Six boring OU pokémon

[Magic Umbreon]

My team: please rate :)

Gengar @ Choice Scarf
Timid Speed/SpAtk
Hypnosis
Shadow Ball
Focus Blast
Thunderbolt

Jolteon @ Petaya Berry
Timid Speed/SpAtk
Substitute
Hidden Power (Ice)
Thunderbolt
Baton pass

Gyarados @ Leftovers
Standard Bulkydos EVs
Taunt
Dragon Dance
Ice Fang
Earthquake

Breloom @ Toxic orb
Standard Breloom EVs
Spore
Substitute
Focus punch
Leech seed

Cresselia @ Leftovers
Modest Def/SpAtk
Rest
Sleep Talk
Charge Beam
Psychic

Donphan @ Choice Band
Adamant HP/Atk
Earthquake
Ice Shard
Fire Fang
Stone Edge

I would highly appreciate any constructive advice however critical. This is a wifi team, so I can't change the Cresselia nature etc. Thanks for taking the time to read this.
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[Djengo]

General rules of a rmt is a good read but just make sure you put in all the needed stuff, a general explenation of each pokemons role in the team, and your missing EV's

 

[Lee]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

C'mon guys, it only takes like five minutes to read the rules!