Rate mai f1rst team! D: [Halp needed]

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Well this is my first team. Here goes... I need help and stuff.

At a glance:
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Latias [Couldn't find a sprite], Blissey [Couldn't find a sprite]
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Ninjask@Leftovers
176 HP, 252 attack, 80 speed.
Jolly
Speed Boost
-Baton Pass
-Substitute
-Swords Dance
-X-Scissor
The point of this guy is mainly to sub, get a few SDs in, and baton pass to Scizor. If necessary he can use X-Scissor, which'll do a decent amount of damage with maxed attack EVs. Not much more to say.

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Scizor@Life Orb
32 HP, 252 attack, 224 speed.
Adamant
Technician
-Bullet Punch
-Brick Break
-Roost
-X-Scissor
If everything goes well, he should have a few SDs under his belt from Ninjask, in which case he can sweep. If not, he can still sweep. Just not as well.

Latias@Leftovers
148 HP, 252 speed, 108 SpA.
Timid
Levitate
-Calm Mind
-Dragon Pulse
-Hidden Power [Fire]
-Recover
Latias is basically back up in case something happens to Scizor. With Latias's already high SpD, after a few Calm Minds special attacks won't be much of a threat. Recover and the HP EVs allow it to stay alive for a while.

Blissey@Leftovers
252 defense, 80 SpA, 176 SpD.
Calm
Natural Cure
-Protect
-Toxic
-Wish
-Ice Beam
Standard Blissey, really. EV spread gives me good defenses while I stall with Protect and Wish, and whittle away at their HP with Toxic and Ice Beam.

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Skarmory@Leftovers
252 HP, 64 attack, 176 defense.
Impish
Keen Eye
-Brave Bird
-Roost
-Spikes
-Whirlwind
Skarmory is able to take a few hits with maxed HP, high defense and Roost, can set up Spikes of I have the time, can Whirlwind to get rid of things, and, if I've already set up Spikes, damage them. Brave Bird in case I need to attack.

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Starmie@Leftovers
136 HP, 156 defense, 216 speed.
Timid
Natural Cure
-Rapid Spin
-Recover
-Surf
-Thunderbolt
The EV spread and recover allows it to stall, while still outspeeding quite a few threats. Surf to take down fire-types, as my team seems to be a little weak against them. Thunderbolt for Gyarados and other water types.

Well that's it. Rate and help please. ;3;
 
Hi there!

It's great that you've made an attempt to built up a great team but I don't see enough effort in describing how all the different pokemon make a team. You should check out the stickys for further reference.

Just to start off:

The point of this guy is mainly to sub, get a few SDs in, and baton pass to Scizor.
I see two immediate problems with this plan. The first is that against experienced players you can hardly ever get "a few" SDs up and then pass it without getting phazed. So I would consider getting another lead.
The second threat is a lead with a fire move, which prevents your pass to Scizor, since both Ninjask and Scizor are weak to fire.

The rest I'm not exactly sure how it works in practice but on paper it looks like mixed Infernape would give you some trouble, especially after Latias is down.

Anyway I understand that this was you first RMT and good luck in the future!
 
Rule 3 said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Feel free to remake the thread if you fix your descriptions.
 
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