~ RMT ~ - Competitive Battling Team -

Areyoucool

Hello this is my main OU team for competitive battling and I've had great success with it but I need some feedback to do some editing. Keep in mind that I am open to any suggestions and I will edit my team if I think it will MOST definetely improve my team.


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Azelf
Nature: Rash
Item: Choice Scarf
Ev's: 88 Atk / 252 SpA / 168 Spe
Moveset:
~ Explosion
~ Psychic
~ Flamethrower
~ Grass Knot

This is my main lead, I have been toggling u-turn for awhile but it has been able to outspeed plenty of its opposing starters and therefore a huge threat.

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Celebi
Nature: Timid
Item: Leftovers
Ev's: 252 HP / 80 SpA / 176 Spe
Moveset:
~ Recover
~ Leech Seed
~ Grass Knot
~ Thunder Wave

This is my main Gyarados switchin and has sweeped plenty of teams just by way of stalling. I must say that this is a really annoying set to get past.

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Lucario
Nature: Adamant
Item: Life Orb
Ev's: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Moveset:
~ Close Combat
~ Extremespeed
~ Swords Dance
~ Bullet Punch

As I'm sure you all know, Lucario has taken Competitive battling to a whole new level. He has sweeped teams for me in the blink of an eye. I really am not gonna even think about switching bullet punch for crunch since bullet punch as really helped me for the ohko on Gengar after using a SD.

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Snorlax
Nature: Careful
Item: Leftovers
Ev's: 168 HP / 120 Def / 220 SpD
Moveset:
~ Curse
~ Body Slam
~ Selfdestruct
~ Crunch

This is my BEAST! I have been tossing around plenty of different types of sets for this guy, and frankily I need some input. I have seen sub snorlaxes rest/talk ones. I just really would like to know which one would go best with my team.


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Gyarados
Nature: Adamant
Item: Leftovers
Ev's: 212 HP / 16 Atk / 180 Def / 100 Spe
Moveset:
~ Dragon Dance
~ Stone Edge
~ Waterfall
~ Taunt

This is another one of my late game sweepers, I have been struggling on whether or not to replace stone edge with ice fang or not. Through all the battles I have done always in the back of my head I'm always wishing I had ice fang on this guy. Since I already have a gyarados switchin in I'm really thinking of replacing it.

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Slowbro
Nature: Bold
Ev's: 212 HP / 252 Def / 44 SpA
Moveset:
~ Slack Off
~ Surf
~ Ice Beam
~ Hidden Power Electric (70)

Again a gyarados switchin or a garchomp killer, I really like this moveset so that is that. It is a killer on the offense and just as a killer on the defense.


Final Statements:

I am open to any advice and I will even consider replacing a pokemon if you give substancial reasoning. Thanks in advance.
 
Areyoucool said:
Hello this is my main OU team for competitive battling and I've had great success with it but I need some feedback to do some editing. Keep in mind that I am open to any suggestions and I will edit my team if I think it will MOST definetely improve my team.
I'm assuming this is for shoddy.

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Azelf
Nature: Rash
Item: Choice Scarf
Ev's: 88 Atk / 252 SpA / 168 Spe
Moveset:
~ Explosion
~ Psychic
~ Flamethrower
~ Grass Knot

This is my main lead, I have been toggling u-turn for awhile but it has been able to outspeed plenty of its opposing starters and therefore a huge threat.
Good. Is there a real reason you've got 88 attack EV's? Run a calc and see if a rash, 31 iv's, 0 Ev's and see how much this does to 252/252 hp/defence Bold blissey.
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Celebi
Nature: Timid
Item: Leftovers
Ev's: 252 HP / 80 SpA / 176 Spe
Moveset:
~ Recover
~ Leech Seed
~ Grass Knot
~ Thunder Wave

This is my main Gyarados switchin and has sweeped plenty of teams just by way of stalling. I must say that this is a really annoying set to get past.
This thing just screams out "HERA COME AND MEGAHORN ME PLZ" Which is why I dont use it. However, Celebi is really bulky, and is really very good for Seeding. Sceptile is an alternative.
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Lucario
Nature: Adamant
Item: Life Orb
Ev's: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Moveset:
~ Close Combat
~ Extremespeed
~ Swords Dance
~ Bullet Punch

As I'm sure you all know, Lucario has taken Competitive battling to a whole new level. He has sweeped teams for me in the blink of an eye. I really am not gonna even think about switching bullet punch for crunch since bullet punch as really helped me for the ohko on Gengar after using a SD.
I'd put Lefties over LO, if only because if you get hit while Setting up, that 10% drain really sucks. It's personal preference though.

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Snorlax
Nature: Careful
Item: Leftovers
Ev's: 168 HP / 120 Def / 220 SpD
Moveset:
~ Curse
~ Body Slam
~ Selfdestruct
~ Earthquake

This is my BEAST! I have been tossing around plenty of different types of sets for this guy, and frankily I need some input. I have seen sub snorlaxes rest/talk ones. I just really would like to know which one would go best with my team.
Because you've already got somthing that can snap Gengar (Lucario) I'd put EQ over Crunch, unless you're really scared shitless of gengar. Try out Rest over Selfdestruct for a little while, because it seems such a shame to explode a Snorlax with 6 curses, even if it will kill anything not immune to it.


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Gyarados
Nature: Adamant
Item: Leftovers
Ev's: 212 HP / 16 Atk / 180 Def / 100 Spe
Moveset:
~ Dragon Dance
~ Stone Edge
~ Waterfall
~ Taunt

This is another one of my late game sweepers, I have been struggling on whether or not to replace stone edge with ice fang or not. Through all the battles I have done always in the back of my head I'm always wishing I had ice fang on this guy. Since I already have a gyarados switchin in I'm really thinking of replacing it.
If Stone edge is only there for other Gyarados's then Change it for the aforementioned Ice fang.

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Slowbro
Nature: Bold
Ev's: 212 HP / 252 Def / 44 SpA
Moveset:
~ Slack Off
~ Surf
~ Ice Beam
~ Hidden Power Electric (70)

Again a gyarados switchin or a garchomp killer, I really like this moveset so that is that. It is a killer on the offense and just as a killer on the defense.
Good.


Final Statements:

I am open to any advice and I will even consider replacing a pokemon if you give substancial reasoning. Thanks in advance.
You seem really very w,orried about Gyarados. Celebi is a perfect counter for in unless it has 6 DD's and ice fang, so don't worry. I think that your Gyarados is out of place on this team, Scarfgar would suit it better. This would also help with your outstanding Choice Hera weakness, 4/6 are OHKO's by CC, Megahorn or Stone Edge.
I realise you already have Scarfzelf, which is good, But i would surly put Scarfgar over Gyarados, and make it your lead. It shits people when they've taken out Gengar to see Azelf. Also, you could try Infernape > Azelf, but not as a lead.
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That is very interesting, I am going to really consider that. Thanks for that, any other comments. Anyone else agree on the garchomp?
 
change snorlax to a sleep talker. use a more defensive 240 hp/228 Def, 40 Spd spread on celebi so it doesn't get 2HKOd by offensive gyaras. I would replace slowbro with gliscor to solve your fighting weak.
 
ugh, Slowbro resists fighting too you guys ... <_<

Best Dynamicpunch Machamp counter in the game... also Gliscor can't beat Gyarados.
 
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