RMT - Little cup!

[MasterAzelf]

This is my team I have been using on in Shoddy battle to some limited success, I am wondering if you on Smogon can Rate my team so I know what is going wrong. This is my first attempt at Rmt, so it will not look too flashy.

The Lead

Teddiursa @ Toxic Orb
Quick Feet
Jolly ( + Spe - Spa )
36 HP / 196 Atk / 36 Def / 36 SpD / 196 Spe
Facade
Protect
Close Combat
Crunch

With this Teddiursa can take out all of the Fake-Out leads with the
Protect + Facade Combination. Close Combat for the Rock and Steel and Walls that switch in, Crunch for the Ghosts. Fighting types and Priority users can easily be taken out by Teddiursa's best friend Slowpoke.

Meowth @ Life Orb
Technician
Jolly ( + Spe - Spa )
236 Atk/76 Def/196 Spd
Fake Out
Hypnosis
U-Turn
Bite

Meowth is generally used as a scout, and a solid all round team member, however I do see he could be replaced by another pokemon in LC

Elekid @ Life Orb
Static
Jolly ( + Spe - Spa )
172 Atk/76 Spa/ 236 Spe
Cross Chop
Fire Punch
Ice Punch
Thunderbolt

Elekid is a very Good Mixed sweeper able deal deal with threats on both sides of the defence spectrum, I have thought about replacing Fire Punch with Quick attack, but then I may seem a bit weak to being walled by Bronzor.

Diglett @ Focus Sash
Arena Trap
Jolly ( + Spe - Spa )
240 Atk/ 236 Spe
30 Defence
Earthquake
Hidden Power Ice
Rock Slide
Sucker Punch

Diglett serves as a revenge killer, being able to take out many Frail Priority users, and quite a few slower sweepers. He makes sure that Slowpoke is safe to wall all he likes..

Drifloon @ Oran Berry
Aftermath
Bold ( + Def - Atk )
244 Def/ 244 Spd
Explosion
Hypnosis
Shadow Ball
Will-o-wisp

Drifloon serves as a mixed wall, and a good switch against Ground Fighting and Normal moves. Switch on a locked in Scarfed Machop and use Hypnosis / Will-o-wisp on the switch in. Shadow ball is when there is no one to status, or Drifloon is taunted. Explosion serves as a list ditch attempt to get some damage in when Drifloon would otherwise be killed.

Slowpoke @ Leftovers
Own Tempo
36 Hp/156 Atk/236 Def/36 Spd
Aqua Tail
Slack Off
Thunder Wave
Zen Headbutt

Physical tank Slowpoke will switch in against something it resists, then spread around Thunder Wave while attempting to rack up a KO. Slowpoke is key to stopping both priority attack users, and Fighting types.

Thank for looking at my Little Cup team, and all comments will be considered.
((Except Trolling))



In the end, all will be quiet..

 

[calze6]

Take out meowth or teddiursa as only one of them can be a lead. You could replace meowth with a croagunk as a priority sweeper. I'd give diglett a choice band/scarf as your lead can't really stop SR form happening and some teams do run SR. Drifblim needs unburden as it pairs well with a oran berry.

 

[NightShadow]

i recommend making meowth lead and teddiursa a standard physical sweeper. Also, what is HP Ice doing on something like diglett? Focus Sash won't be good on Diglett, SR is far too common for that. Replace ROck Sllide for Stone Edge, and possibly put Substitute to scout for Sucker Punch from Croagunk. As for drifloon, mixed walls are not good. I recommend making it a special wall, since it has Will O Wisp. You can't have a -Atk Nature for Drifloon if you have Explosion, and since you don't have any Atk EV's, explosion won't be doing much. You need to be reminded that Leftovers really sucks in Little Cup, most of the time only restoring 1 HP. Oran berry is better on slowpoke.

 

[MasterAzelf]

Thanks for the comments so far, I shall test your suggestions to see what works with the team.

 

[Bloo]

You need to improve on your descriptions. As of right now, your descriptions are lacking and hence, violating rule #3. Try to lengthen them more please. Have a look at some of the teams in the RMT archive to see what is expected. Aim for 5 well-formulated sentences for each of your Pokemon. Explain why you chose a Pokemon, what it does, how it contributes to the success of the team, etc. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes; if they are sufficient enough I will unlock your thread with the edited descriptions.