Smogon SS OU Fanfic Chapter 1 : Before The Storm

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Chapter 1:Before The Storm
A massive ship rolled and tumbled in the waves. Tapu Koko paced the deck excitedly, taking in the salty sea air. Besides him, his brother Tapu Bulu slumped on an oversized chair. Many of his compatriots(Psykick the Medicham, Smugleaf the Serperior etc.) were assembled too. Landorus-Therian came flying toward the crowd at top speed and announced "She's here at last! Meet our new friend : Mis Isle the Dragapult!". The crowd burst into a frenzy of cheers. Confetti was thrown in large quantities. Heatran appeared on deck, creating a barrage of fireworks in the sky with Eruption.

"We'll be reaching Galar in a few minutes. We'll stop at the port to pick up the rest of our new allies!" Landorus-Therian called. Mis Isle flew down to the deck at blinding speed. Latios flew down from the crow's nest and did a loop around the ship, beckoning Mis Isle to follow. The next few minutes were a blur as the dragons flew around and chased each other.

By the time everyone had settled down, they had already reached the island. A small crowd awaited them there- they saw a Cinderace, a Corviknight and many others they did not yet know. A poster awaited them: it read " Your ship will be the last one returning. We've already picked up the rest of our new Pokemon and are en route home. We'll do introductions when we get back to the port we came from. Signed, Frog the Greninja."

The newcomers came aboard their ship, and talking and cheering resumed. As Mis Ilse was rather shy of this, she flew up to the Crow's nest where Latios had come from. The view from the nest was incredible. Waves tumbled , various fish danced in the sea, the moon casting over them a silver glow. Tommorow would be a day of much excitement, Mis Isle thought, as she lay down to take a nap.

When she woke, it was late at night. As she flew around the ship, virtually everyone was asleep. On the deck, she bumped right into a Hydreigon, who jumped with surprise."Oh, Hello, it's Dragoth. You're the newcomer here. Welcome." He choked out. "What are you doing so late at night here?" Mis Isle asked. "I're going out on patrol for enemy ships and to check on our escorts. You can come with me. It's good practice." Mis Isle beckoned for him to lead the way.
 
Very interesting story. Here are my thoughts on foreshadowed events. I have a feeling that Psykick, Smugleaf, and Frog aren't going to make it back to the continent of OU, perhaps due to the storm implied in the title. My theory right now is that Tapu Koko is going to cause the storm and destroy the ships; the legendaries could survive but may only able to return later in the crown tundra arc. Dragoth's introduction is also quite suspicious and I think it is more of a deception than truth. I don't think the main character is going to die in the second chapter, but I could see Mis Isle being framed with no alibi if a body is reported when everyone else is asleep. If the journey is sabotaged, I could see it causing a big drama between the surviving newcomers and the veterans at home, and eventually they will have to work together to suss out the identity of the true enemy among them.
 

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Very interesting story. Here are my thoughts on foreshadowed events. I have a feeling that Psykick, Smugleaf, and Frog aren't going to make it back to the continent of OU, perhaps due to the storm implied in the title. My theory right now is that Tapu Koko is going to cause the storm and destroy the ships; the legendaries could survive but may only able to return later in the crown tundra arc. Dragoth's introduction is also quite suspicious and I think it is more of a deception than truth. I don't think the main character is going to die in the second chapter, but I could see Mis Isle being framed with no alibi if a body is reported when everyone else is asleep. If the journey is sabotaged, I could see it causing a big drama between the surviving newcomers and the veterans at home, and eventually they will have to work together to suss out the identity of the true enemy among them.
conflict between the old and new guard is completely overrated.. our fearless writer is no such sellout
 
az I found the secret Charizard cameo

Chapter 1:Before The Storm
A massive ship rolled and tumbled in the waves. Tapu Koko paced the deck excitedly, taking in the salty sea air. Besides him, his brother Tapu Bulu slumped on an oversized chair. Many of his compatriots(Psykick the Medicham, Smugleaf the Serperior etc.) were assembled too. Landorus-Therian came flying toward the crowd at top speed and announced "She's here at last! Meet our new friend : Mis Isle the Dragapult!". The crowd burst into a frenzy of cheers. Confetti was thrown in large quantities. Heatran appeared on deck, creating a barrage of fireworks in the sky with Eruption.
 
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