Rate my Baton Pass Chain Team

[Juliano Bernardo]

Lead Baton Passer (Spe)

Gliscor

Jolly Nature
Item: Chesto Berry
Ability: Hyper Cutter
Ev`s: 4 Hp / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

Taunt
Substitute
Rock Polish
Baton Pass

I put Chesto Berry to beat Sleep inducers (Like Crobat) then it use Subs and Rock Polish. But I afraid if ice moves X_X maybe Ev`s in Hp and Def/SpD? I afraid about Taunt it too, so...han....how about a Swellow B.pass? Swellow have Burn Orb to beat Sleep inducers and after a protect the oponent maybe witch in @_@

Scizor (SD passer)

Impish Nature
Item: Occa Berry
Ev`s: 184 HP / 176 Def / 148 Spe

Swords Dance
Baton Pass
Iron Head
Roost / Iron Defense

A commom SD passer.Iron Head to beat Garchomp xP

Smeargle

Jolly Nature
Item: Shed Skin
Ability: Own Time
Ev`s: 252 Hp / 252 Spd

Spore
ingrain
Substitute
Ingrain

Smeargle is mandatory becouse have Ingrain to pass, thats all

Mr.Mime (SpA and SpD passer)

Calm Nature
Item: leftovers
Ability: Soundproof
Ev`s: 252 HP / 40 SpD / 216 Spe

Calm Mind
Baton Pass
Thunderbolt
ernegy Ball

Commom too ._. but I dont know about the Ev`s and nature becouse after a Rock polish it cant outspeed a Scarfgengar!D=

Vaporeon

Calm nature
Item: Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 192 HP / 252 Def / 64 SDef

Substitute
Baton Pass
Ice Beam
Wish or Aqua Ring

Its a health supporter for my team hmn

Lucario:

Adamant nature
Life Orb
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 Atk / 196 Spe / 60 SpA

- Close Combat
- Crunch
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Bullet Punch

 

[Caelum]

Just so you know, incomplete teams aren't allowed to be posted (you need to post all 6 members) so you might want to edit that before a mod comes a long. Add some more descriptions too. Make sure you read the rules otherwise a mod (well, basically Taylor) will come alone and close your thread: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=19179.

Anyway, that said, I mine as well give you a little help. For your last passer I'd run Vaporeon and for your receiver make it special lucario, special lucario can OHKO every Pokemon in OU iirc unlike his physical counter part (why I think Sword Dance on Scizor should be dropped) because Weezing and Gliscor will then beat you since they can survive a +6 physical Lucario (not special though!).

Gliscor: Why are you running attack EVs when you have no attack moves? I'd run 252 HP / 96 Spe to outrun Jolly Choice Scarf Garchomp after a Rock Polish. Split the defenses after that. Paralysis from Body Slam or something is fun for Gliscor either. I recommend Lum Berry > Chesto.

Scizor: Don't bother with the Occa Berry, Leftovers. If you use Vaporeon just bring Vappy in on an obvious fire move. Scizor, I've found, doesn't need a lot of speed initially. Just put the EVs in special defense. maximize HP first also! Also, get rid of Sword Dance. It's a lot to set up Calm Mind and Sword Dance on BP teams, it's much easier just to go for Calm Mind and pass to a powerful special sweeper (like Lucario). Replace Sword Dance with Substitute or Roost and make your last slot Iron Defense.

Smeargle: I prefer the spread, Jolly, 96 HP / 120 Def / 252 Spe / 40 SDef. Maximum speed and then the defenses were optimized from there. Consider Spider Web > Substitute because if you trap a wall like Bronzong or Blissey you basically won.

Mr. Mime: I'd run Encore > Thunderbolt. Psychic > Grass Knot for STAB. Encore is useful to trap something on a Stat up to give you free CMs. I prefer the EVs 252 HP / 120 Def / 56 Spe / 80 SpD. Enough speed to outrun scarfed base 90s after a Rock Polish.

For Vaporeon try out this:

Vaporeon @ Leftovers
Ability: Water Absorb
EVs: 192 HP / 252 Def / 64 SDef
Calm nature (+SDef, - Atk)
-Substitute
-Baton Pass
-Surf or Ice Beam
-Wish or Aqua Ring

for your receiver try out special lucario
Lucario @ Wise Glasses
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 112 HP / 252 SpA / 144 Spe
Modest nature (SpA, - Atk)
-Aura Sphere
-Shadow Ball or Dark Pulse
-Hidden Power Electric (for Tentacruel who can Haze)
-Vacuum Wave or Filler Move.

Those EVs let Lucario outrun every Pokemon in the game with an Agility after 6 speed boosts, special attack was then maximized, and then the rest was put in HP.

Check here for some helpful tips: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=40872

 

[Juliano Bernardo]

Thanks for saying @_@ now is edited xD

Gliscor: What I can do about Taunters? like BulkyGya and Crobat and......252 Hp / 252 Spe?

Smeargle: Spider Web > Mean Look?

Scizor: 252 Hp / 110 Def / 148 Spe?

Vapo: Wish > Aqua Ring? or vice versa?

Thanks ^^

 

[Lee]

Sorry Juliano, but we need a better description than "Its a health supporter for my team." And you've completely neglected to write anything for Lucario.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.