Stop bugging me! (mono bug rmt)

[11wildy]

Ninja (Ninjask) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Speed Boost
EVs: 248 HP/8 Atk/184 Def/68 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Baton Pass
- Protect
- Substitute
- X-Scissor

My standard speed passing Ninjask, nothing special here.
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Buzzy (Scizor) (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Technician
EVs: 248 HP/252 Atk/8 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- U-turn
- Superpower
- Bullet Punch
- Pursuit

Standard CB Scizor, though I'm going to replace this with another set. I would like something with rain dance. It helps the team surviving Fire type attacks and it helps Heracross sweeping by getting the sandstorm from ttar down. It also replenices Parasects health.
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Crossfire (Heracross) (M) @ Salac Berry
Ability: Swarm
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Reversal
- Megahorn
- Swords Dance
- Endure

Endure/Reversal Heracross. This can be a real pain if set-up properly. The problem is sandstorm and priority though. Sandstorm wil be fixed by Scizor soon.
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Bagworm (Forretress) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP/112 Atk/144 Def
Impish nature (+Def, -SpA)
- Explosion
- Rapid Spin
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake

My Rapid spinner. EQ > Gyro ball because it sometimes gets boosts from Ninjask. Sets up SR and goes BOOM when his job is done.
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Beetle (Yanmega) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Speed Boost
EVs: 4 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Air Slash
- Protect
- Bug Buzz
- Hidden Power [Ground]

I love this Yanmega <3. Protect to get a free speed boost and Air slash/Bug Buzz for stab. HP ground is for those Fire types, mainly Heatran.
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Parasite (Parasect) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Dry Skin
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Spore
- Swords Dance
- X-Scissor
- Seed Bomb

Once this thing gets a few speed boosts from Ninjask it's a beast! Spore first and then Sword dance if the opponent switches. If he doesn't switch, Sword dance another time, then go sweep!

So yeah, this is the team. I would like some help with the Scizor Rain dance set. I don't know what else to run.

Please rate :D

 

[KingdomBlade]

Mono teams are useless in OU battle unless your'e in some mono tournament. Are you sure your'e using this is competitive battling? Heatran will murder you. 1 to 6. You may try to have a counter in Yanmega, but that can be revenge killed immediately after.

It's okay for a Mono team, but Parasect is a no. No way you can sweep on that thing. Try using some other sweeper, perhaps a Pinsir.

 

[xx1up]

Forretress
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Sassy (+SpDef, -Spd)
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 252Hp, 4Att, 252SpDef
Moves:
Gyro Ball
Rapid Spin
Explosion
Stealth Rock

Keep Gyro ball over EQ, you dont have to baton pass to Forretress, you can just switch? Lol. The SpDef and Hp EVs, make Forretress very sturdy SpDef wise, and can even take certain fire attacks. If you Really dont want to SpDef, use Relaxed (+Def, -Spd) and make sure to get rid of all Spd IVs either way.


Youve got a good idea in Parasect, but Grass/Bug? Horrible Typing, thats not much coverage. Thats a cool Rain dance idea you got going there, but Parasect isnt sturdy enough to efficiently use Dry Skin. Also, maybe a different player could use Rain Dance, Scizor has no idea what support means :D


Pinsir is a good option, Swords Dance, and then you have X-Scissor, Superpower, Stone Edge/Rock Slide, and Earthquake too choose from. You need a rock move, your weak to flying, and they resist/immune every other mentioned move.

Hope i helped.

 

[Shizzle]

This team doesn't work, simple as that.

How do you deal with Heatran and Rotom-H? Especially since Heatran is likely to top the usage leaderboards in the next month.

 

[Bloo]

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