Request some help for building this team

Status
Not open for further replies.
I was a bit wary of posting an unfinished team, but I looked for an area that I could request help in finishign it off, but found nothing. Sorry if this doesn't belong here.

I have been trying to find a set of decent team mates for this team idea I have but I keep coming up with very little in the way of feasible choices. Most times I have a lot of weaknesses or they just don’t seem to work well together. I am planning on using this as a Wi-fi team.

My idea is this:

Umbreon @ Leftovers Ev: 200 HP/ 110 Def/ 200 SpDef
Ability: Synchronize
Careful
- Toxic
- Curse
- Baton Pass
- Faint Attack

Jirachi @ White Herb – Evs: 4 HP/ 252 Attk/ 252 Spd
Ability: Serene Grace
Adamant
- Thunderpunch
- Ice Punch
- Fire Punch
- Cosmic Power

The strategy was initially to set up the Curse with Umbreon (probably at least two curses, 3 if possible and 4 max) and then Toxic. Using Leftovers, my very high Special Defense stat and the raised Defense to take the hits on the set up I would then Baton Pass out. (Surprisingly, Umbreon managed to do quite well even against a few fighting type hits. I was shocked!)

On the BP, Jirachi would receive the Curse boosts and use the White Herb to reset the speed dropped side-effect. After that, a simple Cosmic power would further boost his special defense and defense or he could proceed to sweep. (I have found that an ice punch after 3 calm minds have been destroying Garchomp, Slamence and Rayquaza in 1 hit. [/FONT]

Though at times, Umbreon still falls to a critical hit or I mispredict the move of my opponent and lose the plan altogether thereby making Jirachi not as effective on the team with the White Herb. After that, the team struggles to keep afloat. I was hoping if this idea was okay to get some guidance on which teammates to support them with. Any suggestions?
 
We do have a rule against this, I'm afraid.

2. Do not post incomplete teams.

Still, at least you have a strategy to build around (although I would question how effective it is as Jirachi is certainly no physical sweeper) so just work accordingly. Since Jirachi will be stalling from behind those boosts, Toxic Spikes seem essential. Umbreon and Jirachi are also slaughtered by Infernape so throw in Tentacruel etc.

Just work in another four Pokemon that compliment your idea and post it. If it's not up to standard, then the team raters will help you fix it.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top