process:​

Ok, Ninetals has Drought so i put in in my team :o Its not my lead cause i need it later in the game.

Heres my lead, Machamp. He´s one of the best leads in 4. and 5. Gen and kicks Politoed to hell.

Darkrai is allowed so i will use it. He´s a exellent special attacker with a very nice sleep move and ability.

Tangela with Evolution Stone is a very nice wall in the sun because i can switch it in WoW etc.

Charizard is thanks to his ability one of the best special sweeper in the sun, but it takes 50% from SR.

Blaziken with his DW ability is allowed, too. Excellent coverage, speed and attack. I needed a physical sweeper so i put Blaziken in my team.

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Closer Look​

@Lum Berry
No Guard
Adamant 4, 252, 0, 0, 252, 0
~ Dynamicpunch
~ Bullet Punch
~ Fire Punch
~ Payback

Machamp, one of the best leads ever. Lum Berry is for Darkrai (Sleep) and Politoed (Burn) or other Machamps Leads. I gave him 252 Sp.Def EVs cause the most played leads are Politoed, Darkrai, Ninetals or Abomasnow.
Dynamicpunch is standart, Bullet Punch & Payback too. Sun boosts Fire Punch 50%.

@Leftovers
Drought
Timid 0, 0, 0, 216, 76, 216
~ Will-o-wisp
~ Heatwave
~ Power Swap
~ Solar Beam

Brings the sun. Nothing more to say.

@Leftovers
Bad Dreams
Timid 4, 0, 0, 252, 0
~ Dark Void
~ Sub
~ Dark Pulse
~ Focus Blast

Epic special sweeper <3

@Evolution Stone
Lead Guard
Bold 252, 0, 252, 0, 0, 4
~ Leech Seed
~ Knock Off
~ Solar Beam
~ Toxic

Nice wall in the sun cause of Leaf Guard.

@Choice Specs
Solar Power
Modest 4, 0, 0, 252, 252, 0
~ Fire Blast
~ Solar Beam
~ Focus Blast
~ Dragon Tail

Dragon Tail is filler.

@Leftovers
Speed Boost
Adamant 4, 252, 0, 252, 0, 0
~ Protect
~ Flare Blitz
~ High Jump Kick
~ Stone Edge

Standart Blaziken.

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I know this team is not the best, so please rate, rate, rate.​

 

[haunter]

You need to expand your descriptions heavily. Also moving this thread to "other teams".

 

[GlassAbsol]

Charizard. One of your main Sweepers I suppose is, as you say, 4x weak to Stealth Rock So you need a rapid Spinner if this team is going to work. Because after 50% because of Solar power you have Life disappearing very quickly. Charizard has base 100 speed so there's going to be a large amount of pokemon outspeeding him because 100 just isn't what it was at Gen 4. You need to describe your team. It says in the RMT MUST READ thread that you need more than a sentence. If you want rates you need to give people stuff to rate. Don't put the EVs as 4/0/0/252/0/252 put them as HP 4/Sp.A 252/Spe 252 Just makes it easier. Also It's not too clear how you've ordered the EVs. I presume that it's Hp/Atk/Def/Spe/Sp.A/Sp.D but it's not clear and usually it's Hp/Atk/Def/Sp.A/Sp.D/Spe so that needs to be changed or we need to be made aware of it. As it Stands You need to think more of Synergy because you've got 3 Fire pokemon in here and the only ground resists you've got are Tangela. Charizard doesn't count really because Earthquake and Stone edge virtually always go together so Charizard's going to die. I can see a landorus cutting clean through your team, infact any Sandstorm Team, or any team with Stealth Rocks will fuck you over. I'm not sure as to what to add to fix this team but I suggest that you think yourself as to whether to change pokemon or start again and think more about what pokemon synergise against others. Also playing a team for a few hours isn't really enough time I find to work out problems and come across every pokemon that could destroy it. It seems from your team building process that you just picked pokemon that you liked. Good luck making a new team or fixing this one.