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[SET]
Shroodle @ Grassy Seed
Ability: Unburden
Level: 5
Tera Type: Flying / Ground
EVs: 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Gunk Shot / Double Edge
- Knock Off / Double Edge
- Acrobatics / Tera Blast
- Swords Dance


[SET COMMENTS]
Shroodle functions as a potent setup sweeper on hyper offense teams, using Grassy Terrain to outspeed the entire metagame with Unburden. Grassy Seed triggers Unburden while providing a much needed Defense boost which aids Shroodle in setting up. Swords Dance allows Shroodle to reach threatening levels of Attack which help it secure OHKOes on metagame staples like Mienfoo, Vullaby, Foongus and Toedscool .Gunk Shot threatens heavy damage on most foes at the risk of lower accuracy, while Knock Off removes Eviolite from walls like Mareanie. Alternatively, Double-Edge is an accurate STAB move that allows Shroodle to hit Mudbray and Mareanie for huge damage without burning its own Terastalization at the cost of recoil damage. Acrobatics pairs well with Grassy Seed, gaining a power boost after consuming Grassy Seed and allowing Shroodle to pressure key threats like Mienfoo and Foongus. Tera Flying provides an immunity to Ground-type attacks from Mudbray and Alolan Diglett, making it easier for Shroodle to set up and boosting Acrobatics for late-game cleaning. On the other hand, Tera Ground with Tera Blast lets Shroodle muscle past Steel- and Rock-types such as Tinkatink and Glimmet that resist its STAB moves.

Shroodle is best supported by teammates that help it activate Unburden and cover its defensive gaps. Grookey is mandatory, setting Grassy Terrain to activate Grassy Seed, weaken the power of Earthquake, offer valuable passive recovery, and act as a pivot. Shroodle appreciates Shellder’s ability to pressure bulky Ground-types such as Mudbray. In return, Shroodle threatens foes like Foongus, Mareanie, and Mienfoo that hinder Shellder’s sweep. Shroodle can also be paired with another Unburden sweeper in Drifloon that forms a Grassy Terrain core along with Grookey. Other offensive partners like Alolan Diglett can help handle foes that trouble Shroodle, such as Tinkatink and Glimmet, while also punishing defensive Terastalization attempts, such as Steel-type on Mienfoo that Shroodle can bait out.

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[SET]
Shroodle @ Grassy Seed
Ability: Unburden
Level: 5
Tera Type: Flying / Ground
EVs: 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Gunk Shot / Double Edge
- Knock Off / Double Edge
- Acrobatics / Tera Blast
- Swords Dance


[SET COMMENTS]
Shroodle functions as a potent setup sweeper on hyper offense teams, using Unburden to outspeed the entire metagame after consuming its Grassy Seed. Grassy Seed helps trigger triggers Unburden while providing a much needed Defense boost in the absence of Eviolite which aids Shroodle in setting up. Swords Dance allows Shroodle to reach threatening levels of Attack. Gunk Shot is its strongest STAB move, while Don't need to mention STAB unless it has some reasoning like with Double Edge Knock Off removes Eviolite from walls like Mareanie. Alternatively, Double-Edge provides stronger neutral damage at the cost of recoil. I'd say its an accurate STAB move that lets you hit Mudbray and mare for a ton without burning tera. Acrobatics pairs well with Grassy Seed, gaining a power boost once the item is consumed and allowing Shroodle to pressure key threats like Mienfoo and Foongus. Tera Ground with Tera Blast lets Shroodle muscle past Steel- and Rock-types such as Tinkatink and Glimmet that resist its STAB moves. On the other hand, Tera Flying provides an immunity to Ground-type attacks from Mudbray and Alolan Diglett, making it easier for Shroodle to set up and giving Acrobatics the extra boost needed for late-game cleaning. (Switch the flying and ground sentences around to match the set)

Shroodle is best supported by teammates that help it activate Unburden and cover its defensive gaps. Grookey is mandatory, setting Grassy Terrain to activate Grassy Seed, weakening the power of Earthquake, and offering valuable passive recovery. Shroodle appreciates Shellder’s ability to pressure bulky Ground-types such as Mudbray. In return, Shroodle threatens foes like Foongus, Mareanie, and Mienfoo that hinder Shellder’s sweep. Shroodle can also be paired with another Unburden sweeper in Drifloon that forms a Grassy Terrain core along with Grookey. Other offensive partners like Alolan Diglett can help handle foes that trouble Shroodle, such as Tinkatink and Glimmet, while also punishing defensive Terastalization attempts that Shroodle can bait out. can prob give a small example here even if its somewhat obvious like steel foo or something (I'm just nitpicking)

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SET]
Shroodle @ Grassy Seed
Ability: Unburden
Level: 5
Tera Type: Flying / Ground // Normal
EVs: 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Gunk Shot / Double Edge
- Knock Off / Double Edge
- Acrobatics / Tera Blast
- Swords Dance


[SET COMMENTS]
Shroodle functions as a potent setup sweeper on hyper offense teams, using Unburden to outspeed the entire metagame after consuming its Grassy Seed. Grassy Seed triggers Unburden while providing a much needed Defense boost in the absence of Eviolite which aids Shroodle in setting up. Swords Dance allows Shroodle to reach threatening levels of Attack. Gunk Shot is its strongest move which threatens heavy damage on most foes, while Knock Off removes Eviolite from walls like Mareanie. Alternatively, Double-Edge is an accurate STAB move that allows Shroodle to hit Mudbray and Mareanie for huge damage without burning its own Terastalization at the cost of recoil damage. Acrobatics pairs well with Grassy Seed, gaining a power boost once the item is consumed and allowing Shroodle to pressure key threats like Mienfoo and Foongus. Tera Flying provides an immunity to Ground-type attacks from Mudbray and Alolan Diglett, making it easier for Shroodle to set up and giving Acrobatics the extra boost needed for late-game cleaning.On the other hand, Tera Ground with Tera Blast lets Shroodle muscle past Steel- and Rock-types such as Tinkatink and Glimmet that resist its STAB moves.

Shroodle is best supported by teammates that help it activate Unburden and cover its defensive gaps. Grookey is mandatory, setting Grassy Terrain to activate Grassy Seed, weakening the power of Earthquake, and offering valuable passive recovery. Shroodle appreciates Shellder’s ability to pressure bulky Ground-types such as Mudbray. In return, Shroodle threatens foes like Foongus, Mareanie, and Mienfoo that hinder Shellder’s sweep. Shroodle can also be paired with another Unburden sweeper in like Drifloon that forms a Grassy Terrain core along with Grookey. Other offensive partners like Alolan Diglett can help handle foes that trouble Shroodle, such as Tinkatink and Glimmet, while also punishing defensive Terastalization attempts, such as Steel-type on Mienfoo that Shroodle can bait out.

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]
Shroodle @ Grassy Seed
Ability: Unburden
Level: 5
Tera Type: Flying / Ground
EVs: 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Gunk Shot / Double Edge
- Knock Off / Double Edge
- Acrobatics / Tera Blast
- Swords Dance


[SET COMMENTS]
Shroodle functions as a potent setup sweeper on hyper offense teams, using Unburden to outspeed the entire metagame after consuming its Grassy Seed back to back grassy seed mentions seems a little bad here—could you rephrase? Maybe mention grassy terrain instead first?. Grassy Seed triggers Unburden while providing a much needed Defense boost in the absence of Eviolite maybe remove evio mention but could be fine? which aids Shroodle in setting up. Swords Dance allows Shroodle to reach threatening levels of Attack mention specific things you ko? Or allude to groups of things you ko? Wouldn’t hurt to be more specific in general. Gunk Shot is its strongest most reliable? Double-edge has same bp move which threatens heavy damage on most foes, while Knock Off removes Eviolite from walls like Mareanie. Alternatively, Double-Edge is an accurate STAB move that allows Shroodle to hit Mudbray and Mareanie for huge damage without burning its own Terastalization at the cost of recoil damage really like this. Acrobatics pairs well with Grassy Seed, gaining a power boost once the item after consuming grassy seed is consumed and allowing Shroodle to pressure key threats like Mienfoo and Foongus. Tera Flying provides an immunity to Ground-type attacks from Mudbray and Alolan Diglett, making it easier for Shroodle to set up and giving boosting Acrobatics the extra boost needed for late-game cleaning. On the other hand, Tera Ground with Tera Blast lets Shroodle muscle past Steel- and Rock-types such as Tinkatink and Glimmet that resist its STAB moves.

Shroodle is best supported by teammates that help it activate Unburden and cover its defensive gaps. Grookey is mandatory, setting Grassy Terrain to activate Grassy Seed, weakening weaken the power of Earthquake, and offering offer valuable passive recovery mention that it can pivot?. Shroodle appreciates Shellder’s ability to pressure bulky Ground-types such as Mudbray. In return, Shroodle threatens foes like Foongus, Mareanie, and Mienfoo that hinder Shellder’s sweep. Shroodle can also be paired with another Unburden sweeper in Drifloon that forms a Grassy Terrain core along with Grookey. Other offensive partners like Alolan Diglett can help handle foes that trouble Shroodle, such as Tinkatink and Glimmet, while also punishing defensive Terastalization attempts, such as Steel-type on Mienfoo that Shroodle can bait out.

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Extra nitpicky check bc yall were asking, great job
 
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